Date: 04/30/23 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 04/16/15 03:34 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow... I'm so glad I read this. I think I missed this when it was posted back in the day. But this is super fabulous, in every way. Ugh, I just loooooove classic twincest like this. I love that they're taking it slowly, the way they build up to more. It feels real. Great fic. Thank you so much for writing this. :)
Date: 07/21/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 3
this was a good story!
Date: 04/20/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Hahaha loved it and I loved the note lol
Date: 11/13/10 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Um, it's me again... Sorry for the double review, but it seems that more than half of my previous comment got deleted somehow.
I wanted to add that your english is so impressive... If I hadn't read your bio first and if I hadn't remembered you from MTT, I would think that you are an english native speaker ^^ Truly amazing vocabulary :)
PS: Hope you'll update 'Body Care' soon, I read it yesterday and I'm totally in love with it ;)
Date: 11/09/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, it was absolutely amazing *.* I love how you introduced the whole situation a bit first, instead of going straight to 'smut'. The story definitely has a very special climate, you can feel the love and affection between the twins
Author's Response: Thanks! I like stories where things build up slowly (but nevertheless reach a point where things get really hot). Since it was my first fan fiction story here, I wasn't sure "how far" to go, either, with the smut XD.
Date: 09/10/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved this so much.. It's written so well, and even in their moment of.. passion, it was still so sweet and tender. And Bill's little note at the end made me giggle, hehe. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You found my "baby" - the first story I ever wrote, and I'm glad that so much time later it still happens that a reader stumbles upon it!
Date: 07/20/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1
i just finished my music exam so i know what its like to be pulled down with study dont worry you'll do fine :)
Author's Response: .__. Thank you! I really appreciate this right now. I'm completely stressed out about it. Knowing that it will be all over in 4 weeks is comforting, but for the moment the pressure remains! *hugs*
Date: 07/17/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes. It's true. Your beauty shines. :D
Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? ^__^ *scowls and looks upwards until the halo returns*
Date: 07/17/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should blush. You're flithy... XD
Author's Response: :o Whuuutt?! O.o I'm nottt!! *pouts a bit* *mumbles* Maybe a kind if dirty side, but barely recognizable, like filth in the beauty :P
Date: 07/17/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hi, Andy!! That made me LOL!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) It's cool to see people from MTT here :P Even though I'll be blushing each time now we talk since now you know what kind of stuff I ~really~ write >_> And I see, you like my smilies too :P
Date: 07/10/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 3
i finally found this story i have been looking for it since i got my computer back. Really well written and very hot i think i died and went to twin heaven lol cant wait to read more of your awesome stories
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much :)) I'm glad that you found it, lol. Arghhh yeah it pisses me off not to be able to write more, still 5 weeks of exams >_<
Date: 05/10/09 01:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Having back the blanket and the fact that it was almost dark gave him a feeling of safety. – yeah true!
To already know that Tom was completely naked under the blanket was maddening. To be able to touch everywhere and to discover Tom's reactions, like where he was most sensitive and to what he was most receptive was enough to drive him crazy. – Oh oh my turn next please!
He took Tom's hardness into his right hand, marveled by its warmth. Hoping that his brother would like the same things he did, Bill let his left hand run up the inside of Tom's thigh, stopping at his balls to finger them lightly.
As he felt Bill's palms moving up and down his shaft and stroking his balls simultaneously, Tom gave up his last resistance. He ground against Bill's hands to make him move faster, to do him harder. – ok first hot!!! OMG so hot! Second I havn’t talked about parallels, Bill’s POV then Tom’s POV, yet but I’ve seen them throughout the story they are very well done! I’m so impressed!
He didn't stop jerking him off, but for a while he slowed down the pace involuntarily, matching it to the passion of the moment. It felt like a sensual overload, with all the sensations that their entangled bodies and hands evoked. – nice!
Bill concentrated on his movements, randomly twisting his hand or slowing and accelerating the pace. Firmly, with a tight fist, he pulled down Tom's foreskin completely and grazed the head of Tom's dick with the fingers of his other hand, spreading the slit and distributing the precum, mixing it with his own sweat as a natural lubrication. – very nice details!
This time Tom threw his head back; he couldn't keep still, and Bill knew that he must have hit a spot. – hotttt!
