Date: 12/24/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Sooo sooo short pefff
Date: 12/23/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awsome story! I really like it :) It's going on my favorites!
I'm on the beta list and have beta'd for many people if you still need one, I would be glad to help out!
Author's Response: Thanks...
Date: 12/23/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Im hanging here! keep it comin!
Date: 12/23/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
More girls! I need more!
Date: 12/23/08 11:55 am Title: Chapter 2
ooo you are always leaving it like half make us wait for it like a soap don't do that :P
Author's Response: Well, what else would make u come back for more? But there will be less clifhangers after chapter 3... I think...
Date: 12/22/08 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is intersting so far, i'm rather enjoying the sense of suspense!
If it isn't too much to ask, some more detail as to tom's surroundings and what he experiences would be nice. Though very good this has a rushed feel to it.
Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, we know there are almost no detatails, but there will be! This is kinda, u see, the prolog, so in chapter 4 or 5, the real story begins... But yeah, I must say; We will add more details in chapter 3, working on it right away... Thanks for u're review...
Date: 12/22/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
You are so mean! How could you end this chapter like this? All this suspense is killing me! You, meanies...
I still wanna know what happens next, though (I did say I hate the suspense, but I love the story line, I really do!)
I'm sorry about your beta's troubles but I'm afraid I am no good since I'm a non-native speaker, sorry! I really hope you can find a beta soon, since this story is so breath-taking!
Author's Response: Did we say something else? Geesh, we are mean, I know. I also hate suspence, but I kinda like it too. We got some other probs too, without the beta thingy(thanks anyway), u see, my twin(geesh, I hate her right now), deleted chapter 2 and 4... So it might take some longer time for the next update, and if u don't like the suspence, it won't be mutch after chapter 4... Thanks for u're review...
Date: 12/22/08 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep it comin! poor tomi!
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Tomi...Nah, why should we keep it comin? We wouldn't be able to stop!
Date: 12/22/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I want to know more:'(
And to everybody else who might be reading these reviews:
help these girls! They have an awesome story and they deserve an awesome beta!
*pouts* anyone? They've said they might have to delete the story if they don't get a beta:(
Keep it going because I wanna read more!!:DD
Author's Response: Aww, thanks girl! Yeah, we really needs a beta... So thanks for u're review! WerBinIch are gonna kill me for answering this review, I promiser her some too... But since it's u Maddie, I just had too... U rock girl!
Date: 12/21/08 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am exahusted but dying with anxiety. Just three words before I go to bed: give-me-more (which means, I want to know what's inside the shoebox, what will happen to Tom?)
Author's Response: Hehe, well, we will update as soon as our beta sends back chapter 2, she is really late with it, it's been 9 days sice we sent it... Well, she's probobly buzzy. Thanks for you're review, well, we can say as mutch as, we(or maybe just Loran, whos me btw)) loves to hurt Tom...
Date: 12/14/08 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1
WHAT IS IT... a hand? a cell phone? a unicorn? tell me
Author's Response: Why should we tell u? We want u too read the new chapter, that probobly comes later today...
Date: 12/13/08 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Im interested in what will happen next and what made tom scream! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Hmm, what made Tom scream... I know what made Tom scream, and we will update today, I think....
Date: 12/13/08 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmm..
that's very interesting.
i wonder what's in the box.hehe. XD
update soon!!!
Author's Response: We will! As soon as posible, it's actually writen, we just need to send it too our lovly beta...
Date: 12/13/08 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
What what what what?
Author's Response: What what?rnWell, thanks for the review...*gummy bears for u*
Date: 12/13/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking it. =]]
Author's Response: Ahh, Thanks. *gives gummy bears*
Date: 12/13/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy shit, what happened!? What's in the box!? Why did Tom scream!? Does he actually scream!? What's it like!?
I MUST KNOW!!! Hurry hurry hurry! Please, write moar for us, I wanna find out if it's something gory!...OMG, DID THE GUY RUN OVER ONE OF HIS CAPS!!!??? D8
Author's Response: Just ceep thinking, but I must say, that thing with the cap, LOVED IT! But I must say no... We will probobly update tomorrow, I have allredy written most of chapter 2, but I need WerBinIch to look true it, and then our beta have too read it. But stick whit us, *gives gummy bears*
Date: 12/13/08 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
WOWZ. O_O Write more, the suspense is killing me!
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks. I'm writing with the speed of lightning! And I think WerBinIch is doing it too. Thanks for u're review, *gives gummy bears*
Date: 12/13/08 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Detta var jo bra^^
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Ahh, tusen takk.rnrnWe will. *gives gummy bears*
Date: 12/13/08 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
WHAT?! Go on!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, we will. Just gotta wait for Marti to finish the new chapter.rnSo again, Thanks. *gives gummy bears*