Date: 01/02/09 07:36 am Title: Hit The Floor
MOOOOOOORE! I WANT MORE!
Author's Response: And more you shall get!
Date: 01/02/09 03:32 am Title: Hit The Floor
ONE QUESTION I NEVER GET THIS
ok so how can you get Dick out of Richard??? (This is one of families friends name and it bugs me) and HOW THE HELL DO GET BILL OUT OF WILLIAM?????? I understand Will, and Willy. But BILL?!
Anyways Update soon I need more lol...
Author's Response: You know, I don't know. My brother's name is Bill. I think it may be a rhyming thing. Billy rhymes with Willy and as he got older, it just became Bill. Though I've never heard the Dick/Richard thing, but I think it might be along the same lines.
Date: 01/02/09 03:27 am Title: Hit The Floor
You're a Wonderfully Horribly Person, leaving us with a cliff-hanger like that.
Karma is a bitch, Andi is soon going to learn that I'm hoping! No Andi-Love on my part, that's for sure.
Author's Response: *Bows* Thank you. I like being a wonderfully horrible person *grins* And I've got no Andi-Love either.
Date: 01/02/09 01:48 am Title: Hit The Floor
jhoglh;k'jkl
>:O
Stupid cliffy.
Author's Response: *giggles* I'll post the next chapter soon
Author's Response: *giggles* I'll post the next chapter soon
Date: 01/01/09 11:20 pm Title: Hit The Floor
O_O i am skared now *hyperventilating*
WAS HE GONNA DO?!?!?!?!?!?! RUN ANDI!!!!
Author's Response: *hands you a paper bag* Don't hyperventilate TOO bad. I don't need you passed out when the next chapter is posted
Date: 01/01/09 11:08 pm Title: Hit The Floor
omg.............plz update soon.i luvz u=]
Author's Response: *laughs* I love how I just like, an hour ago posted this and you already want more. I loves you too
Date: 01/01/09 05:06 pm Title: Enlightenment
That was def NOT crappy! That was so sweet! >X'[ =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks!
Date: 12/30/08 05:47 pm Title: Enlightenment
WAAAA!!!!!! y is everthing i read so sad and depressing?! LOVE IT THOUGH!!!
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry. It will get happier later on!
Date: 12/29/08 08:26 pm Title: Enlightenment
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I'll post it as soon as I write it
Date: 12/29/08 09:30 am Title: Enlightenment
Crappy? :O How dare you, woman? This was actually one of the best of your chapters ever! Well, okay, maybe it's me and my deep love for fluff and cuteness, but whatever, I still think this was one of the nicest parts of the story. They really deserved a little break, I'm sure they both needed a rest in the bed (with the other one), XD.
Thing to say, they had a quiet stressing day, XD. I hope the next day they will clean anything up.
Andi's not a son of a bitch! :O
He's just a little bit insane, maybe a bit of a crazy killer, but other than that, he's a completely good boy, XD. Oh, well, at least I'm sure he will show Bill and Tom he knows how to be a good boy, lol. What leaves me a bit surprised, is that his little perverted mind managed to have a certain influence over the whole story, XD. I swear he's my hero, lol. I hope he will appear again, so I know I will spend the following five minutes laughing like a madman.
As for the chapter in general, as I previously said, I like the way it come out. It was sweet, and meanwhile, it was very sad, too. It made my heart melt, I really couldn't help but go on with the reading.
I've got another thing to add, Tom is a weird character, XD. I don't know why, he cries over the death of his mother, XD. This is touching, too, I'm glad Bill was with him to help (L). I wonder if this time Bill was the protector rather than Tom? XD It wouldn't be bad, lol, that would strongen their relationship. I just hope that Tom will be again the strong one soon, XD.
And a usual, I have to end with the dream, lol. So, Bill wanted to die. Mh. You know what? I'm pretty sure now that the real interpretation is yet to come, now I haven't got enough tools to say something and claim "THE DREAM MEANT THIS, THAT'S FOR SURE!!!". I do think something more will come soon, and no, I'm not talking about a chapter, but about some fact, some event, anything that may help me (the readers) find the true meaning of Tom's dream. But one thing's almost for sure, Bill cuts his wrists, and I think that may be involved with an explanation. Don't tell me everything is up to the end of the story, please! XD
But anyway, you know I'm loving it, yeah? XD I wouldn't live without it (L).
And thank you for your nice e-mail, now I'm getting better (FINALLY). Hugs to you and to Dylan (L)
Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you like it. I don't know, I just thought there wasn't as much happening in this chapter. It was all talk. *giggles* And yes, Andi IS a son of a bitch - Tomi could've died! And you're damn straight he'll appear again. He has a pretty big role, wether he means to or not. And Tom is not THAT weird of a character. I mean, if my mom would've died instead of run off, I would've cried. Hell, I STILL cry over my dog sometimes, and he died like four years ago. Plus, I just pictured as Tomi being a little mama's boy while she was alive. I don't know if I can give an exact explanation of the dream.
