Date: 12/20/08 12:56 am Title: Endure
tee hee I LOVED IT. even though it was angsty, i loved it! I could even almost feel the love that bill has for tom, so sweet and caring. I hope tom will understand why he did it in the next chapter. Sorry your not feeling good about this story but maybe this review will make you feel better.Keep writing girl, its just getting really good lol!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot, I'm not sure why I'm feeling crap about this story, but I'll continue it, for people like you who make me want to keep it going. so thank you. :)
Date: 12/19/08 03:46 pm Title: On The Road Again
This chapter was exactly like "Ouch, heartshot". I liked it, as I always have, but damn. o___o Great job, luw! *iz lameish*
Author's Response: You know what, I'm feeling crappy about this story, I don't know why. Thanks for reading tho :)
Date: 12/18/08 05:22 pm Title: Home Sweet Home
yeah please continue, i get the feeling that things are going to change. I'm curious though.
Author's Response: I'll keep going.
Date: 12/18/08 11:16 am Title: Home Sweet Home
I've just read all of this, and Perfection.
I've got to say, I love it all ready.
Your characters are really cute and adorable, apart from Gordon who needs a kick up the arse.
They're really relatable and likeable.
It's something I can get into, and I can tell from here that I'm going to squeal whenever it's updated.
Going back to characters though, I don't know about Simone, I like her but at the same time I don't.
When I know I really should.
Then again, I'm weird like that and tend to favour the wrong people and dislike everyone who's meant to be liked.
Oh well.
It made me cringe slightly, when Bill called he house his own, well, their house. There was something about it that just made me cover my face.
It's nothing on your part, but I like things to take time when someone's getting used to something, I like Bill feeling awkward and out of place.
But then again, I fucking love what you've done.
I can't wait to read more.
So yes you should continue.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I understand what you mean about Bill calling the house their own, I try not to rush their relationship and I feel that I've done it pretty well, I just felt that whereever Tom was, Bill was home, you know what I mean? In my mind I just couldn't imagine him being out of place, where he was finally somewhere, exactly where he wanted to be. If that makes any sense at all lol. I really appretiate your review, and it makes me want to write more. :)
Date: 12/18/08 02:05 am Title: Home Sweet Home
YYYYYEEESSSSS! Don't quit writing plleeaassseee? Don't make me beg.....more lol. I love this story and your doing a great job. NO MORE NAGGING DOUBTS! :) Cant wait for the next chappie!
~Amberli
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. That made me feel a lot better. I don't know what was with me today, the story was just making me angry. But I will continue :)
Date: 12/18/08 12:48 am Title: Home Sweet Home
please continue!
love it!
:D
Author's Response: I will, I was just feeling bitter today lol.
Date: 12/18/08 12:48 am Title: Home Sweet Home
My nose is bleeding itself off my face due to the damn hotness of this chapter but I'm on cloud nine, so I couldn't give less crap about it than I do now. *w* And whatcha mean you have some doubts about this story? Hell, at least my days would be much more angsty without it. Ey, I'm not kidding. If there's more ddrama llama~ coming then no worries. x]
Author's Response: Hm, I'm just feeling off my game today. The story isn't doing what I want it too. Their both bothering me right now hahaha. I'm sure I'll sort it out. :)
Date: 12/17/08 03:02 pm Title: Meet The Parents
O_O
How could Gordon say something like that?!
Poor Tomi... well, he'll just have to make him see he's wrong ;)
Author's Response: of course :)
Date: 12/17/08 01:30 pm Title: Meet The Parents
Oh, this is new! It really seems like Gordon's a bitch, hmm. Poor, poor tomiboi.
Author's Response: A bitch yes, but also protective, of Bill of course.
Date: 12/17/08 01:12 pm Title: Meet The Parents
:O Gordon! You ass. That sucks, poor Tom.
Author's Response: lol he's a big boy, he'll be fine.
Date: 12/16/08 08:10 pm Title: The Beginning
ooooo, bill's parents. can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: :):)
Date: 12/16/08 04:55 pm Title: The Beginning
Awwwe. They're moving in together. Cute. :3
Author's Response: You know I love fluff.
Date: 12/16/08 04:52 pm Title: The Beginning
Oooh, he's going to meet the parents!! Well, I think you should continue... it's really interesting to see where they're going together now. Good chapter... :)
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 12/16/08 02:41 pm Title: The Beginning
I love it, already ;)
Can't wait to see them living together!
I know this fic will be perfect, just like the previous one ^^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
Date: 12/16/08 01:47 pm Title: The Beginning
What a lovely start! I just gotta love the way how our two lovebirds' relationship is progressing, all slow and steady. :) And of course I'm all giggles when I think about what the future holds for the two of them. Anyway, luw I can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Tomi, he's so nervous that it actually makes you want to hug him~ And if Tominapping was legal.. Oh, well. xD
Author's Response: I'm sure their future holds a lot for them both lol
Date: 12/16/08 01:32 pm Title: The Beginning
A sequel already? YAY! Can't wait, can't wait. :D
Author's Response: :):)
Date: 12/16/08 01:21 pm Title: The Beginning
Yes! im glad you did another part! cant wait for the next part to be up cause i want to know bill's parents reaction to tom
Author's Response: lol i'll try to have it up tomorrow but I'm not sure yet. :)