Date: 01/31/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
kinda confused at the end. why would she look old.why did he disappear.
Author's Response: remember when tom sighed and that she said that he looked old??? well yeah <33. if you wanna find out why he left. you would have to wait lol
Date: 01/31/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
total cliffhanger.. grr you.
more please
Date: 01/07/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 4
You should take out the last chapter from the beginning of this one so it makes more sense. there are two chapters in this page.. very good though
Date: 12/23/08 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
he's such a tease. good job. more please!!!
Author's Response: that's how i lke them. ^^
Date: 12/23/08 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG that was hot. more. now. please.
Date: 12/22/08 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 2!
That last part was confusing but it was still good. keep em coming
Date: 12/18/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
keep it comin!
Author's Response: will do!!!
Date: 12/18/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmm.. sounds interesting.. im gonna add this to my favs so i can find out what happens.
keep the chapters coming!
Author's Response: thanks