Date: 12/01/09 07:51 pm Title: Twelve
Thanks so much for updating, it's been sooo long and I love this story. :)
Author's Response: You're welcome :D Thanks so much for sticking with the story all this time too!!! More to come soon, okay? ;D
Date: 12/01/09 07:32 pm Title: Twelve
A levels are hard, im on my AS levels in 6th form.. really hard .. good story though =]
Author's Response: Yeah, A levels are horrible :( Hey, but you can do it! All the best studying for it yeah :D Thanks! We're glad you found it good.
Date: 12/01/09 07:20 pm Title: Twelve
Yay! Finally, she shows that she's not totally oblivious. I really like it. I feel bad for Bill, though.
Author's Response: Yay! We're glad you really like it, :) Yeah, poor Bill huh D:
Date: 12/01/09 04:05 pm Title: Twelve
LEMME HAVE HER, LEMME HAVE HER!!!! I WANNA KILL THAT BITCH!!!!!
Go on?
Author's Response: LOL :D Alright, she's all yours! *gives you Melanie Baker story-character to kill* :DDDrnOkay we'll go on! Thanks for your review! rn
Date: 12/01/09 01:56 pm Title: Twelve
OMG she knows =0 This is so good. I am so glad I found this story and I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
Author's Response: Ooh we're glad you found this story too! Yay! And we're glad you found it good too. More to come soon. Thanks!
Date: 12/01/09 11:23 am Title: Twelve
Oh my God...she's an evil bitch...I loved this chapter it was awesome!!! xxx
Author's Response: Yes she is :( Poor Bill, eh. Muaha. Thanks! We're really glad you thought it was awesome ;D
Date: 12/01/09 11:11 am Title: Twelve
Holyshit!!!!!!!! Tom's got some explaining to do, he better decide real quick before thing's get REAL UGLY! Hope Bill don't have to lose his business and Tom~~~please update soon-**i'll beg and make cookie's**
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom sure does have explaining to do, doesn't he! ;D Haha thanks for the review! Oh and because you'll make cookies for us, we'll definitely update soon! ;D
Date: 12/01/09 11:07 am Title: Twelve
YAY UPDATE!!!!
0_0 omg...the bitch...she knows!and she wants to destroy bill's career
and tom's lying to bill...gah..
update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Teehee, we will soon! Thanks! ;D
Date: 12/01/09 09:46 am Title: Twelve
OMG..... UPDATE!
Author's Response: Okay! We will soon! :DD
Date: 12/01/09 08:39 am Title: Twelve
I hear... Dun dun dun duuuuuunnn!!!O____O
Homaygaaaaaaaaaahhhddd... Melanie did hear Tom!!! SHIIIIITT!!1 I wanna rip that woman's throat right nooooooowww!!! Oh dear.. OMAGAD WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO THEEEEEEMMM!?!?!? *flails and rips hair*
Well, Tom should have told her earlier that he doesn't like her anymore..-____-
Oh btw... I'M GLAD YOU'RE BAAAAAAAACCKK!! *glomps and throws confetti* Well, you're back already, right?:D:D:D:D:D:D Heeeeee...
Author's Response: Hahaha! Relax, sweetie, deep breath!!!! :D Yeah, Tom should have told her D: But he's a typical guy - always wanting to have his cake and eat it too. D: Hahaha. We're glad we're back too. Kinda missed being here too. Thanks for your review! Updates soon!
Date: 12/01/09 08:14 am Title: Twelve
What?! That came from nowhere! I loved it! Glad you guys are back! Update soon!
Author's Response: Heheh we're really really happy you loved it :D Yup updates will come soon! Thanks!
Date: 12/01/09 08:14 am Title: Twelve
Oh yay, an update! I kinda love how Bill's telling Melanie how Tom doesn't marry her and she threatens his career instead. It's like she's going to start forcing Tom to marry her or something. Tom should end this, quick.
Hurrah for your A levels! I have friends going through that in about a year and they're pretty stressed up. Guess we can expect more frequent updates now? :)
Author's Response: Yay thanks! We're really glad that it's over too. Yeah, A levels were like horrid! D: We were pretty stressed up most of this year too. Hope your friends are still taking it pretty okay ;D Yup! We'll try our best to update asap! :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/01/09 06:24 am Title: Twelve
Oh-ho! No. She. Didn't. Well, if I were Melanie, I guess I would, too. Or just break up with Tom, the bastard!
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom, that bastard! D: Hahaha ;D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/15/09 11:23 pm Title: One
ok...tom need to act now!!!!...he is expecting that everything to solve by itself...hope bill and tom can get together...well hope you can start updating this story cuz it`s really good and it would be very sad if you don`t....well i`ll be waiting to read more of your work so....keep going and take care.
Date: 09/24/09 03:39 am Title: Eleven
The shit has hit the fan.
Date: 09/23/09 11:17 pm Title: Three
"I don't give a fish about melanie" Was my favorite line. lol.
Date: 09/08/09 08:12 am Title: Eleven
Uh... Oh... Tom... You're in deep shit.... Really...
Date: 09/02/09 04:52 pm Title: Eleven
oh oh oh, mean cliffy...lol, it was sweet, Tom heading for Bill, and I was going all "awwww!!!" and then, Melanie. Grr, move so Tom can get to yummy Bill... lol, anyway, favorite part, was when you had Bill bury his head into his pillow and go "fuckkk" hahaha, I don't know why, it just was n_n but I love Andi and Gusti...why can't they just all be friends and kill Melanie??!
Date: 09/02/09 01:06 am Title: Eleven
Daaaayuuuummm.
I don't like Melanie anwyays.
I just want Tom & Bill happy together :)
GREAT CHAPTER.