“Oh fuck, yes!” Tom rested his chin on Bill's neck and panted hotly into his ear. Almost inaudible, and still a bit ashamed he pleaded, “Don't stop. I need...mmmmmh...more.” – I love it when they beg!
Tom knew he was close when Bill snatched the head of his penis tightly from above with four fingers and started to rotate it carefully left and right.
“Bill, you...ohhh...fucking...mmmhhh.”
Bill smirked at his brother's loss of words. - *giggles*
“I'll finish it off for you, okay?” – why wouldn’t he?
Without thinking twice Tom stretched his left leg up and coiled it around Bill to give him better access. – nice!
He went for the long strokes now, so that his fist would brush over the tip of Tom's dick and even the most sensitive spots; he would grab so hard that, when pulling down, he'd spread the slit; he'd pull down the foreskin even more than before, twisting and bending intently. – The details are great!
Bill used one of these moments to lean over, licking his lips. As Tom didn't pull back, he kissed him softly and connected their tongues. He shuddered when Tom moaned into his mouth, feeling the vibrations deep in his throat – very hot!
With his left hand already in a perfect position he kept his thumb in place and started to rub the whole sac with his remaining fingers, lifting it up and groping playfully.
This seemed to be Tom's undoing - *flutter claps* awesome!!!
When he felt the first convulsions, he squeezed tight around the shaft and pumped in the same rhythm as Tom shot his load. – nice timing hard to do that!
After hours of teasing and foreplay he finally found his release. He shuddered as the last waves of his orgasm pulsated through his whole body. – very nice!
Maybe it was then when Tom realized what just happened; his eyes flew open, and he gasped as he saw himself coiled around Bill's lap. – surprise lol!!
“Wow,” Tom mumbled, “that was...”
“Intense?” Bill offered. – yeah to say the least.
“Want me to bring you to bed?” – wrong word.. “Want me to TAKE you to bed?”
Tom faked a big pout, whining, “You’d send me to bed already? What about the other drinks? You made me thirsty again!”
Bill spluttered, shaking his head incredulously. “Yeah, it's all my fault.” Feeling cocky, he added, “Didn't we learn in biology that it's important to equalize your fluid balance? You've got some serious refilling to do, Tom.” - *snorts* omg so funny!
“What about you?” – awh so cute!!
“You can return the favor another time. I'm okay, don't worry. Tonight was for you.” – adorable!
Do not enter! Tom threw up.
There’s puke everywhere on the floor, table and seats.
We'll clean it up tomorrow. You've been warned.
-- Bill
Tom was staring back and forth between the note and Bill's smirking face.
“Like I told you. I made sure that we wouldn't be disturbed.” – sooooo funny very clever boy!
Date: 05/10/09 01:38 am Title: Chapter 2
'Satan Knows You're A Poser' – I love that shirt lol!!!
Feeling his brother cuddle closer, he found himself staring at his twin in awe and tried to shake himself out of his hypnosis. Tom felt his insides warming up. He loved his brother more than he could tell, and Bill always seemed to know how to please him. Moments like these made him feel like at home, however shitty the day may have been. – awh! So sweet!
The mere thought of being separated for only a few days made his stomach painfully cramp and contract into a knot. What good would future be, if his day didn't start with his twin smiling at him? – so cute!
Skittles and gummi worms fine but Rainbow Twizzlers – vomits eeewww!!! Gross!!!
He had his makeup undone – no not the right word it’s a little odd… He had removed his make up
Tom missed the short haircut with the trademark hair bush, nearly covering his eye – no wrong phrasing again… with his trademark of bangs, nearly covering one eye
He couldn't help himself to tell his admiration and caring with words right now – nope… He was so overwhelmed with admiration and love that couldn't even put it into words
Bill held their gaze, enjoying how they communicated without any words. Tom's eyes told him how deeply he loved and cared for him, the arm around his shoulders that they belonged together and that he claimed Bill for himself, the tightness of the grip and Tom's slightly shivering lips about his fear to lose him. – so sweet!!!
“To us,” Tom whispered, shivering under the intense gaze. - *grins*
He wanted to make this moment special. – Why is this a special moment is it that they have a little free time together or something more???
