Date: 01/20/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Flying & Landing In Paradise
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 01/18/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 21-Leaving For The Honeymoon
Loved it can't wait till the next one.
Author's Response: Danke Schon, i am running outta characters :( i might do a sequel after this one i dont know yet hehe
Date: 01/17/08 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Baby Tiami
Loved it I hope you update it soon.
Date: 12/29/07 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Night Before The Wedding
Loved it hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: I will :)
Date: 12/29/07 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 16 - I've Been Thinking
Loved it can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Danke :)
Date: 12/29/07 09:23 am Title: Chapter 13 - Let The SunBathing Begin
Loved it hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: New chapter is up from now on i will be writing a new chapter/chapters everyday :)
Date: 12/28/07 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Let The Vacation Begin
i loved it I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: I will :)
Date: 12/22/07 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Bad Tom
I like the way the sorty is going,but maybe you could make the chapter a little longer? you might wanna think about structure, which would make it easier to read, but other than that, great story, keep writing!