Date: 02/02/11 02:48 pm Title: Moving Forward
oh, wow, this was such a lovely story! Iloved the whole thing from beginning to end. I kind of expected, whnen Jorg said he knew them, that it was going to be a they worked together thing, and they didnt make the connection that they left the same time Bill disappeared. It was nice to be wrong. I am almost never wrong on my hunches on stuff like that when it comes to movies and fic. It seems like I can always guess whats gonna happen.So its nice to besurprised for once.
I thought the ending was lovely. For a moment I was thinking,oh my gosh did she actually manage to make an "it was alla dream" that actually worked?!?! You know when you had Bill waking up for class, but then THATturned out to be thedreamagain! and it wasnt all a dream...so spiffy. I've been really wanting someone to try to make a serious attempt at a Dream fic, you know where it doesnt just look like a cop out.
Ad then how it really ended, with Jorg coming to terms with his gay together sons...I really liked it.
You should totally keep up the awesome work writing.
Date: 08/19/10 08:58 pm Title: Blast to the Past
I cried. I'm in for drama, but this is way too much. A Tom without a Bill. It can't be true...
Author's Response: Ohh, I remember almost crying while writing this chapter ;_____; And thanks for still reading, regardless of that huge, ridiculous AWFUL mistake!
Date: 08/19/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got me confused a couple of times, but when I re-read it I was fine. I think there is one hell of a confusing mistake though, I don't know if people already mentioned it but:
“I don’t know why I know this,” Bill begins with a goofy smile on his face “but doesn’t your name mean ‘twin?’”
Why is 'Bill' saying that. I think I can already guess the outcome, and I am still interested, but that was a really bad mistake xD!
Author's Response: OHMYGOD. *headdesk x infinity* I don't even know if anyone pointed that out, but I do know that back when I wrote this and was posting, if I DID notice or was made aware of that mistake, I didn't know you could edit individual chapters. :x 'Twas still quite the n00b back then!! Just fixed it, thank you so, so much for pointing that out! Glad you're still interested, though! :D
Date: 04/18/10 04:12 pm Title: Moving Forward
Sad, story but good. It sort of reminded me of the movie 'The deep end of the ocean'
Author's Response: I've never heard of the movie, but cool. And thank you. :)
Date: 10/18/08 12:30 am Title: Moving Forward
I loved it! Truly. It was original and heart-wrenching and really well written. It was just WIN.
Date: 10/17/08 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Here, I really like this, and i normally wouldn't post a comment on the first chapter of something this long, but could I just point out that you slipped and said 'Bill' instead of 'Anthony' somewhere up there. Great start though! *jumps off to read the rest*
Date: 10/06/08 04:38 am Title: Moving Forward
aww this was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!! i absolutely loved this story. it was beautiful. definitely one of the best ive read on hear.
Date: 10/06/08 01:32 am Title: Uncovering the Truth
its still funny, i still didnt cry at the mention of his "parents" dying. i actually smiled a little bit. wow i think im kinda messed up. lol
Date: 10/05/08 11:28 pm Title: Blossoming Friendship
its funny, i cried when you explained what happened to Tom's mom, but i didnt shed one tear when you explained what happened to Anthony's "parents". i dont know, i just think its funny how that happened. love the story so far
Date: 08/03/08 07:56 am Title: Blossoming Friendship
great so far. :) itching to read on...
Date: 07/01/08 08:03 am Title: Moving Forward
Great story :]
Author's Response: XD Thank you. Glad you thought so!
Date: 06/18/08 08:14 pm Title: Moving Forward
Awww, that was so adorable!
I love bill-napping fics! This one was great! I really like how Jorg came around in the end. Some parts almost made me cry! ^---^
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you!! I loved writing this one, and I couldn't have Jorg be another bad guy. He always is (or so it seems) - so I wanted him to end up nice in the end. Happy you liked it!! Thanks for the review XD
Date: 01/23/08 07:17 am Title: Moving Forward
Ooooh
I loved the whole story *__*
While i was reading this last chapter i looked like a 3 years old child xD
Thank you for this story, really **
Author's Response: Hah, your welcome. Aw, I'm so glad you've loved it! Thanks for reviewing! =D
Date: 01/23/08 06:29 am Title: Moving Forward
Love all the way through!
Author's Response: Hehe, yay. Thanks for reviewing, I'm happy you've loved it!!
Date: 01/23/08 04:48 am Title: Moving Forward
This is a gem!
so sad it has come to an end but I enjoyed every second reading this one
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it!! ^_^
Date: 01/22/08 09:13 pm Title: Moving Forward
Oh no! This can't be the ending. This story is to good. I know you were running out of ideas and I meant to comment with some. Reading another chapter about Jeorg is trying to fix his relationship with his sons and coming to understand their romantic relationship would of been really awesome to read. Or maybe Tom could take Bill back to their hometown to see the house they grew up in. Bill could have flashbacks/or experience such great emotion being back in his childhood home before all the madness started. Maybe even the towns reaction to finding out the little boy they lost so long ago is back. Jeorg explaining why he left Tom and his mom alone when they needed him the most. Toms reaction to that could be a whole range of emotion and angst that could spill out and then mended back together. Or maybe Bill gos back to the house with Tom in France where he was brought to all the years ago and brain washed and tortured. Why would he go back there? I dunno, its up to you. I just hate to see it end. Your writing is to amazing along with this story. If none of that works and you choose to end it here then its still just as amazing as always. I just feel there should be more. Its kinda a short end.
Or maybe a sequel?
Author's Response: Aw hun, those ideas are all so great, but that's the end.. Lol, yea, I feel there should be more, too, but if I tried to fit anything else in, it would just ruin it, and I didn't want this story to collapse, so that's it. Haha, well... a sequel... we'll see about that. I doubt it, but... you never know. ^_^ Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/22/08 07:21 pm Title: Moving Forward
T.T that was such a happy ending! XD dont worry that was so not a disappointment. i loved it! and i have enjoyed reading this fic since the beginning!
^_^[Sagey]
Author's Response: Yayness! I'm glad you've enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing all along the way!! ^_^
Date: 01/22/08 04:26 pm Title: Moving Forward
NO! THE LAST CHAPTER! I DON'T DARE TO READ IT!
*reads it*
*goes back here to review*
OH! I'm crying T_T I really will miss this story! And as for this to not be not!? Where did you get that from!? It's WONDERFUL! I LOVE IT!
He’s Bill Kaulitz.
Tom Kaulitz’s twin brother.
So, it's official! I'm so happy and sad at the same time! And I loved this chapter! But I'll miss this so much! I can't believe it's over! It's SO sad with last parts! This whole story has been lovely and I've enjoyed each chapter so much
Author's Response: Aw sheesh, it seems I made a lot of people cry. I'm so happy you've enjoyed this story and I hate endings, too. ^_^ Thanks so much for all of your reviews! =D
Date: 01/22/08 04:08 pm Title: Moving Forward
omg it's finished... i'm totally crying right now T_T... AMAZING!!!
Author's Response: Aww.. thanks hun. ^_^