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Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/17/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh Tom better have a good excuse for that one!
Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/14/08 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1
tomi is stupid
Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/12/08 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
-_-*
*pulls out a bazzoka*
*points it to tom*
*glares*
...apologize you fucking cap-lover son of a bitch
(GOOD STORY :D )
Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/11/08 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this, not a bad start. Please keep going. This is very good. More please. I'll give a whole bunch of cookies.
Author's Response: hmmm.... what kind of cookies?
Reviewer: be_truthful Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 12/11/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's good. I suggest a beta reader, though. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing to big.
Hope you update the next chapter soon! ^^
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