Whatever would or would not happen was up to them, but he felt ready to amplify their relationship, to adapt it to their current needs and desires. The subtle changes developing over the last weeks didn't go unnoticed to Bill. – ah! See I’m smarter then I look.
He noticed that Bill lagged behind seriously and hovered with his straw over Bill's drink, raising an eyebrow. - *gasp* yes he is greedy.
With any other person he'd feel exposed, unprotected. But never with Bill; he didn't need to hide or feel ashamed. Receiving this kind of attention and caressing from his brother was what he craved; it was easily worth missing sleep and being awfully tired the next day. – awh! Sweet!
He could feel his heartbeat speed up as he pondered in what other ways Bill would make it up to him. Where would he touch him, now that they were alone? – ja bitte!
“You're gonna help me to clean up tomorrow, Tom. The kitchen is completely fucked up.“ - *laughs*
“Ungrateful little bastard,” he growled, just loud enough for Tom to pick it up. Tom just kept the sneer on his face. – lol!
Tom swallowed hard, his eyes widened and the straw dropped from his lips, as he felt Bill's bare foot touching his knee, then slowly and gently going up the inside of his thigh. - *bites lip* oh my!
This was clearly neither a playful nor an innocent touch. But somehow he’d waited for Bill to do something ever since he came, had expected him to take some action. – surprise!
Tom's boner - *rolls eyes* boner? *shakes head* no silly silly word, this is a word we use when we are young and are too embarrassed to use “naughty words” cock or dick would be more appropriate.
Tom steadied himself by gripping the table with both hands, looking scandalized. - *giggles*
“Bill!“ He actually had to clear his throat and swallow twice before hissing, “What if somebody comes in?“ – that’s what he’s protesting to lol!
Tom buried his face in his hands, trying to hide his red cheeks and choke his moans. He was embarrassed, but at the same time he instinctively ground into Bill's foot, seeking more friction. His breathing became more and more erratic, from time to time he would inhale sharply thought his teeth and moan longingly with pleasure. – oh my! *blushes* very hot!
“...I heard you.”
…“Yeah? Well so did I.” Tom tilted his head and flicked his tongue over the lip ring. “Third time this week already. You’re really loud just before you cum.“ - *gasp* not what I was expecting, awesome I love to be caught off guard!
Making use of Tom's inattentiveness, Bill took the chance to position both of his hands simultaneously on Tom's thighs with a firm grip. - *gasp* clever boy!
With sparkling eyes Bill watched his brother's facade crumble into pieces. – fun!
His fingertips slipped underneath Tom's boxers, and he felt the heat and the wetness from the precum. – ok that’s just hot!
He leaned back and tried to steady himself, clinching into the seat on both sides of him as hard as he could. – not clinching…holding
With a last effort, he managed to croak, “Uhm, Bi-Bill. What did you...fuck!“
This was the moment when Bill's right hand got a hold on Tom's dick. - *cracks up*
Tom forced his eyes to open and his mouth to whisper. “What did you mean when you said, uh, you know, that you’d make it up to me?” – ha ha ha!!!
Tom was at a complete loss about what was going on. – really cause I’ve got a pretty good idea. *grins*
Tom held his breath as he watched the pale shape of his brother, lightened lowly and only occasionally by random flickering that came from other cars. – shape of his brother, the room was lit only by the only the occasionally by random flickering that came from other cars.
“Trust me, Tomi. It's okay. You need this. We need this. I promise, we won't be disturbed.” – uh-oh the minute you say this someone is going to figure it out. Lol I hope I’m wrong but Gustav has been fairly observant.
Date: 05/10/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
He was still in a state of trance, just like the others. It was one of these shows that blew your mind, leaving you so hyped that you'd think you still could go on for hours. – nice way to start!
It had began some minutes ago – sorry beta moment, not began…begun
Tom felt a little kick against his ankle and turned his head. His brother looked at him, slightly concerned, with an unspoken question on his face. Damn. He didn't want Bill to be worried, but how was he supposed to hide anything from him. It was just impossible. He always knew. It was as if he could read Tom's mind. – cute!
He shuddered immediately, felt slight shivers all over his body. He couldn't help it, even if he knew Bill was going to touch him. It was just too good. - *chuckles*
Tom tried his very best to keep his mouth shut. He never stopped being amazed by the magic his brother could do with his hands. He felt his sore muscles relax and the pain starting to fade already. – very nice!
