Tom's hand was threaded through her son's fingers and their faces were dangerously close to one another. She was shocked to say the least, but she was glad Bill had someone, anyone. – good they have an adult on their side!

Simone remembered when they took in that foster kid, what was his name? Georg? Jorg loved Georg, he was the son he always wanted but never had, instead he had Bill. – look there’s my idea *puffs chest out proudly and grins*

Simone smiled sadly, maybe Tom was put her for her little boy. – beta moment….put here for her little boy.

Simone couldn't deny that she was slightly shocked. Bill after all is only fourteen, Tom's nineteen. It wasn't normal but Bill wasn't normal. If Bill was normal he'd be falling for thirteen or fourteen year old girls, with pig tails and pink sweaters. But Bill was falling for a nineteen year old boy, with dreadlocks and baggy clothes. – nice parallels

Eventually Bill watched as the pacing stopped. Why was Georg here anyway? What did he want? Bill watched the older guy flick the cigarette somewhere and at first he thought nothing of it. As Georg walked away, he finally let out a sigh; that was until the orange glow of flames lapped at his door... - *giggles* my idea pops into the story again but totally with your words well done by the way!!!

He remembered that Georg's cigarette was the one that started that fire. People died in that fire. Georg killed them. Bill could help but think it was partly his fault. His fault people died. – NICE tie back to make Bill feel guilty!!!

Tom smile softly as he leaned down and kissed Bill softly on the lips. – WAIT A MINUTE! He can kiss him through a mask? Bill had that face mask on his face and couldn’t talk but Tom can kiss through it? Hey we need a sentence in here to clear this bit up!

He felt Bill stiffen at this and he moved away.
"Did I do something wrong?" Tom questioned, he felt stupid asking but he'd never had a boyfriend before. He didn't want to fuck up this thing he had with Bill. – awh so cute!!!

And I got the idea from one of the many, many, many fics I’ve read. I got the inspiration from Foster Child by Diglossia. But I’m not sure that my inspiration from another fic gets credit… or perhaps that I get credit for getting inspiration from another fic…*screws up face to think* Perhaps Diglossia gets credit for her inspiring me to inspire you.

Author's Response: Shit, I forgot about the mask for that one sentance..... As far as the credit goes, yous gots it XD I've read Diglossia's story it's Bill thats the foster kid, but in your idea it was Georg and I is gonna twist it a bit.... Thanks for the awesome review (like always)

Nice development! I'm kinda afraid to find out more about Bill's past, but I'm also really curious... *sighs*

Author's Response: Haha and that inlies the problem. Thanks for reviewing!

You deserved the feature! This is a good story and I like how cute they are. however... their age gap does pose a problem, 14 and 19 is a long way off. Especially then. If they were 20 and 25 it might not seems as bad, I know it's messed up logic but I could use psychology to back it up if I had to, and the laws. I think they're cute but I also feel like they should wait until Bill's a little older. at least 16, maybe older, but that would take away from the story...

Author's Response: Yeah, but it's kinda the point of the story, it's wrong so they shouldn't be together but it's not stopping them. In a twisted way, it's cute, no? Thanks for the reviews!!!

ya'know , I have read alot of TH fiction but this is probably one of my favorites

Author's Response: Yay! That makes me happy!

FUCKING ASSHOLES TRIES TO KILL BILL!!
IF THIS WAS IN REAL LIFE I WOULD
COME AFTER THEM AND RIP THEIR BALL OUT!
I love this story by the way :)

Author's Response: Bipolar response? Haha Thanks for the reviews!

This story is awesome! Do you know how to get it so that it will email me when there's an update? Does this site have something like that? Sorry, this is the first time I've been on here, and the first story I've read on here, so I don't know much about the site yet.

Author's Response: Oh Yay! I feel special that this is the first story you've read on here! As far as I know there isn't a email thing to message when theres an update but I do update often and if you check under the recent section new story chapters will appear there.

DON'T MAKE TOM GO AWAY!! NOOO!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing =]

Dude! Why is it so short!!
Awesome and wonderful stories should be
long and stuff.
But neither way I still love your
stories dude!!

Author's Response: I try to update quickly so that's why their pretty short... I'm glad you like it though!

NOOOO!! DON'T LET ANDREAS GET HURT!!

Author's Response: He's safe, for now...

Damn! Bill is like an angel on earth
or something he is so nice... :( sad story.

Author's Response: He's Tom's angel =]