Date: 01/11/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter 24
can't wait!
Author's Response: I just posted chapter 25 =] Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/10/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 24
You went a little description happy or something at the beginning. It was ok though. I've been waiting for you ya know. Ever since I started this I got hooked. I love Andi. He's so funny, but he's right it is like babysitting.
Author's Response: I go a little description happy a lot, I likes to set the scene =) Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/09/09 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 24
Keep going!
Author's Response: I will Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/09/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 24
Poor thing! Aww I really hope it gets better for him soon! I hate seeing him so sad and frustrated! Thanks for the update! I wuved it... I hope your house gets better soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you loved the chappie!!! =]
Date: 01/09/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 24
awww...i really like this story...more soon bitte?
Author's Response: More soon, yes! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/09/09 09:04 am Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Poor and stupid Tomi *sigh* He needs Bill *pout* very much I would say xD I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Yes, more is on the way! Thanks for the reviews!!
Date: 01/09/09 05:39 am Title: Chapter 24
I'm not the biggest fan of those chapters where Tom only thinks and goes somewhere. Or is with Andy...
But I still like that story so much. Just.... ugh. That's my favorite story and you're my favorite writer ever, you know that? :D
So... I'm waiting for the next chapter what should be on the way already. xD
Author's Response: I know, the Tom and Andreas chapters are a bit slow and uneventful... Woot! I'm glad I'm you favorite writer *Glomps* And the next chapter is on its way! =D
Date: 01/09/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 24
Oops looks like I tried to beta this one…sorry.
Tom took steps across the parking lot; every step seemed to take longer to pry himself away from Bill. …- eeehhh awkward try…Tom walked across the parking lot, each step seemed harder to take as he walked away from Bill…??? Better?
Stopped…stopped too much repeats. - The tears had stopped – The tears had ceased….
The thought pissed Tom off. – The thought that had upset Tom before, now pissed him off.
When it finally stopped, Tom looked at his hand. There were cuts and blood everywhere. – nope! When it finally stopped, Tom looked at his hand; it looked like it had been through a meat grinder.
Self mutilation which is what this had come to. Tom couldn't bend his fingers and he mentally sighed. – Nope … Tom couldn't move his hand with out shooting pain, he sighed inwardly. Self mutilation is this what it had come to?
He wanted Bill, but Bill was a boy not to mention he was underage. – nope again….He wanted Bill, but Bill was underage not to mention that he was a boy.
Tom knowing Andreas' family almost as good as his own…- bader English… Tom knowing Andreas' family almost as well as his own;
…
I like how confused poor Tom is!
I’m still worried about Georg going after Andreas…I know it’s going to happen and I’m all tense waiting for that chapter to come.
I beta-ed…there was more I could do but this is the freaking comments section. *eye roll* It’s not big stuff just things that catch my eye and bother me. *shrugs* I have a problem what can I say.
I can’t wait for the next chapter when Tom talks to Andreas and then goes back to the hospital and sees Bill.
I can’t wait to have Bill actually talk to Tom. It’s hilarious that they are the world to each other and they’ve never talked to each other. *giggles*
Author's Response: No, No! Don't be sorry I love when you beta! Because believe it or not I actually do use what you say. =] I know I had a lot of awkward sentances in this chapter, I realized that when I was writing it but I wanted to get it out last night, I had to leave again before the river creasted... So I know there was a lot of mistakes... Thanks for reviewing, Your reviews are always the besest!
Date: 01/09/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 24
keep it comin!
Author's Response: On the way!
Date: 01/09/09 01:27 am Title: Chapter 24
why outta ur house....i luvz u...where u live?
plz update soon i luvz this thx=]
Author's Response: I live in washington, I was staying with my friend and my mom wanted to get out because she had to work and didn't want to get flooded in, so when it started going over the roads we left. And an update is on the way!
Date: 01/08/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 23
O_O OMG...I totally love this story...I think I'm in love O_O PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Oh Yay! New reviews are love! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/08/09 03:14 am Title: Chapter 23
Gods, I need more. Please!
Author's Response: More is on the way!
Date: 01/07/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 23
Oooooooooooooh no woman. You are NOT leaving it like this! THE SUSPENSE IS GONNA KILL ME!!
Author's Response: haha my goal is to NOT kill my readers, thanks for the review!
Date: 01/06/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 23
Congrats on over 200 reviews, and yay me for bing you 200th! Lol! This is a great story and I have to say I love you for updating so fast!
I hope Tom comes back before Bill slips too far away.
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you like it ^-^ Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 01/06/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 23
keep it comin!
Author's Response: It's on the way!
Date: 01/06/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 23
D:
Poor Bill. I can just picture how happy he'll feel when he sees Tom again.
Love this, but your giving me serious mood swings. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Aww thanks, it'll get better. An update is in the horizon. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/06/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 23
aww T.T *devoted reader is sad*
this is so, heartbreaking. T.T
Author's Response: *Loyal writer is sorry* Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/06/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 23
plz update soon.thx=]
Author's Response: Yes of coursern
Date: 01/06/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wow, that chapter was beautiful! I can't wait until he goes to Bill again :)
Author's Response: Aww Thanks.
Date: 01/06/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 23
*crying* oh my god... why!!!! this chapter was sooooooo sad... I can't wait to see how Tom goes about solving this problem... Keep it up XD
Author's Response: Thanks, I will. =]