I hope Bill will get better, I really like your story =D

Author's Response: I'm glad you do =]

=D !

Author's Response: ^_^

Excellent chapter =D

Author's Response: Thanks

I hope Bill survived =S

Author's Response: Of course XD

i just read this whole amazing story in one sitting or should i say layin cuz im layin on my bed!!!!! this is soooo amazing hope u can keep on writing cuz it is amazing one of my favs in the makin!!!!!!
THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!!!!

Author's Response: Awe thanks =] I'm glad you like it! I will keep writing I just kinda fell out of writing for a while :/ but I will post more =D

if when you write things like "Tom shuttered" you mean he trembled, or he shook, then the correct way to spell it is shuDDered.
that being said, i wanna make it clear that i like your fic. the way you describe tom`s guilt is rather powerful

Author's Response: Sorry lol sometimes I mix those two up =\ I'm glad you like it though =]

great story, loved it so far!It´s really sweet and the characters so well written it feels like you know them. Hope you´ll be able to update it soon, thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks =] I've been really busy lately but I'll try to update soon

awsomeawsomeawsomeawsome

Author's Response: Glad you like it. =]

Nurses legally can't tell people about patients medical situation. Only the medical staff responsible for the specific patient/parents/legal guardians/spouses/persons authorized by the patient or legal guardians are given that information. I'm in nursing school and that nurse would be fired on the spot for telling Tom that information. Also giant gashes two to three inches deep in the thigh aren't consistent with being hit by a car. Bill would have bled to death in 60 seconds from a wound that deep in his thigh. Also where are his legs broken? Which bones? Nurses know these things and would explain what bones (if she could actually have told him). If either femur is broken Tom would have been going over 70 miles an hour to even crack it. Also despite how short the twins were at 14 the bumper a car is roughly knee height and a blunt object (not a sharp puncture producing object) and Tom has said numerous times Bill ran out in front of the car. Meaning Bill was going in a perpendicular direction from Tom and the cars force would have gone on one side, like most people who are hit by cars. He wouldn't have gone flying away from the car. The bumper would have hit him at around knee height and since its been stated several times that Tom was speeding his body would have gone up onto the car as Tom attempted to break. Having only leg fractured (shattered is not a medical term and therefore you don't use it to talk about injuries), his Pelvis (which is common when hit by a car at high speeds) and some ribs broken is much more consistent with being hit by a car. A fractured pelvis is much more likely if he was hit while running across the cars path. His arm would also most likely be broken. He still wouldn't go flying away from the car unless Tom was in the act of stopping and most of the force the car produced transferred to Bill. Tom said he didn't have time to stop in the earlier chapters so Bill would have gone up onto the hood or under the car depending where his weight was centered. While running he would have most likely gone up onto the hood and hit his head on the windshield. To be in a "comatose state" (which isn't a term Comatose is the act of being in a Coma ) he would have had to have severe head trauma. Which according to your nurse (who still couldn't have told Tom any of this)he didn't have. The only injuries to described consistent with the crash situation you described is the bruising, internal injuries, one of the leg and possibly the wrist. The injuries sound much more like the results of a beating from the waist up and being run over by a large slow moving vehicle. Fast moving objects projects its force forward because the acceleration has to over come frictional and gravitational force and the downward force is reduced so the weight on the legs would be more likely to have cracks or clean breaks. Slow moving has less forward directional force and more downward force which would cause the "shatter" effect to the fractures. Sorry this is so long, I get really annoyed when people who have no idea about trauma related injuries just insert random injuries because their can't research it to get their facts straight. I'm currently doing my clinical work in the trauma department and I know what someone whose been hit by a fast moving car looks like. I really like the story over all. Just don't randomly pull injuries out of thin air, leaving it at he was on a respirator (which you didn't point out in the last chapter) and in the ICU (which isn't closed rooms because the nurses constantly monitor them so ICU generally has clear walls so the nurses can see them at all times) would have explained just how bad things are perfectly fine. I still love the premise and the characterization of Tom.

Author's Response: Where were you when I was writing this? You could've helped me so much! Haha. As you can proabably tell, I'm not educated in the medical field...

haha i love this story
lol
when i arrived at the end i was whhhahattt????
it cant be finished!!!!
im not even at the 46th chapter yet
!!
lol
i cant waiit for moree!!!
XD

Author's Response: =] More is coming hopefully soon!