Date: 05/13/09 08:45 am Title: 1
You got me hooked. I LOVE that you write from Tomīs POV because in many fanfics his character tends to be quite one-dimensional. I love how you give him so much more depth....*waiting for the update*
Date: 12/18/08 09:27 pm Title: 1
The story says uncompleted, but I think it would be great as just a oneshot.
Author's Response: We have more planned, but thank you for the comment
Date: 12/18/08 09:19 pm Title: 1
Ha. Tom's cock is always winning. Funny.
Author's Response: It sure as hell won us over!
Date: 12/17/08 11:45 pm Title: 1
wow. I absolutely love this! It's SO interesting and just makes me feel all good ^^ hehe. I think this idea is really cool and im looking forward to see what will happen to Tomi.. :D Very good written and I think you guys work really great together!! Can't wait to read more! (L)
Author's Response: We're glad you like it, we worked hard on it and we are very happy with how its come together. Can't wait to get the next chapter finished! Thank you for commenting!
Date: 12/15/08 10:03 pm Title: 1
Amazing.
I should read fan fiction more often.
This is just...
Hawt.
Author's Response: SHABOOM, thats how we do
Date: 12/15/08 07:48 pm Title: 1
Definitly intriguing and bothering and it made me want more, so update please? :)
Author's Response: It bothered us too, but then we realized schrei!bill is just meant to be pedo-ed. Fucking haawt...
Date: 12/15/08 03:16 am Title: 1
I was giddy with excitement when I saw you starting something new. The title and the summary intrigued me immediately and this, this... it's... gah. I love it. Very erotic. Another one I'll be following then. =)
Author's Response: We're glad you like it sweety, we are so excited about this, we have been planning it for months ^_^ Schrei!Bill is just so.... mnerghh oh God, we love him, and we hope you do, or at leats will by the end of this fic, lol! Thanks so much for the awesome comment hun!
Date: 12/14/08 11:01 pm Title: 1
poor Tom :(
Author's Response: I know, but that's what happens when you're a sick bastard. Kinda like us. And never mind Tom, what about Bill? Poor, poor Bill...
Date: 12/14/08 09:51 pm Title: 1
this sounds awesome.
I love stories like this.
dirty, dirty tom, jacking off to his brother's neck.
Date: 12/14/08 07:38 pm Title: 1
Woah
That's some serious longing
Is it all gonna be from tom's POV? It would be interesting to see how Bill felt, if this whole thing is one-sided or not.
Also, is there going to be more dialogue later? Just wondering, because it seems from the title that the story will mostly be of Tom's memories, and I'm not sure how those are going to be described...like the tatoo thing maybe? Hopefully more dialogue soon? Again, just wondering. I know it's going to be written well no matter what :-)
Hoping for an update soon! I'm interested to see how this goes :-)
Great job!
DCB
Date: 12/14/08 07:32 pm Title: 1
Great opening! Keep going! You got my attention!
Date: 12/14/08 07:29 pm Title: 1
AHHHHHHH RIDE ME LIKE A LAPRAS YOU SEXY BEASTS :D
Date: 12/14/08 07:24 pm Title: 1
*__* Hotttt. Great job, guys! I really like the idea. Keep up the good work :]