A low moan caught Gustav's attention. He looked surprised at the twins. – lol uh-oh!
Gustav snickered. “Aw, look at them. They’re like chimpanzees rummaging through each other's fur.” - *snorts and laughs*
Bill instinctively wanted to protect Tom, but he had to stay in his role – hum?! Fishy!
He was supposed to feel relaxed and content. Only that. But he wasn't supposed to feel this heat rising up his cheeks and pooling down into his... - *gasp*
To everybody who watched, Bill's face expressed utter boredom and impatience, but this was just pretending. He was highly concentrated on Tom's breathing, slowly adding more caressing and teasing into his routine, not missing one tiny sound that came from Tom's lips. – nice!
Bill heard Tom sighing in contempt. – contempt why contempt? That would be hate.
It wasn't the first time that his touches had given Tom a hard on. The thought of it excited Bill and he fought a moment to keep his composure. – *giggles*
“Sorry, we really should be going too. Are you feeling better now?”
Tom was at a complete loss at how Bill could sound so cheerfully innocent and mocking at the same time. - *giggles* awful he’s such a mean awful brother lol!
“You're good, but not that good,” – liar, liar pants on fire!
Tom whispered back and complained, “It still hurts a bit, by the way. And I think you missed a spot, right here”, pointing to a random area on his back.
On their way out Bill deliberately slowed his pace, waiting for their bodyguard to turn around a corner. He took the opportunity to shove Tom against the wall. With a mischievous smile he used his thumb to graze Tom's lips, locking their gazes just for a second.
“I will make it up to you.” – NICE!!!
Date: 05/03/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was so lovely. I liked that there was an introduction before the twins began sexy-time ,) It spread it out so the timing seemed more realistic -- or well, as realistic as you can get here.
Your writing was flawless; it is so pretty and delicate, and just really, really nice to read. :)
Author's Response: Omg thank you so much! It makes me happy that after almost half a year people read my first TH-/twin-/slash-story..... *___* Ugh, you are too nice! >_< Thanks, really...I appreciate it (=
Date: 01/27/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG you so need more "Band Lounge twin adventures"! I absolutely love it when Bill takes control while Tom gives it up, and this was deliciously so well done XD
Author's Response: Thank you! In fact I take this story as a basis for my own "twin relationship" progress, and wherever they go from here, this was the beginning. I'm very critical about my stories, and it might take some time (2-3 months?) until I'm satisfied that I have found the right way to continue this. Meanwhile there's a bit smut to come very soon :P
Date: 01/09/09 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story, and very clever Bill ;)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading! Oh yes Bill is a smart kid...tricky and teasing (=
Date: 01/04/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh God... I just posted something in the MTT forum so I'm not gonna make it long here XD
I loved it, honestly, I really like the way you write =)
I do need more band lounge twin adventures!!! please write more *_*
Author's Response: I'm really happy about how you guys at MTT support my story. I guess it's not so easy when you write for the first time, and this warm welcome and acceptance means so much to me! About my English – credits to my beta; she's been so supportive and I learn a lot by working with her! Thank you so much for giving this a try! I won't let this one go, it's my baby after all and I'm fond of it. It will be continued. Probably not in the next 3 months though, I have too many exams coming up. I'm very glad that people say I have my own style of writing; I'd hate to be copying someone. The highest aim for any author is probably if one day someone reads a story and says, yep that's clearly her/him.
Author's Response: I'm really happy about how you guys at MTT support my story. I guess it's not so easy when you write for the first time, and this warm welcome and acceptance means so much to me! About my English – credits to my beta; she's been so supportive and I learn a lot by working with her! Thank you so much for giving this a try! I won't let this one go, it's my baby after all and I'm fond of it. It will be continued. Probably not in the next 3 months though, I have too many exams coming up. I'm very glad that people say I have my own style of writing; I'd hate to be copying someone. The highest aim for any author is probably if one day someone reads a story and says, yep that's clearly her/him.
Date: 12/30/08 11:06 am Title: Chapter 3
it was very nice! I cetainly would like to read some more
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The continuation is for a little later; I have 2 other stories coming up first, and my oral exams will need more and more focussing.