Date: 12/27/08 01:00 pm Title: Four
LOOOOVE! *tadam*
Author's Response: XD Thank you! We're super happy you love it XD
Date: 12/23/08 09:00 am Title: One
IIIIIIIH MORE!!!
Author's Response: Haha kay kay. We updated ;DrnThank you for your review!
Date: 12/23/08 02:01 am Title: Three
*kidnaps tom and sends him to bill's studio, tied with rope and helpless*
AHHHH!!! BILL NEEDS REVEEEENGE! lmao seriously, i just wanted to grab tom and shove his face into a pie! theyr interaction was very dynamic tho. bill is too sweet for a meanie like tom. ugh but i want tom to change his evil ways *cough*melanie/eing a douche*cough* :D i LOVED this chap.oh, the slip-up bill made to andi was fularious! so ya, i really like this chap and i cant wait to see where this story is headed. hope u guys update soon! :]
Author's Response: Muahaha! XD We wanna see Tom's face get shoved into a pie! Muaha :DrnAnyways Tomi will come to his senses... soon :)rnThanks so much for your lovely review. :) We updated recently :)
Date: 12/22/08 08:03 pm Title: Three
OMG I have never laugh so hard with a story before, is fantastic I can´t wait to see what´s going to happend because i´m sure that Bill is not going to stay all quiet.
Please,please put another chapter soon
pleeeeaaaseee
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for your sweet review. We're glad that you like the story. Hehehe, Bill's not gonna stay quiet for long. rnWe updated! XD
Date: 12/22/08 07:42 pm Title: Three
Tom is a complete douche! An asshole is probably giving him too much credit! But I wouldn't expect Tom to lust after Bill after one lay. So it's good that you guys didn't do that.
Author's Response: Ha ha yes. He totally is. But don't we all still love him? XDrnAnyways we're glad you like it that he's not lusting after Bill... yet. XD Thanks for your review.
Date: 12/22/08 06:23 pm Title: Three
oh that was unexpected! i love it. It's obvious tom would be a jerk but, what a PERFECT Jerk he is! lol
their little one on one was so hot!
I'm under the impression that the circumstances of tom and melanie's marriage don't involve love at all. Tom is like "forced".
I hope melanie's not pregnant because if she gains some pounds:
1)it would be impossible to fix her gown,she'll need something else and Bill's not harry potter to create magically an new one in a record time.
2)the situation will be worse about whatever will happen between tom and bill in the mean time.
It'll only get better if Tom and melanie split up because:
1)The baby's not Tom's.
2)Tom's fed up with this mascarade of a mariage
3)Melanie find out about Tom and Bill.
In all cases I hope they'll be together in the end XD. That is all just some silly theory,i know...Just trying to guess.
I'm looking forwad to read about andreas's reaction! (Oh my gawd!! XD)
It's clear that Bill don't have many boyfriends(we was hurt by Tom's finger...)And Tom thought that Bill's hole was a loose one(He just shoved it in without caring the first time )plus his attitude and his words...His excuse of "not thinking straight was so cliché lol, but you guys managed to avoid all the Biggest clichés and produce a rather original story.At first i was thinking "right,another one of those".But i am pleasantly surprised. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for such an awesome review :DrnrnHaha, well, Mel's not pregnant so don't worry heh. She's actually lost some weight. X) rnAnd we'd like to imagine Bill as Harry Potter, HAWHAW XD rnrnHmm. Tom's not actually being 'forced'... but we all know that he's not realy happy cos she's totally neglecting him :( rnrnHAHA. and yup, Bill's kinda busy with his work to have sex and boyfriends so that's probably why his hole wasn't that.... loose :DDDDrnrnAnyways thanks for this lovely review! XD We're glad you like it. rnarnrn
Date: 12/22/08 06:04 pm Title: Three
:O TOM! that bitch! >:[
Author's Response: Yes! :( Haha he's a naughty one :)rnThanks for your review!
