Date: 01/22/08 03:49 pm Title: Moving Forward
Lovely ending chapter! Thank you for writing such an engrossing story ^^
Author's Response: Ha, and thank youuuuu for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
Date: 01/22/08 03:43 pm Title: Moving Forward
*Cries*
That was so good!!
OMg!! *breathes*
i can't believe it's over. I'm going to miss this fic so much!!
great job!
Author's Response: Aw, kat, take a deep breath. ^_^ They've all got to end; it's inevitable. I'm so happy you loved this story sooo much. =D Thanks!
Date: 01/22/08 03:31 pm Title: Moving Forward
Ohhh... It's over :( I have absolutely adored this story and I'm sad its come to an end. This was an awesome chapter, you had me worried for a second with Bill's reaction to the DNA results! The inclusion of the dream/flashback of their first meeting worked really well too. The ending didn't suck, it was really nice and tied up all the loose ends! Well done!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad the last chapter worked. =D Thank you!
Date: 01/22/08 03:17 pm Title: Moving Forward
How could you be disapointed at such a wonderful ending? You left enough ambiguity to let the reader make up their own ending, but you led them in the direction you wanted them to go. Awesome job. I enjoyed taking the journey with you, and I can't wait for your next fic!
Author's Response: Aw thank you, it means a lot. & Thanks for being with me all along the way. =D
Date: 01/20/08 04:27 pm Title: Sometimes There's Just No Explanation
Personally, I think the story has reached its intended conclusion. Anything more is a bonus if it can be worked into the current storyline. Any divergence would detract from the original storyline and fudge up the continuity. If there is a need for that, I'd suggest a spin-off fic. For this one, it'd be best to just tie up the loose ends and get some closure. IMO, the main closure or final episode for this storyline could have been when Jorg realised that Bill was back. But now, heheh, you're creative. Go, girl!
Author's Response: I have the feeling that you're right. Adding any more random drama could very well ruin the story, so the ending is definitely near. =D Thanks for the review!!
Date: 01/20/08 07:28 am Title: Sometimes There's Just No Explanation
Ouw! This chapter was amazing!! I loved it very much, very good written!
//..And with gifts like that, none of them needed any goods made of plastic and wrapped up in printed paper..//
I loved that sentence! It was beautiful and really gave a clear explanation to how they were feeling! And then Jorg saw them -.-' Nicht gut.. And I can understand he was shocked, but he kicked them out and it's x-mas and all! Poor Bill and Tom, but hey they could kiss in the cab without anyone minding LOL
It'd be fun if they meet Simone and Gordon(?) too ^^ Or like they could be complications with one of them meeting a girl/boy, I dunno really, but I don't want this to end!
I love it hun! Great work
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. ^_^ Well... a tiny problem there--Simone's dead (Ch 3--Blast to the Past-died when tomi was 12) LOL Otherwise that could work.. besides that minor complication. =D Haha, well I'll try to think of more events to happen, 'cause I don't wanna end it yet either! Thanks again!!
Date: 01/19/08 08:30 pm Title: Sometimes There's Just No Explanation
jorg is such an a-- -_-
glad they stil have each other
Author's Response: *nods head in agreement* yep, he sure is. lol, thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/19/08 08:30 pm Title: Sometimes There's Just No Explanation
Great chapter hun!
I wanted to kick Jorg's ass so bad!
how could he kick his own sons out and on christmas!!
what a loser!!
GGrrrrr i wanna kill him!
*sigh*
Good thing the twins have each other :D
Author's Response: ^_^ We all wanna kick Jorg's ass, hip hip hooray. and as to how he could do that, let me use the same words as the story: "sometimes there's just no explanation." =D haha, thanks kat.
Date: 01/14/08 03:30 pm Title: I Knew Them
I literally squealed with Ida told me this was updated while I had been gone today. Awesome job, I just love this fic!
