Date: 01/05/09 07:40 am Title: Chapter 22
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NEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! THAT'S NOT FAIR!
I WANT THEM TO CLEAR THINGS UP!! I WANT TOM AND BILL SEE EACHOTHER AND THAT WANNABE FATHER OF BILLS SHOULD CURL INTO THE HOLE AND DIE!!!
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Gimme more please (A) xD
Author's Response: Haha yes more is on the way!
Date: 01/05/09 06:49 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow... I'm sitting here, trying not to cry =.=" Beautiful chapter. Loved it! I wanna smack that man's face soooooo baaaad.... xD Keep writing! :D
Biggie fan ^_^
Author's Response: Yay! Fans are golden! Haha thanks for reading and reviewing ^-^
Date: 01/05/09 05:29 am Title: Chapter 22
:( * cries *
Hella depressing start to my day, lol
Hope things get better next chapter. Poor Bill. Aww.
Author's Response: Things will get better, possibly... Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/05/09 04:17 am Title: Chapter 22
WAIT WHAT!!!! NOOOO NEEEIIINNN!!!!
I wnat to kill that man now!!!
Give me more!
Author's Response: More is on the way!
Date: 01/05/09 03:57 am Title: Chapter 22
Ugh. Did't see that coming. Now I'm depressed.
I hope Tom sees Bill again soon! Don't want Bill slipping into some kinda insane fit of depression. DX
Lovin' it ^-^
Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I will =] Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/05/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 22
T.T .....So uhh... whens the next update??... >,< Oh how this was really short >.<
Author's Response: Next update is probably tonight or tomorrow at the lastest... Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/05/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 22
plz update soon..thx=]
Author's Response: Yes I willsss!!
Date: 01/05/09 01:02 am Title: Chapter 22
"Are you more then just a random hit-run and feel guilty driver?" – O.O
"I think you know. You fucking fag." – *bites lips* um, I’m not sure Tom’s ready for that yet…
"No, Sir. I feel nothing like that toward Bill." Tom said. It was a convincing lie. Little did Tom know, it also convinced someone else in the room other then Mr. Kaulitz. The dark hair fourteen year old boy had listened to the whole thing. – damn it Bill!
"I want you to stay away from my son." Tom gaped. - *groans* mmmmhhh NO! bad!
Tom would see Bill again, he hoped... – he better!
Author's Response: THanks for the reviewsssssss! They = Love ^-^
Date: 01/05/09 12:51 am Title: Chapter 22
Heh that WAS depressing.. I hope they can fix it soon before we lose bill again... poor things... I love this fic and love how fast you update and can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: More is on the Way! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/05/09 12:46 am Title: Chapter 22
aww =[ that is horrible. I wanna kick Bill's father. lol
and yesh I'm a devoted reviewer XP
Author's Response: Devoted Reviewers = Love. Haha
Date: 01/04/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
ooh... it's finally time to meet the parents. lol. i can't wait for the next udate, you've seriously gotten me hooked!!!
Author's Response: Haha Yay! That was my intention all along *shifty eye* hehe thanks for reviewing ^_^
Date: 01/04/09 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 21
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Yes! Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 01/04/09 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
Peach, just like Bill's skin... – Tom wants Bill so much *shakes head* that’s all he can think about, all he can see.
"You come in here an awful lot..." – people in customer service don’t care if you come a lot…who is this girl? Is she related to Bill? OR is it Tom’s sister who we don’t know? The anticipation of knowing there’s more is so amazing because we only get the information that Tom does. *giggles* and *bounces*
The door clicked behind Tom and the young female sighed. She had gained a new regular customer but around the same time she had lost another customer. The woman thought maybe they had something to do with each other but she guessed not. Sighing she turned back to the magazine on the counter. – Bill!
Farther – this is your one major error that keeps driving me knutz. You use farther in stead of further. I’ve seen it three times for sure, not that I remember which chapters but they are there!
Tom didn't have sexual thoughts about Bill, well until Andreas put them in there... - *cruel giggle*
He let out an audible sigh and the mist from his warm breath hung in the air for a moment being dispersing. – good descriptive line, it’s nice that details like this aren’t lost on you.
His head was downcast. His hands wrapped around the vase tightly. He let himself in and the silence was deafening. There were no words. Tom peeked out of his peripheral vision to see Bill was asleep and that meant Tom was alone. Alone with this man Bill called 'dad'. – this paragraph is beautifully worded.
Author's Response: Thankies for the review!!! I guess I do use farther... and I use it a lot... Haha i'll be sure to look out for that from now on *nods* I loves thatyou point out small things like that it makes me happy =]
Date: 01/04/09 10:13 am Title: Chapter 21
I could literally feel the tension in the room when Tom walked in....what a great scene.
Author's Response: THank yous!!!!!!!
Date: 01/04/09 08:55 am Title: Chapter 21
Your completely evil, you know that, right? This chapter was, like all the other 20 before it, excellent. I can't wait for your next chapter, which I'm sure will follow the trend. ;]
Author's Response: I know XD Thanks for the review a new chapter should be out sometime today...
Date: 01/04/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 21
Dam dam dam daaaaaaamm!!!
I love this story! It's so... Wow! Just... Wow! Can't wait to the next chappie is out :D And I LOVE how fast you get out the one chapter after the other! It makes more people wanting to read it since they never have to wait for too long :) Big fan of this, I am ^^D
Author's Response: YAY! I loves fans! hehe Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/04/09 05:35 am Title: Chapter 21
I love it! :) Perfect! Now gimme more Bill and Tom together talking in next chap, pleasee! :)
Author's Response: Haha, perhaps........ I love to leave my readers in suspense *insert evil laugh here* but seriously, thanks for being a loyal reader and reviewer!
Date: 01/04/09 05:33 am Title: Chapter 4
I hope his dad don't kill him. Tom is suffering enough from his own self-decimation.
Author's Response: No, No. His dad won't kill him... hopefully. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/04/09 05:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom is so depressed. ;_; Regret seems to be his only friend now.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I have like 15 chapters of Tom wallowing in self pity... Haha thanks for the review.
Date: 01/04/09 05:05 am Title: Chapter 21
wait so bills dad hates tom? that aint right btw hugs for updating
Author's Response: Yeah, but he kind of has a right to. Ya know? Any way thanks for readinfand reviewing!