Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 04/01/09 11:55 pm Title: White Lilies
I really enjoyed it but I think If you went more in detail about his life at the hospital with bill and bills past and why he died it would be even better! Still great job
Date: 01/29/09 04:54 pm Title: White Lilies
WHY????WHYWHYWHYWHYWHY????? damn you! this is sooooo utterly depressing.
as soon as i saw bill say "trust me tommy, i can fly" i lost it and from that point on was when i sarted repeatedly yelling, WHY????? but aside from that, it's a really sweet story. and dont worry, you didnt fail to bring accross the emotions. you did well! BRAVO!!!
Oh! and i'm guessing that you are tom's unmentionable wife in this story, eh?
baha! ima shut up now.
movin' on!!! *cough mynameisinmybio cough* oh sorry 'bout that. musta chocked on my own saliva *cough*
talk to meh!!!!
Date: 12/16/08 12:44 pm Title: White Lilies
Very touching i love it iput it in my favorites...
Author's Response: wow really!? thanks! im actualy shocked :)rnhere is a tokio hotel shaped cookie just for you :) *gives cookie*
Date: 12/15/08 10:44 am Title: White Lilies
It was good. Yeah, I did see the simliarties between our stories. I'm glad I could ispire you to write this piece. The only thing I ask is that you fix my name in the summary, its PunkyEmoFreak, not PunkyEmoPrincess.
But it was pretty, and sad, all at once. I did like it.
Author's Response: ohhhh thank you! it means so much coming from you! :) oh sorry i will, i got to artist mixed up :Prnbut thank you!
Date: 12/14/08 04:49 am Title: White Lilies
i love it just wish there were more like sequel
Author's Response: thank you :)rnyeah me too, but i got stuck :|
Date: 12/13/08 05:52 am Title: White Lilies
Great story. "I'll save you from yourself" is awesome, isn't it? I really like your take on it. It was really good but also heart-wrenching and sad. I had tears in my eyes by the end. I loved it, thanks for sharing. :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! :) it really is. and thanks i was trying to go for the way of how the scenery would look like if it wasn't a twincest.rnthanks for reading it! it makes me really happy!
Date: 12/12/08 10:47 pm Title: White Lilies
Aww! It's so sad. I really like it though.
Have you ever read the story "I'll Save You From Yourself"?
Author's Response: yes i have. and that is where i got the inspiration from. i REALLY love that story. and i do NOT want to take credit for her idea. its in my summary actually i think. but yes the tom being silent (well its not original) but it was inspired by that.rnrnthanks for reading. :)