Author's Response: ^_^ Haha, I cheer when I see your stories updated =D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/14/08 02:12 pm Title: I Knew Them
O___O
FUCK MORE PLEASE
Author's Response: ^_^ as soon as humanly possible.. for me. lol, thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/14/08 10:58 am Title: I Knew Them
this is suck a good story *sigh*
Author's Response: haha, thanks. ^_^
Date: 01/14/08 10:57 am Title: I Knew Them
OMG ! OMG ! Now I hate Henry and Marietta even more! I didn't think that was possible, but jez they're just so mental! I can't believe them! I'm so glad they died. They deserve it..Some justice at least..
And I'm so happy that Jorg believed them without any hesitation! And I'm really happy that Bill's finally returned back home! I wonder how the boys will do to continue their relationship ;)
I love it, I really do! You're amazing hunnie and this fic is just pure love!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I couldn't stand to have them still be alive... that would involve a messy murder & i couldn't deal with that. ^_^ So justice was served. Aw thanks hun!
Date: 01/14/08 10:56 am Title: I Knew Them
You made me cry!
it was so good, i'm so glad he knows now. but he knew those two assholes!! i'm so glad they died or i would have killed them!! *snarls*
Author's Response: ^_^ I would've killed them too! but luckily they got what they deserved. =D danke for the review, kat!
Date: 01/14/08 10:50 am Title: I Knew Them
I loved it! I'm so happy they're a family again!! Can't wait to find out how Jorg knew Henry and Marietta though... update as soon as you can :)Good luck with your studying!
Author's Response: =D I'm so happy you love it!! Yeah, I'll try and update soon. Aw, thanks, lol. && thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/09/08 03:26 pm Title: It Can't Be
wow... and where is tomi in all of this? i swear that boy could sleep through a hurricane... cant wait to see what happens update soon please?
^_^[Sagey]
Author's Response: tomi is merely sleeping. lol, yeah.. well he'll come into play next chapter, don't worry. ^_^ I'll try to write more soon, Sagey, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/09/08 12:47 pm Title: It Can't Be
omg i burst out laughing when i saw majesrix said "he come out to his father"!! loved the chapter, update soon!! =] =]
Author's Response: LOL i didn't think of it *that* way at first. =D i'm glad you loved it! thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/09/08 06:04 am Title: It Can't Be
*jaw drops*
*stomach drops*
Oh shit! What are they going to do now? He's come out to his father, so ... oh crap. Their relationship is out of the question now, at least to their father. I'm loving this chickadee. Great job.
Author's Response: humm... well... That *points* is a VERY good question... i should probably give that a little thought before writing the next chapter. Thanks for your review, Majestrix, I'm so happy you love it. =D
Date: 01/09/08 03:53 am Title: It Can't Be
This does *not* suck!
This was wonderful! You must realise that I don't comment every chapter, because I tend to find you updating several chapters at a time and I just keep reading. But every chapter is great! The story is flowing at a wonderful pace, the suspense held just long enough and there is so *much* improvement in your writing from the first chapter to this one.
I still want to cry at every flashback scene because I hate thinking that anyone could do that to a child. But I keep reading (I must be a masochist!) anyway because I *need* to know what happens next.
Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Please keep writing and I look forward to your updates.
Author's Response: aw gee, you're making me blush. lol, thanks, you've just raised my spirits so much. sometimes i'm just not so sure of my writing... i felt like i was repeating too much, but i guess not. aw *tear* yeah i know what you mean, i hate thinking that people could do that to a child.. or any human being, for that matter. ^_^ thanks again!!
Date: 01/09/08 03:13 am Title: It Can't Be
it was so awesome!!
"Don't let them hurt me daddy" i cried when i read this line1 :D
Author's Response: you cried? oh, i'm sorry, lol, i wasn't trying to make ya cry. =D
Date: 01/09/08 03:13 am Title: It Can't Be
This was omg so good! This chapter jeez, wow, I'm speachless! I loved it!
They way you described Jorgs thoughts and Bill's memory of when that awful Henry did those things to him *_*And then the ending were Bill says “Don’t let them hurt me, Daddy.”
and then Jorg asks if it's Bill! OMG! Brilliant!
Aww I loved it! Great work hun! You're an amazing author!
Author's Response: *blushes* aww thanks hun, i'm so glad you loved it. ^_^ thanks for reviewing!