Date: 12/29/08 06:23 am Title: Enlightenment
I liked it! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Date: 12/29/08 05:19 am Title: Enlightenment
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww love it
ty x
Author's Response: Thank yooooouuuu *Grins*
Date: 12/26/08 02:52 am Title: Grief in the Dark
yes who eles would be better then tomi
Date: 12/26/08 02:47 am Title: Grief in the Dark
yeah at least he is now ^-^
Date: 12/24/08 07:26 pm Title: The Icicle Melts
AH! keep it comin!
Author's Response: The next chapter may be a little delayed do to Christmas, but it should be up within a couple days
Date: 12/24/08 03:49 pm Title: The Icicle Melts
plz hurryyyyyy...i luvz u but hurry, happy early christmas...now hurry lolz...i luvz u=]
Author's Response: *smiles* I'll post it as quickly as I can.
Date: 12/24/08 02:22 pm Title: The Icicle Melts
DIE ANDI!!!!!!!!! he is a stupid jealous freak rite now!!!! can't he just be happy that billa is happy?! poor tomi!!! hehe...marco....d:) POLO!!!!!!!
Author's Response: He is! I don't like Andi all that much right now. *giggles* Marco. I love Marco
Date: 12/24/08 09:03 am Title: The Icicle Melts
Cliffhanger. ç_ç
And now, this is really all I can say! ç_ç
Nah, by the way... thanks again for dedicating me this chapter, this is actually one of the best ones in the whole fiction (well... for now), and I can't help but say THANK YOU again, XD.
Andi. Andi's a complete shit, lol. He's hypocrite! I mean, look! He pretended to be Bill, he sent Tom a text, and then he said it was over between Tom and Bill, seriously, he's just... amazing, XD. He's actually one of the best characters of the whole fiction, lol. Where Andi appears, I know I'm going to read a wonderful chapter. u_u
I liked this chapter, as I said in the previous review, I love the way you manage to write about something unreal like Tom's dream and at the same time, about a simple party with school mates. So Christmas is already over for them, lol. I swear I loved when Bill pushes Andreas away to receive his New Year's kiss, that's the scene I loved the best.
I can't help but talk about Andreas, you see? XD I hope someone will find him, and Bill will get his revenge and punch him straight onto his nose, but meanwhile it wouldn't be bad if they will become friends again... I don't know!! I don't even know what I'd love to read, so I guess it's all up to you. ^_^
Keep writing, 'cause I'm waiting to see where my little poor Andi is, lol.
Merry Christmas, kiss kiss.
Author's Response: *Giggles* I know how much you love cliffhangers. You are more than welcome for the chapter. I had the idea for it for the past few days and I was so excited to write it so I could dedicate it to you. And yes, Andi is a little shit, but hey, we are all good at something. That just happens to be his *Grins* I was considering having a christmas scene, but it wasn't coming out right, so I cut it out. And yes, I noticed how much you love Andi. And you know, I don't even know what's going to happen with Andi.
Date: 12/24/08 08:43 am Title: Stirb Nicht Vor Mir (Don't Die Before I do)
I forgot to say that I loved the title of this chapter. :)
Are you a fan of Rammstein? That song is one of their best, I think, it always makes my heart melt, lol.
Author's Response: I am a HHUUGGEE Rammstein fan! They are my all-time favourite band. The Sehnsucht album was my favourite.
Date: 12/24/08 08:40 am Title: Stirb Nicht Vor Mir (Don't Die Before I do)
All I can say is, AWW! *-*
Nah, that's stupid, I can't just review such a lovely chapter with one mere, silly, sound, can I?
Maybe you already know, but what I like the best of this story is its peculiarity to be both funny and serious. I mean, not that it turned out serious and funny at the same time, I just like the way you manage to alternate different kind of chapters. Without making me (all the readers) lose the main idea we got of the characters, which means that your story doesn't go losing its credibility. If that made sense, xD.
By the way, I don't know what to think about Simone--yet. I think I like her, but the way she acted wary with Tom... I don't know if I like, XD. But she seems a good character, so that's okay. I just hope she isn't having problems with his son and Tom's relationship.
'Cause they're together now... right? xD
Well, I hope they are, now! The scene of the kiss was so... cute! I know this doesn't sound original of me (I mean, a kiss is always described cute), but yes, I have to say it was. Especially because it's not the classic scene "I love you, baby", and the other, "Oh my... I love you too!" and they shared a long, passionate, kiss and lived happily forever. No, the way you made them share this kiss, and the dialogue you wrote, they were original, so I just could appreciate, xD.
As for the dream. So, its meaning... Bill cuts his wrists, that makes me think that is what Tom's dream meant. Tom is to save Bill from himself. Maybe? xD I don't know yet, but that may be a good explanation, don't you think so? XD. Anyway, you said you already have your plot in mind, so I just have to wait. :)
*goes to read next chapter*
Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: I try. I mean, life is never fully serious, nor is it always funny, so I try to make a nice balance between the two. It made perfect sense to me, and I'm glad you appreciate it. As for Simone, well, you can't blame her too much. Look at what she rescued her baby from. You can't blame her tooo much for being a little protective *grins*. I'm glad you liked the smooch scene - I enjoyed it too. Except, they weren't supposed to kiss! They just decided to do that on their own, and then I had to totally change my idea for chapter 7.
