Date: 12/18/08 04:54 pm Title: Sorry
owie.. and this could be Either of them.. I don't know what they did but ow...
Date: 12/15/08 06:30 pm Title: Sorry
This was a little hard to read simply b/c there was little to no context and you didn't tell us who was talking. However I also know this was an intentional decision so that aside it was good. The emotions came across beautifully.
Date: 12/15/08 02:53 pm Title: Sorry
nice.
I'm always trying to figure out whose thoughts we're reading, but it's really difficult.
I'm guessing it were Tom's and Bill apologized?
Date: 12/14/08 09:56 pm Title: Sorry
awwwwww! d:)
Date: 12/14/08 09:50 pm Title: Sorry
XD
That was angsty and had an adorable ending. Aww.
Date: 12/14/08 09:32 pm Title: Sorry
don't say that about your one-shot, i really liked it=DDD
great job.
i love the last line!!??
Date: 12/14/08 08:52 pm Title: Sorry
Lol
Bill is so very sencitive to everything , i liked that part. The way he explained his feelings was very compelling.
Peace easy
Date: 12/14/08 08:51 pm Title: Sorry
I liked it a lot. Very sensual and erotic! =D Awesome job as always!!
Date: 12/14/08 08:46 pm Title: Sorry
It's good sweetie. Stop doubting your writing because even though it's a sleepy little oneshot it's good.
Date: 12/14/08 08:36 pm Title: Sorry
Awwww... sad and cute at the same time.