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Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bill, Georg and Gustav beat him up? That's terrible. I can't believe they even got into the hospital and got away w/ hurting him. That's kinda impossible.

Author's Response: Yeah a bit hard, but not impossible. It was night and for the most part they were semi quiet but Tom came to the rescue! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

Tom's in love w/ Bill? I believe it but how can Andi be sure it's not just guilt?

And why's Georg so mad? He can just pretend he doens't like Tom anymore and life can go on.

Author's Response: Andreas knows all *wooooo noises go here* haha and I kinda made Georg seem like he only had two good friends to start with, Tom and Gustav so he kinda caught what was supposed to be his friend in a lie on Andreas' street. I guess you could say Georg was a little jealous and a little angry about being lied too. I made Georg be the 'bad ass' because whats a story without action? Thanks for the reviews and I loves the questions

Reviewer: rhea_allei Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 22

ahhhh!!! terrible, terrible dad! poor bill... poor tom... :(

Author's Response: I know right? =[ Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 14

Fillers are fine. Nice intro to Georg. Charming guy... not really.

Andi's being nice. Lucky Tom.

Author's Response: Yesh!!!!!!! You are my 200th review! Thankies a thousand thank yous!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 13

That's quite the relationship they've got going there. Bill's got a crush on Tom! that's so cute. He's got the biggest heart in the world I guess.

Author's Response: Bill is cute hehe Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 12

That's quite the Bill story but it fits in perfectly for someone like him. I really hope he gets better. I wish there was something Tom could do. Simone's really nice.

Author's Response: Tom's doing all he can, poor Tom, poor Bill... Thanks for reviewing again!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh no! That's not good at all! Poor Bill. I thought he was getting better but I guess now... I hope Tom finds him ok and everything. I hope he can hear Tom.

Author's Response: Awww Tom is going to the end of the earth for him haha Thanks again.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 10

Well, honestly I felt it ended on a too light note considering the gravity of what's happened but then again Tom did just make up w/ his best friend. That was touching. And Andi's parents seemed nice. Wonder what'll happen if they find out...

Author's Response: Hmmm... idea for a later chapter maybe?

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow, Tom was really a different person before the accident. You're doing a really good job showing that. I hope Andi's willing to listen. I wouldn't blame him for throwing Tom out though.

Author's Response: Andreas is protrayed as a compassinate person in my story so.......

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 8

I really like how this is causing Tom to totally turn his life around. He's reflecting, thinking, realizing the difference between good and bad decisions. Trying to repair the damage he's done.

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to show that as best I could without making Tom seem like a totally bad person... Thanks for the awesome reviews, they is love!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

He's awake! That's a good sign, his mind is working, the doctors must know that. And he seem really forgiving of Tom. That's good. Really good.

Author's Response: Yes little Bill is a kind hearted person haha

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

At least they didn't say his name. Maybe the court will be understanding? Maybe... I hope Bill wakes up soon. That'll be really interesting.

Author's Response: Yes it is indeed... Thanks again for reviewing

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really like Tom's dad. He was wonderfully portrayed. Question though, do you have a beta? I've been noticing mistakes that a beta should catch. I know it's late in the game...

Author's Response: No, I don't have a beta, I kinda pefer to do the work on my own, but if you do catch mistakes (and I know I make quite a few) can you tell me? and I'll change it ^_^ Thanks again for reviewing

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm so glad Bill's mother was nice, his dad was to be expected. You keep slipping in more and more about Tom, you're doing a great job. LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thanks ^-^ I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

Well this first meeting isn't going to go well, but at least he's trying. I hope Bill's OK.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, New reviewers are golden!!!!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like how paniced tom is, you are doing a great job.

Author's Response: Thanks again, thank you for the lovely reviews!

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

amazing set up

Author's Response: Thankies!!!!!

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow. Just... wow. I don't know what to say...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I just read all 22 chapters, it's nice to see he's stopped wallowing in self-pity, but I'm pretty depressed now even though I figured this was coming. This fic is so awesome, I can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Yay new reviews are awesometastical! Hehe Thanks for the review and more is on the way!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 08:56 am Title: Chapter 22

I figured Bill's dad wouldn't want Tom to come around anymore...but it still is so depressing!

Author's Response: Yes it is =[ Thanks for the reviews!

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