Date: 12/19/08 04:23 am Title: My Boy Lollipop
thats so cute, ty by the way for doing the tom to english spot.. i did need it. and yeah twilight ha ha sweet.
Author's Response: You're very welcome for the dictionary. I needed it too XD
Date: 12/19/08 02:51 am Title: My Boy Lollipop
NEXT CHAP PLEASE!! Gott, it was so good!
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks. And yes, its coming
Date: 12/19/08 01:28 am Title: My Boy Lollipop
keep oit comin! i love it!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter as we speak
Date: 12/19/08 01:06 am Title: My Boy Lollipop
NEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!!!!! NOT BILLA!!!!!
Author's Response: *grins* JAAAAA Billa
Date: 12/18/08 10:38 am Title: Speak to Me
awe i loved this and im very happy you added a G.S.A into it ^-^ theres one at my school as well can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: We had one in my school as well. Actually, my second period art class was the safe room. The GSA makes another appearance in the next chapter. Make sure you check it out!
Date: 12/17/08 07:18 pm Title: Grief in the Dark
hey syn,
surprisingly... i actually like this story quite alot:)... very nice, keep up the good work ;)
*kiss*
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, though I still find it kind of weird that you're on here. Does that mean you're becoming a Tokio Hotel fan?
Date: 12/17/08 05:24 pm Title: Speak to Me
*sighs again* (it is positive, don't worry!). Heilà!!
This is really turning out to be one of the nicest high school fics I've ever read, seriously, I'm just falling in love with it more and more; so no surprise that yes, you're in my list of favorites. :D
It is captivating, truly funny and interesting. I can't wait to see what comes next (when I ask questions in reviews, it's not that I expect an actual answer, it's just that I can't help wondering what will happen ;P).
Andi. (L)
I could say that he's being a little bitch, but no, I won't. I'm truly in love with my baby-blond, so he would never be mean to me. :D I'm so happy you put Andi into the story, but most of all, I'm so glad he's gay, loooool.
And plus, he wants to get Bill's attention, I can't just wait to see what he will do for Bill, too. Thumbs up for Andi! ;)
... but now that I think about it, xD, twincest is always the best, even if it's Twincest - Not Related, lol. That means Tom and Bill have to be together, that's what I say, lol.
I so loved that Tom wants to be Bill's protector! The dream is making more sense now ;). (not that it didn't before, but maybe I can start trying to give it a reason to guess what will happen...)
Well, what can I say? :D
I LOVE it, as I said, great High School fic, and thank you so much for updating so soon, lol, I hope next chapter is coming soon as well, ;).
Kiss, and send my greetings to Dylan, of course, lmao.
I'm not English (maybe you already got it from the way I write...), I found out long time ago Dylan was a male name, lol. But I can't help using it, it has an immortal meaning to me. (L)
So, greetings to Dylan, and I have got a message for him:
From Dylan to Dylan: "Let your girlfriend write and update. Otherwise Dylan on Tokio Hotel Fiction will deny she was proud to be named like you." u_u
Kiss kiss, I'm patiently waiting, :D
Author's Response: *Grins* Yay! You're back! I was hoping you'd be back for this chapter. rnrnWow! You are totally the first Andi-fan I've had for this story. I don't know Andi's up to yet. rnrnI agree. I am a HUGE sucker for twincest, related or not! rnrnActually, I have decided why Tom had that dream (which will show up in a future chapter) though I'd LOVE to hear your theories.rnrnDylan HAS read the story....and likes it! I was surprised. *whispers* he's not much of a TH fan *gets ready to fend off all rabid, angry fan girls*.rn
Date: 12/17/08 04:03 pm Title: Speak to Me
lmao, thanks for the translation into english xD
and...well, andi's a bitch.
not good -.-
I loveee this storyyy.
Author's Response: *Grins* You're welcome
Date: 12/17/08 01:49 pm Title: Speak to Me
andi is insanely jelous and stupid. he is insane. tomi is better for him. d:)LOVE!!!
Author's Response: He is! Let's just hope that Bill agrees. I post it as I write it, so I have no idea what the future holds.
Date: 12/17/08 11:55 am Title: Speak to Me
Ah~! Update! I want to know what's going to happen! (Sorry for spelling/grammar mistakes, I'm not enligsh. xD)
Author's Response: I want to know what's happening too! And nope, no mistakes. You're english was perfect
Date: 12/17/08 08:54 am Title: Speak to Me
Ahhh! Bad-bad Andi! But huh, good story though. :)
Author's Response: I know! I actually didn't even plan that. It just came out and I was all "oh my god! Andi!" XD
Date: 12/16/08 09:21 am Title: Miseria Cantare
poor billa....tomi is tryin to be nice...