Date: 12/22/08 05:52 pm Title: Two
Oh my, so predicable!but it's very amusing to read! Tom's personality is interesting.Not too cliché
Author's Response: Hahaha XDrnThank you. We're glad you like our Tomi here. :)
Date: 12/22/08 05:47 pm Title: Three
O Sheisse! and the plot is getting thicker! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Heheh, XD Thank youu! More to come XD
Date: 12/22/08 05:41 pm Title: One
lol!! I love how you write it! it's funny and at the same time coherent.Nothing too extravagant and long descriptions about Bill's clothing or make-up or whatever...Nothing is too much so i like it. Sometimes, in these type of fics where they are in the "high" society,authors spend too much time describing a piece of clothing or a car. Here,you gave the essential information, and it was enough,not too little not too much.Just enough for the imagination. I think , so far I like this fic already.The characterization is good too.They are quite interesting. It makes me want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Aww thanks for the sweet review, honey. :DrnWe're really glad you like this one. :) Heheh, that's really awesome. Read on yeah? XD
Date: 12/22/08 05:14 pm Title: Three
wow, tom is so mean. but omg, they're so funny.
Author's Response: Ha ha! Yes, we but love mean Tom! XD Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/08 04:40 pm Title: Three
lol
omg this story is amazing girls
can't believe that i haven't read it before
tom is so misterious,i love it but he's so a dickhead
poor bill,i understand him
i'm sorry that he didn't slap tom
post more ASAP
p.s. i really hope it'll have a happy ending (tom+bill=love)
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Date: 12/22/08 03:48 pm Title: Three
Omg, I love this story it, it makes me smile and laugh out loud. I love that Tom's a total dick, too many stories make them love eachother right away, this is perfect. I can't wait to read more. p.s we all know Tom loved it. who wouldn't?
Author's Response: Awww thank you, hon! :D We love Tom being a total dick, too. XD It makes him even sexier, heheheh.
Date: 12/22/08 01:55 pm Title: Three
O_O tomi is a fuktard! how could he do that?!?!?!?!?!?!?! poor billa!
Author's Response: We know. :( Poor Billa, yeah. Haha thank you for your review. :)
Date: 12/22/08 01:49 pm Title: Three
Awwww! Bill...*sniffle*
Tom's an ass >=( He's so wrong for trying to put all the blame on Bill! And the remarks he made about gay guys? Psh. Bill should've kicked him in the balls.
I'm glad you updated! I hope you can post more, soon!! =]
Author's Response: Sighs, Bill's too sweet to kick him. =D We know. But we love mean Tomi XD rnThank you for your review! We updated! :D
Date: 12/22/08 01:41 pm Title: Three
oh GAWD! I freaking popped a chick boner with this:D. Its so fucking sexii.
Haha. Gawd what a fucking jerk that Tom is being. Like,seriously adimit it Tom you fucking love Bill. I mean whothefuck wouldn't;). And Melanie gawd I could just bake a fucking pie of fakeness with all the fakeness she has. Haha. Well this was a GREAT8D chapter!
Author's Response: HAHA :D Aw honey, thank you for your awesome review. We know, right? Tom won't be able to resist Bill... very soon XD Hahaha, pie of fakeness, teehee :P
Date: 12/22/08 01:26 pm Title: Three
Tom is a fucktard. Though it was hot. But damn, Tom is an ass. He should choke on the stupid croissant. >.> I can't wait for more as always. :)
Author's Response: Ack! Yeah, we know. It's hard to love and hate Tom at the same time, right? XD rnThank you! More has come :D
Date: 12/22/08 12:44 pm Title: Three
*giggles like a mad hatter*
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!
*dies from it's greatness*
Author's Response: Heheh! *dies with you* But don't die yet! More will come soon. Thank you for your lovely review XD
Date: 12/22/08 11:13 am Title: Three
oh he is such an ass!
Author's Response: But a sexy ass. :) Ohkay, we've gotta stop staying that. Hawhaw, anyways thank you for your review :D
Date: 12/22/08 11:08 am Title: Three
Wow, nice nice nice (:
Author's Response: Heh *blushes* Thank you!