EEE! Why oh why would you end it THERE! Ooh I hope everything works out okay... I'll be on the edge of my seat untill the next chapter! Keep it up, you rawk!!

Author's Response: Yay! I wills ^-^ A new chapter is on the way =]

Beta crazy ISA...

"There, try to maintain your anger level or you're going to put in a mental hospital." Andreas grinned as he finished bandaging Tom's mangled hand. Tom sneered at him and Andreas laughed. Tom snatched his hand back from his friend. – Oi! This sentence is all kinds of crazy, took me three reads to sort it out (then again it is 5am here) …. "There,” Andreas grinned as he finished bandaging Tom's mangled hand. “Try to maintain your anger level or you're going to get put in a mental hospital." Tom sneered at him and Andreas laughed. Tom snatched his hand back from his friend.

Tom had been at Andreas' nearly four hours. – beta fun… Tom had been at Andreas' for nearly four hours.

He had sat and listened to Andreas bitch about what he did to his hand for hours. – beta fun … Instead of leaving he had sat and listened to Andreas bitch about what he did to his hand.

"Speaking of fucking, have you and Bil-" Andreas began; as he leaned back onto the plush carpet, palms supporting his frame.
"You finish that thought and you're a dead man." Tom hissed. – ha ha

"Not really." Andreas sighed, "But if I don't, you might jump off a bridge." He grinned. Tom's pervious glare returned. – Andi’s such an ass, it’s so well done! *shakes head and laughs breathily*

Andreas slid down the banister while Tom walked lazily behind him. Andreas' mother peeked out of the kitchen to glare at her son and Andreas put on a sheepish smile. – beta fun (word order) -…Tom lazily walked behind him. Andreas' mother peeked out of the kitchen to glare at her son and Andreas smiled sheepishly back at her.

"Well ya know, not every fourteen year old that walks into your life impacts you like this. I just want to meet him, just once to see if you're good enough for him." Andreas let out a small laugh as Tom socked him in the shoulder. – first off…Oh! *scoffs* burn!... beta fun… ya know, it’s not every day that a fourteen year walks into your life impacts you like this. (just a little easier to read)

The rest of the car ride was silent other the radio humming a soft tune out of the back speakers. – good detil.

Thud.
The door shut with the muffled thump behind him. – reverse these. Because when I read this I though that he had run into the wall or something. Ha ha

He pushed the button for the fourth story. – fourth floor (hospitals don’t have story s)

He's been moved to the second floor, Room 182, as I recall." Tom grinned. – ok drives me nuts… room numbers in America…I’m not sure where you are cause it makes a difference, but room numbers are as follows: floor then room number…so if I’m on the 6th floor my room number will start with 6, on the 8th floor my room starts with 8, on the 32nd floor my room number starts with 32… so Bill’s new room number should be 282. Ok done!

the minutes until he could listen to Bill. - beta fun… minutes probably not maybe… Tom was using his steps as a measurement of time knowing that with each step he got closer to Bill closer to being able to hear Bill’s voice.

Tom only hoped Bill didn't hate him, but that look from earlier told him different... – beta fun … Tom only hoped Bill didn't hate him, but the sad expression on Bill’s face was haunting his thoughts and making him worry...

Love it! I hope you know I wouldn't bother to offer suggestions if I didn't.

Author's Response: I loves you suggestions, consturutive critisium (sp?) Is always a plus =] I'm you like beta my story cause it makes it that much better. Thanks for the awesomely long-atastic reviews! Hehe ^-^

Great update! I'm all excited to see Tom and Bill actually talking to each other. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! Talking *gasp* Haha thanks again for the reviewsssss!!!!!!!

You know you're such a meanie :P All those cliffies. I can't wait for Tom to see Bill again. Update soon. I'm sure I'll be suffering from withdrawal if you don't. :P I loved it, but by now I guess that's a given. :)

Author's Response: Hehe Thanks for the reviews! I loves my readers and their lovely reviews!!!

tsk tsk, seriously tom! what did the wall ever do to you? hahah

Author's Response: Hehe, it existed! Thanks for the reviews!

i swear if i hadnt known that bill felt the same for tom i would be thinking....this would have been an awesome fic if tom's feelings changed from love to obsession and became bills stalker lmao

Author's Response: Thats a little creepy haha... okay my story is a little creepy now. Tom does kinda have an obbsession and they haven't even really talked yet... Thanks for the lovely reviews!

oh snap! :O

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

hahahahaha love andreas :D

Author's Response: Yes, me too ^-^

*squeal* cutest thing i've ever read though one couldnt talk and was in a hospital lol

Author's Response: Haha I went for fluff in this chapter ^-^

oooh tom's in for it now >:D about the love at forst sight thing not about georg O.o

Author's Response: Yes, yes he is.