Author's Response: It really is poor Billa. But in future chapters, all shall be told about why he is the way he is.
Date: 12/15/08 02:50 pm Title: Miseria Cantare
I like that story. =)
Keep going! ;)
Author's Response: XD thanks. I hope you like the next chapter as much.
Date: 12/15/08 02:24 pm Title: Miseria Cantare
*sighs*
I'm truly falling in love with this story, you know? I can't explain the exact reason why I'm loving it that much (no, wait, yes I can: I just love high school fics!!!), but I'm doing. I can't really wait for them to speak to each other. Indeed, I can't wait for anything else to happen! Why did Tom dream of Bill? *-* What is going to happen between them? Please please please I have to know! I was right when I added this story to favorites. :D
It manages to fulfill my chest with enthusiasm every time. :D
(One thing. I don't know about the "rette mich" writing, because if these words are very important for the whole plot, I guess they're okay. But I suggest you to change "schiesse" into "shit", I don't think we're allowed to write random German words... not that I don't like it, but I think that is the rule. I'm not sure, though, you should check the site rules out).
Boyfriend coming over? Does it mean no update for a very long while? *-*
*cries*
Well, make him read this fiction, maybe he will like. :D And will let you write for the update. :D
I like to believe the impossible, lol, 'cause I've never heard of a boy who actually liked Tokio Hotel, xD. But you never know. :D
See you in the next review!
Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: I love getting reviews from you. It puts a huge smile on my face. I love high school fics too! I felt there weren't enough on this site, so I decided to make my own. rnrnTom's dream of Bill will get explained later on, don't worry. And I can't tell you what's gonna happen, because that'll ruin the story XDrnrnI am HONOURED to be in your favourites *hugs*rnrnRette mich will be important later on, and I figured a little bit of German like that would be ok because it's the title of a TH song, so everyone here is familiar with it. hehe I love the word Scheiße. It sounds so much better in German than English, but I wasn't beaten with a stick for having it in there, so...rnrnAnd yes, the boyfriend was over. Actually, hehe, his name is Dylan *grins* He usually stays for like three or four days, and I wasn't sure this time when he was going, so I thought I'd put up a note about it.rnrnI can't wait to see what you have to say for the next chapter *kiss and hug*
Date: 12/14/08 10:54 pm Title: Grief in the Dark
i would die if i had a dream like that about my friend. i can't wait for the next chapter. this sounds very good!
Author's Response: The dream was even worse in real life when I tried to call her and she wouldn't answer the phone for the longest time. I'm glad you like it so far
Date: 12/14/08 01:28 pm Title: Grief in the Dark
Those dream of your must be terrible!! but a good thing to write about it! It makes the bad feeling lessen!!
The fic itself is so very interesting, and I really hope that you will continue it!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying to continue it, and quickly. I hate when stories are either never finished or they are just left for like, four months at a time.
Date: 12/14/08 10:32 am Title: Grief in the Dark
you actually dreamt that?
holy... that's horrible.
I've had my fair share of gore and dread, too.
this sounds like a really good idea, though.
and I wanna see ghetto tom rofl.
Author's Response: Yeah, I did dream it *shudder*rnAnd just keep reading. When school begins, so does ghetto Tom *grins*
Date: 12/14/08 09:44 am Title: Grief in the Dark
*Looks like this--->._.*
If the dream you had was half scary as Tom's, well, poor you, xD.
I liked it, I'm a bit too impressed and taken aback by blood and its images, so I felt rather scared and afraid of Bill (yes, afraid, xD), but I couldn't help but go on with the reading, lol.
Constructive review? Mmmh... Believe me, it was well described. Maybe a bit too short, but I think you properly explained what you meant to say, and what you wanted the readers to know for now. So, I was fine with the whole chapter, lol.
I hope you're planning to go on soon. :)
Author's Response: Actually, my dream was worse o.O I didn't find it necessary to add EVERY detail. . . It would make it worse, and I thought it was bad enough as it was.rnrnI wanted to make the chapter longer, but I covered everything I had to say. But don't worry, when the story really starts, the chaps will be lengthier.
Date: 12/14/08 02:46 am Title: Grief in the Dark
Pretty interesting, really :D
I wanna know what will happen o0o
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. You know, I'm just as curious as to what's gonna happen *grins*
Date: 12/14/08 02:16 am Title: Grief in the Dark
Awww. TEDDY BEARS!! Hehe. Good so far! And thanks again for the pretty banner doll!
Author's Response: Hehe yes. Teddybears. Everyone needs one. And thanks for being my first review for this story XDrnrnAnd you are more than welcome for the banner. I'm glad you liked it.