Date: 06/06/17 05:31 pm Title: Russian Magic.
I was so excited when I noticed you had updated and then the confusion but I figured you just had some problems :D I'm so glad you updated though!!
Ugghh I'm really troubled with this story though. This is really good and in that way I like it a lot and enjoy reading, but then because the subject is what it is I'm having difficulties reading it but also having hard time staying away either :D:D:D because of personal preferences and traumas I find it really hard to read sexual abuse of any kind and if I encounter those kind of things in fics I just skip over those moments because I can still enjoy the rest of the story, knowing it happened doesn't bother me but getting into the scene and reading it happening does. So when Bill was with Bushido I was like 'I should skip this I should skip' but then I wanted to know what happens so that I can predict how Tom will feel about it XD gosh I'm such a weirdo at times. I couldn't stay away hahah
I hate that Bill's doing drugs and Tom likes Julia too much but I was really glad to notice that Tom actually missed Bill and regretted being harsh on him. I still think you write Tom sooo well. His character is very real and strong, good job. All his emotions are yummy to read.
I'm still gonna stick around but I had to read those warnings again and hmm we'll have to see. This is addictive! Thanks for the update and hopefully we'll see again soon
Author's Response: Thank you again for a lovely review! Really nice to read your comments :) And i understand about the abuse, and if it helps i don't intend to write anything very graphically, i'm trying to focus more on the emotional trauma of it afterward but i can put a warning ahead to let you know if another scene like that will happen. I'm glad you like Tom because i was kinda struggling with him since he is a very quiet character compared to Bill, but i hope his silence says something in itself. Thanks again! ♥
Date: 06/06/17 01:43 am Title: They see, they feel; believe.
Im so happy that you retake this fic. I love it. I'm a old lector I love this so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support :) I hope you like the new chapter!
Date: 06/04/17 05:01 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
My poor, poor heart... this is all so sad!
Please do carry on :p
Author's Response: It won't be sad forever, i promise! :) I just posted the new chapter!
Date: 05/17/17 08:18 am Title: They see, they feel; believe.
Love this 👌👌👌
Author's Response: Thanks 😘
Date: 05/02/17 11:06 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
I'm a new reader and I really love this so far!! I've read it all in one day and can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is some dedication! I wrote most of it when i was about 15 and just turned 24 now so my writing style has probably changed a lot but i'm glad you like it! Will be updating soon :)
Date: 04/30/17 11:12 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
I love this story. New reader here, but I will be back!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving the review! Working on the new chapter right now :)
Date: 04/27/17 06:22 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
I'm so happy you updated, your writing is so good. I'm glad Bill didn't kiss Andi just to get back at Tom, and it's good that Tom now understands Bill's jealousy. I'm so hoping that eventually the twins will find somewhere decent to live and have a better life. Hope you'll update again soon. Love Helen xx
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Glad you like it and yes the twins really need to find something better but don't worry, i have a good idea planned. x
Date: 04/27/17 03:05 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
Great chapter. Now Tom knows how feel Bill he being with Julia. Jajajaja but really Andreas is a bad thing. Bill in hard drugs :( but its normal in this kind of life so it's normal. I love Billshido so I really really love this fic though sad for the situations is great to read :) I hope my English understands I'm very bad at it
Author's Response: I'm also a secret fan of Bushido haha so while i kinda like him, i love to abuse his portrayal as a character like i have done here. Hope he is still believable to his image though. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04/27/17 09:26 am Title: They see, they feel; believe.
To be honest the beginning was kinda boring because it was just abuse after abuse after abuse so it wasn't interesting to read you know? But I totally get it since this story was started years ago and now rewritten so I get it.
Anyway after twins met Georg and Gustav things got interesting and now I really really loved the previous two chapters. Ahh this is so much fun!!! I like your writing style, the way you write about both twins' thoughts. And especially I liked the way you wrote about how excited Tom was to tell Bill all about it not expecting Bill to be angry etc AND THEN HAHAHA coming home and seeing Bill with Andreas sorry Tom you deserved it. But I loooved the last chapter ahh. Good balance of nice and bad. But I wish Bill isn't gonna become a true drug addict because I'm probably not gonna read it if it happens. Just my personal taste. Anyway it's your story :D:D
Cannot wait for the next chapter when Bill is gonna throw up and Tom will learn the true consequences of his little date with Julia and what leaving Bill alone meant. Ahh the feels. Please update soon, I'll be waiting for more! This is delicious!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read this and write an honest review :) I understand what you mean about the start and i had thought about re-re-writing it so that the past stories were only flashbacks rather than long chapters, but i thought i don't want to change it again. And yep it's not good for Bill at the moment but we gotta hope that Tom can save him before it's too late right? :D I've had the rest of the fic actually planned out for a while so i hope i'll be able to write it out well! Thanks so much btw. ♥
Date: 04/27/17 08:10 am Title: They see, they feel; believe.
