Date: 09/06/09 02:13 pm Title: I'll Be
Did I ever mention that you give really good musical references?
Two husbands? Isn't that alot for Trina to handle? I don't know if I'd be able to.
Tom is such a blockhead. Seriously, he should just admit to everyone that he likes Trina. Trust me, the world will not stop spinning.
Author's Response: I try to diversify people in music. If I'm listening to it, might as well mention it. Maybe someone will listen! So thanks for that. :D It makes me happy that someone mentioned it. rnrnTwo fake husbands I think is ok to handle. Especially with one being in a different country. rnrnAnd yes. Tom IS a blockhead. It's what makes him endearing. Haha!
Date: 08/29/09 01:48 am Title: Computer Reign, Game Over
Funny chapter, but it was alomst all italics! Right after Trina interupts Andreas' text to Tom, it's all italicised. You might ant to fix that... Other than that, it was good. Short hair and cookies!
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks for that catch. I appreciate it. And I know that it was almost all italics. The boys have to keep up with them! Haha. Plus, texting is easy to write. It's fun. :D
Date: 08/25/09 04:20 pm Title: Fever for the Flavor
schedule-raped... like they will be once humanoid comes out
Author's Response: Haha! yeah pretty much. Oh well.
Date: 08/22/09 01:21 pm Title: Fever for the Flavor
Hmmm ...of course, you didn't channel a slight bit of New Moon into this, right? :D
As always, I loved it! Especially with how Gusti got to have the spotlight for a little while.
Author's Response: Um....No? I don't think I did...Did I? Do explain.rnrnAnd yes. YAY GUSTI!
Date: 08/22/09 01:36 am Title: Fever for the Flavor
In all the years of my life, I've only ever broken one bone, which is amazing, considering ow graceful I'm not. It was my ring finger on my left hand, and I can tell you, it hurt like hell. Of course, they couldn't give me a cast, but they did give me a brace and tape. And Vicodin is a gift from the Gods! That shit will make you forget your own name. It's wicked.
Reading is one of my favorite past times. And I don't talk when I'm reading, either.
I look forward to your next update.
Date: 08/22/09 01:09 am Title: My Last Breath
Wow, ok, so I missed an update, I guess. Damn.
Dude, they duked it out in an alley. That's awesome! I think it's just what the 2 of them needed. They had so much anger and frustration. I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm not sure it really resolved anything. But hey, it was fun to write. ;)
Date: 06/17/09 09:26 am Title: American Pie
I have to say that I really like the chapters from Tom's POV. He's such a silly stupid lovable boy.
Author's Response: Hehehehe. I have to agree that he is a silly stupid lovable boy. And that's why we love him! He's so lovable!
Date: 06/10/09 11:12 pm Title: Fanfare For The Common Man
My spell check is retardified too, so don't feel bad. It doesn't recognize some of the simplest words, and sometimes, I have to fight with myself to not just BETCHslap the fuckin thing. Not that you could actually slap a writing program, but you catch my drift, right?
I must say, this is getting more interesting. I loved the conversation between Trina and Tom. It was classic drunk-boy-tries-to-sound-intelligent-when-talking-to-a-hot-chick, but not cliched, get it, got it, good.
Til next time...
Author's Response: I wish you could slap a program. It might make life better. Haha. And thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It took a little work, but it was worth it.
Date: 06/05/09 09:58 am Title: Hook
Shiny things are good, I have to admit.
This chapter was good. I liked it.
Author's Response: You're so right. Shiny things are amazing. rnThank you so much for reviewing so much!
Date: 06/04/09 09:36 pm Title: If I Should Fall From Grace With God
Hii =)
i just started reading this stroy and i love it please continue =)
Author's Response: Haha. No worries. I am continuing. I'm glad you like it, thank you!
Date: 05/23/09 01:27 am Title: Evil Angel
Cute. I like the idea of Tom throwing her over his shoulder like that.
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah. It's a bit awkward sometimes, just because you can't really do anything in that position. You have no control.
Date: 05/10/09 02:25 am Title: Don't Start A Band
TEAM TOM!
I love the thought of Simone checking up on the boys. They seem to need it.
I'm not a morning person either. My brain doesn't start functioning util I've been moving around for about 2 hours or so. And coffee. I need my coffee in the mornings. I'm addicted.
This was a fun chapter, and I love the Guitar Hero games. I've never played Rock Band, but I'm sure I'd enjoy that too.
Author's Response: Yeah. Mornings aren't good. Rock Band is AMAZING. Way fun. If you liked Guitar Hero, you would probably love Rock Band, too.
Date: 04/09/09 10:12 pm Title: Behind Blue Eyes
I hated Barney right from the start, for the record.
They all know they like each other, except maybe April, and they need to realize it and make it known.
I love how they're so easy around each other, like they've all been friends forever. This is what good stuff is made of...
Author's Response: Thanks! That's kind of what I was going for..the easy friendship. And things need to be spread out...good things take time. It's slow, but it will be worth it. Hang in there. It may be frustrating, but that's what keeps you hooked! ...supposedly. lol
Date: 04/01/09 08:09 pm Title: What Have You Done Now?
I liked this chapter! I get stuck in my clothing all the time, so I know how Trina feels! I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 03/29/09 11:24 pm Title: Brokenheartsville
This was a good chapter. I'm enjoying this, but when are Trina and Tom gonna get over themselves and at least kiss? Not that I'm rushing you or anything, this pace is deliciously slow, but Geez! They both need to realize some things...
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah. That's the thing: they're both too stubborn to be the first to admit that they have a weakness for the other. Thanks for the input, though. I really appreciate it. ^_^
Date: 03/28/09 04:29 pm Title: On My Own
Certainly ...interesting... Honestly, in the begging I had a little trouble slogging through it, but recently, it turned out good. Trina and April sound like a blast, and they seem like the type of people I would be friends with. Believable characters, and I like that.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm sorry about the beginning, but I'm a firm believer in backstory. Otherwise people get very confused.
Date: 03/21/09 01:20 pm Title: If I Should Fall From Grace With God
It's taking ages for anything good to happen! :(
Author's Response: Good things take time. And yeah. I know. All in good time.
Date: 03/20/09 11:24 pm Title: You're Gonna Go Far, Kid
i has mad ping pong skills. summers of working at the y will do that.
Author's Response: True story. haha.
Date: 03/16/09 12:28 am Title: Haunted
thank you for the wonderful birthday presents! :D
Author's Response: You are very welcome! I'm glad you liked it. ;) hahaha
Date: 03/09/09 03:48 pm Title: Why Haven't I Heard From You
I LOVE IT!!! more PLEASEE!!!!
Author's Response: Haha. Thank you! Will do. ;)