*hasnt read for a while and i really sorry!*

I love it so much! it gives me a warm fuzy feeling on the inside, but i'm still in anticipation as to what will happen with his dad!!!

Author's Response: Aww Thanks so much!

OH gosh... you stopped right there... I love it... It's so amazing.. I absolutely love Tommi.

Author's Response: Thankies! Tom = love.

This was an amazing chapter! It was so sweet. I'm glad it's all "official" now

Author's Response: Fluff is equal too loves! Thanks for reviewing!

plz update soon...thx=] i luvz u

Author's Response: But of course!

thanks for the update.
i really hope bill and tom can finally be together!!!

Author's Response: Perhaps.... Thanks for reviewing!

Congrats on the feature!
I'm so happy they're officially together.
So pedophilish, yet so cute.
I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank You!!!! And an update is coming soon!

amazingness.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews!

Tom lay awake long after Bill had fallen back asleep. He sat in his usual – you can’t lay awake if you are sitting up. How about…Tom stayed awake long after….

That hand was pulled across Bill's stomach, - how about…. Which was pulled across…

If this were a girl, Tom would've long ago been to second base. - *giggles*

but now it was the most soothing thing in the world. – don’t forget satisfying thing in the world, your talking about urges here, urges which don’t need be fulfilled so….. it was the most soothing and satisfying thing in the world.

breathing mask had been placed back on Bill and Tom began to not like it so much. – how about… and Tom began to loathe it’s very existence.

He placed his chin in his hand and let out a sigh as he remembered why Bill was even in the hospital in the first place. It was all on him. – oh sweetie partly your fault partly not your fault…is he worrying about the future at all like if and when they put him in jail. This isn’t his first arrest they aren’t likely going to be lenient. And he did a hit an run that’s O.O really bad.

"God Bill..." Tom said as the smile broke through. Bill was beautiful and Tom was sure that the innocent teen had no idea what effect he had on Tom. – awh he’s so in trouble, head over heals in love *giggles*

Honey meeting chocolate; a chemical reaction. – AWESOME! *melts*

Both teen glanced down at their hands. – teens, plural.

They were in pure bliss, simply sitting here with each other. – awh! *grins*

"Bill will you be my... boyfriend...?" – OMG that’s soo goofy this story is sooo all about fluff! LOL I usually like the harder stuff but this one is too hard to resist. It’s skittles can’t stop no matter what!

Maybe it was too much to have Tom run over Bill and then he wanted to date him? – odd sentence try this… Maybe it was too much to have Tom run over Bill and then want to date him?

Bill grinned inwardly, his knight in shining armor turned out to be a thug in gangster clothes. – *giggles* so funny!

But when he was with Tom; he life, - grammar… But when he was with Tom; his life,

Tom smirked and his bolt twitched in an upward motion. – his bolt? What? *scratches head confused* bolt?

Author's Response: Yay! I always smile when reading your reviews hehe. I shall change some stuff...Now! *goes to change bad grammer she didn't catch.* You know the bolt through his lip. Thanks again for the awesometastical supermagnifent reviews! haha

yay he he, i know you just updated, but it's just so good that i need more XD it's just so adorable!! love it xx

Author's Response: Haha thanks ^-^ More is on the way!

OMG! I made it!! YAY!! I'm SO proud!!!

Reader Comments:

Because this fic is so beautiful and pure. There are so many emotions... so much love and caring. And then there is hate. Hate of who has hurt your love. I think this fic really should be featured. It's different in a very good way, but it gets not as much attention as it's worth. :)
- Karin

Omg! That was meeh!! Wow. I'm so happy it got featured. And a little bit because of me! Yayy!!


And the chapter was sooo beautiful! I love the way you always describe these feelings that Tom or Bill have . It's just simply so perfect. This is my favorite fic for real. And omg! I'm still so proud that I helped it to get featured! *goes ego*

Author's Response: I. Fucking. Love. You. Haha Thanks for getting my featured! *hugs* Thanks for reviewing! Lots of love - Misa =]