Date: 12/17/08 10:12 pm Title: Two
XD aHHHHH!! next chap is going to be amazing! cant wait for it :D great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. XD rnWe hope the next chapter will make everyone very happy *hint hint* Hawhaw.
Date: 12/17/08 09:20 pm Title: Two
tsk tsk tsk, bill u r so bad. i luv u.
Author's Response: Teehee. Yes bad Bill! But who can blame him? =DrnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 07:58 pm Title: Two
o.o
dun dun dun... *dramatic movie music plays*
this does not bode well...
Author's Response: Hawhaw =D We shall all see how it goes. XDrnThanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 12/17/08 05:30 pm Title: Two
MHM! Bad Billa, naughty boy. ;)
Author's Response: Yes bad Billa! He really needs some spanking from Tomi :D
Date: 12/17/08 05:15 pm Title: Two
Of course I like it! :)
But I wonder where Tom is taking Bill....*shifty eyes*
Author's Response: Yay, we're glad that you liked it! :D rnrnOoh, the place will be revealed soon XD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 04:01 pm Title: Two
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
*dies*
NEXT CHAPTER!!! x]
Author's Response: Gah! Don't die yet! rn*rescues you* Next chapter too come soon :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/17/08 03:51 pm Title: One
aaaaaaaaaaaahmagaaaaaad!!!! Tom is sooo hot and cool in this fic.. and i love it! keep going!
Author's Response: XD Heheh we know. But he's so everywhere too :DrnThanks for reviewing! More to come soon.
Date: 12/17/08 03:05 pm Title: Two
Tom's a forward man ;) Eee i like this :)
Author's Response: Yesh, and that's why he's so sexay XDrnThanks! Glad to hear that you like it :D
Date: 12/17/08 02:58 pm Title: Two
Damdamdamdam, where is Tom taking Billa *tihi*
Author's Response: All will be revealed soon! XD *hint hint* It's somewhere sexy. rnThanks for reviewing :) rn
Date: 12/17/08 02:49 pm Title: Two
continue i love how you get in Bill's head and what will happen with Tom O.O
i really want you to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Heheh we will continue!!! :) rnThanks for reviewing! And Bill will allow you more access into his head soon too. Haw haw. :D
Date: 12/17/08 02:49 pm Title: Two
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh shit this is getting good
Author's Response: Oooh thanks! Teehee. More to come soon XD rn
Date: 12/17/08 02:42 pm Title: Two
AAH!!!!!!!! *places hand over rapidly beating heart* why *cries* why would you leave off with that?? thats so cruel, so so cruel. im really left without much to say, my mind is...er...elsewhere. please please please update soon! seriously do like...5 minutes ago because im dying here.
Author's Response: Gah, don't die yet! rnWe're really sorry that it seemed so cruel but the next chapter's coming really soon, we promise :)rnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 02:34 pm Title: Two
Tsk. You can't end it there you fucking teases :P
Author's Response: Teehee. :D rnNo worries, more will come soon! :)
Date: 12/17/08 01:39 pm Title: Two
I like it :)
Author's Response: Yay! We're glad you do! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 01:03 pm Title: Two
oh man xD not good! x'D
more soon? plllllllease!
Author's Response: More will come soon! We promise! :DrnThanks for reviewing ;)
Date: 12/17/08 12:50 pm Title: Two
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....bill that sexy hoe xDDDDDD lol....
Author's Response: Haw haw :D rnYes, Bill's such a sexy little hoe :)
Date: 12/17/08 12:28 pm Title: Two
im laughing my ass off right now. havent he seen the wedding planner? they will SO fall in love....but thats kind of the gist of the story...dumb statement. love the chapter.
Author's Response: Heheh, well... Tom's a little slow sometimes XDrnGlad to hear that you liked it. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 12:15 pm Title: Two
Bill, I bet no one could resist a drunk, sexy Tom LOL! Or for that matter, a drunk, sexy Tom can't resist Bill! This chappie was so awesome! Hope Tom don't try to anything sexual...okay, I lyin LOL! ;)
Author's Response: Haw haw :D Don't we all want Tom to try something sexual on Bill? XD rnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/17/08 12:11 pm Title: One
*Gigglesnort*
Author's Response: Hawhaw. We take it that you like the fic? XDrnThanks! :)
Date: 12/17/08 12:09 pm Title: Two
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh
*sighs contently*
this is just getting so damn good
the writing style is really amazing, you're good at telling the story in a funny, detailed way and at the same time describing emotions through both thoughts and actions. I like how you mingle Bill's thoughts into it all, it really provides a sort of connection to the character and literarily gives the reader a pass into his head ,)
I'm also in love with your Tom. Unhappy fiansé anyone? It's just so obvious that Melanie is not the one for him and he seems almost like a teenager rebelling against his mom the way he changed the outfit without even telling her.
And now, Tom being drunk...at first I thought he was just trying to pull Bill's leg, making a joke of his attraction to Tom by playing drunk, but it seems Tomi boy is actually letting out his dark side ,) I like it
So, waiting anxiously for the next chapter, wondering what's going to happen and if maybe Bill's consious is going to have to take a stand or not ,) but like he said, he's not one to resist temptation ,p
love
Author's Response: Awww we're really glad you like our Tom in this story ;) We always love a dark, bad boy Tomi :DrnrnHee. Thank you for this awesome review and we'll update soon so you'll know what decision Bill will make XD Love!