Took a hour to read all this (wanted to soak it in) and I loved it! Yes! Soo many feeling and I feel bad for both twins. Hope they see their mom soon or maybe run into her somewhere. I hope Tom spends more time with Julia. He's going to need a distraction. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! I have some good stuff planned for the story, well i mean i have some heavy stuff planned, but i will try write it out for you guys when i can!
Date: 04/26/17 11:13 pm Title: They see, they feel; believe.
Im an before reader. But I will read again since begin :). Happy your back. This fic is very good I remember !! XD
Date: 06/15/15 12:24 am Title: Too tired of goodbyes.
That little shit Andi! I understand Bills jealousy & feeling abandoned by Tom since they're always together but Tom has needs too. I just hope he'll be able to help Bill before he's too far gone in the world of Andi & Bu. Ready for more.
Author's Response: Let's hope Tom wakes up and realises it before it's too late... :( Working on the next chapter now and i want to try and get it up before i go to Germany this week!
Date: 06/10/15 10:33 am Title: They never hear a name.
I cried for a little for Tom you know. This is so sad. In previous chapters, Tom’s always the tougher one though he did showed his weakness one time or two. But in this chapter, his broken arm and his embarrassment about unable to read made my heart ache for him. He’s just a child but he have to be strong for life :(
Author's Response: Aww yup :( He tries to be strong because he wants to protect Bill from the world, but really it's just a horrible place for the two of them and he can't hide everything. Thank you for the review! ♥
Date: 06/09/15 03:36 am Title: Too tired of goodbyes.
Tom should chose Bill over Julia but hey we all make terrible choices 😑. Ah shit bill your gonna get addicted 😱😱😱
Author's Response: Yup :( Whenever the twins arent together, bad decision always happen and theyre both gonna have to suffer the consequences of them.
Date: 06/08/15 07:20 pm Title: Too tired of goodbyes.
wow... 2008, I remember when I was on here 24/7 back then, reading every story I could find... can't believe it's been 7 years since then... and damn you're continuing your story 7 years later :'D all the best xox
Author's Response: Awww thank you for the review :) I know, seven years, right?! That's so nice to see someone who stuck around so long. :) I've changed quite a bit of the original first few chapters and i'm so determined this time to finish it! I also recently finished Somebody Cares, another abandoned story of mine in case you read that back in the day. ~tascha.
Date: 06/04/15 04:39 pm Title: Eyes without lies.
Aww poor Bill 😱😱😱. To! You should pay more attention to Tom( I actually feel like my mother telling me to pay more attention to my sister...) Mmm poor Bill. Please don't let anyone hurt him *insert puppy eyes*
Aww happy birthday 💜!!! Hope you had a nice day!!! Its a shame you spent it alone though 😢. Tour lucky you have a summerish birthday!!! You have a better chance of getting good weather (saying that I'm pretty sure in England 98.9% of the time it is raining ahah) anyway I lived the chapter 💜
Author's Response: Thank you for the birthday wishes! :) Oh i wish i could tell you things will be okay for Bill (and Tom) but this is really only the start.. :(
Date: 06/04/15 04:05 pm Title: Eyes without lies.
Happy birthday.
:-)
I like so much this story
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you! :)
Date: 06/04/15 01:42 pm Title: Eyes without lies.
Hi, just wanted to let you know that I have been following this story but not reviewing. It's really good, I love the way you describe the characters and Bill and Tom's shitty environment. And I could really feel the tension in this chapter both when bushido was chatting to Bill and when he was persuading Andi. Please don't be discouraged by lack of reviews, not everyone takes the time to review even if they have enjoyed a chapter. I'll be waiting for the next update. Hugs Helen x
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This really made my day! :) I've been feeling pretty shitty about it because the words don't seem to come out as good as they used to so it's really nice to hear that! I'm glad you felt that in the part with Bushido- i'm trying to foreshadow things and i guess you can see where they're gonna end up. Thank you so much- i'm trying not to let it bother me and just focus on writing but your words were a big encouragement :)
Date: 05/20/15 10:48 am Title: They never hear a name.
Oooh hmm it will be exciting to see how bill reacts..
Date: 05/17/15 04:57 pm Title: Life in the skies.
oooh and awesome chapter poor lil bill and tom
Author's Response: Yup they've got a pretty hard life out there. :( Thank you for the reviews ♥