Date: 02/15/09 05:08 pm Title: High School
She HAS to agree that both need to fix this somehow, whether Tom is your ex or Bill is your best friend. She cares for them both, doesn't she? She has to see how much they love each other. And ya know, sometimes people just need to get slapped for them to start making sense!
Yes, I'm all about the bitch slap. Why do you ask? :-P
Author's Response: Yup. Well let's just say she cares more about Bill then she cares about Tom. LOL... Yeah maybe. HA HA!! bitch slap.
Date: 02/15/09 04:21 pm Title: No More Hurt
agh headaches suck, hope it passes! haha yeah, hmm...maybe nichole could move away or something or like she tries to interfere with Toms pimp and gets beat up or something...maybe its too violent or something like that *shrug* as long as it makes the story interesting!
Author's Response: Yeah headsaches do suck. Yeah it's passing slowly. Nah nothing bad's going to happen to Nichole... you'll have to see what Bill does to her though. LOL!!! I'll try something
Date: 02/15/09 04:03 pm Title: High School
Well, at this point, BOTH need to get bitch slapped. Nichole already did Tom, she can gang on Bill now.
Author's Response: LOL!!!! HA...I totally agree with you. HAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAH!!!!!
Date: 02/15/09 03:54 pm Title: High School
If Bill doesn't hit him, I will! God, the whole basis of a relationship is that you learn to TRUST the other person and keep the lines of communication OPEN.
Tom is doing neither.
So, again, ARGH!!
Author's Response: Yea well I don't think bill's respecting that either. I mean Tom clearly needs someone to be there for him and Bill doesn't know what's going on and tell's Nichole a bunch of crap.. so it's his fault. LOL!!!! I understnd your fraustration...NOT!! :P
Date: 02/15/09 03:39 pm Title: No More Hurt
ooh yay new chappie! im good, how are u? oh wah theyre not together, that was a shock! o.o but sheesh poor Tomi about being a whore...Bill has to learn to accept it or something! and youre making Nichole a problem even if u didnt mean to xD but that was sad... T.T yet awesome!
Author's Response: I'm also good... well kinda. I have a headache but it's passing. I know... I'm sorry. Finally another one that feels bad for Tom. Yeah he does need to learn... but he won't...lol. YES !!! I know Nichole is a problem... maybe i should do something about it...lol. I'm glad you found it awesome.
Date: 02/15/09 02:18 pm Title: No More Hurt
ARGH! why can't you just get to why tom has to do that shit and...well, what it is he has to do?!?!?!
BLARGHERARGHENHEIMERARGH!!!
GOD! now you HAVE to update! *slaps self*
Author's Response: LOL!!! Cause I like to torture you guys and it's boring if you guys find out too soon. Don't hit yourself. I'll try and write more as soon as possible.
Date: 02/15/09 12:14 pm Title: No More Hurt
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why Yuri? Why? I know, because you're evil... but.. and they... so he... and I... Bill and Tom... UGH! Why why why why why why why???? Please let them get back together again!!! PLEASE!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!
Author's Response: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! Cause I'm evil. You know that :P. WAIT and you will see.
Date: 02/15/09 11:03 am Title: No More Hurt
You are one cruel person :p
1. You still won't tell me what's happening to tom!
2. Bill + tom breaking up??? *cries*
It sucks cause you're an amazing writer so i have no choice but to wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: I know i am :P Nope i won't tell you guys what happened.. so be patient. Yeah i know.. i needed them to break up. Thanks and yeah you have to wait... it won't be long. I promise
Date: 02/15/09 06:25 am Title: No More Hurt
Poor Tom, I really feel bad for him. I can guess what's happening but I don't know if it's true or not.
And Bill. When I read some parts of this chapter, I have this feeling that he doesn't really love Tom. But then again I think he does. I'm little bit confused. Maybe I'm thinking too much ;)
I hope everything will be ok for both of them and between then so they could get back together. I think Bill is what Tom needs after what he has been going through.
xx
Author's Response: Finally someone who feels bad for Tom! It's about time. No he really does love Tom... he just not patient when it comes to secrets. You'll see. OMG FINALLY!!! someone who can see that Tom needs Bill and not the other way around. *hugs*
Date: 02/15/09 05:48 am Title: No More Hurt
ARGH!!!!
Author's Response: LOL.
Date: 02/15/09 04:35 am Title: No More Hurt
OKI TOM IS DEAD AGAIN!!!! PLEASE LET ME KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I WANT TO KILL HIM! Oki I'm angry why can't he tell BIll!!!!!? Thay are perfekt together! SO GIVE ME MORE NOW!
Author's Response: NO ONE KILLS TOM!!! NO!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!! I think that was pretty explained in the chapi. LOL!!! I'll try and write more soon
Date: 02/15/09 04:32 am Title: No More Hurt
you MOST tell me what`s going on!? plz??? im soon getting crazy just wondering about what it it about tom :P PLZ?? and btw this was a really good chapter but bill and tom CAN`T BREAK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :S
Author's Response: It'll come soon. I promise. Okay maybe not but it's coming. THEY DID!!!! So deal with it... don't worry. THings will get better soon.
Date: 02/15/09 03:42 am Title: No More Hurt
Man this chapter was wonderful!!! You always end it just when it gets good! I have a problem with Bill and Nichole's friendship though. I can understand confiding in your bff about your relationship problems ,but I think she gets way to invovled. I mean she really didn't have the right to come and confront Tom about his and Bill's problems. Thats just my opinion. Love the story though!
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I know.. sorry. I totally agree with you... i didn't even realize that until you pointed it out...lol. No you're right but oh well... it's done. I'm glad you love it.
Date: 02/15/09 03:38 am Title: No More Hurt
O______O OMG!!! morrreeeee
Author's Response: HAHA!!! I'll write more as soon as possible.
Date: 02/09/09 07:08 am Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
You are so fucking evil Yui! Tom, a whore??? how could you????!!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAH!!! It's now that you noticed...lol. Yes he's a whore. Well i can cause i'm evil...LMAO
Date: 02/08/09 07:49 pm Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
I dont know what to say roght now.. actually.. So, whn my head clears, I'll re-review. Be happy I finally got to it
Author's Response: Lol... you're brain is dead... oh... well at least you read it. I am happy you read it
Date: 02/08/09 09:53 am Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
I love u story! Give me more NOW!!! PLZ!!!! PLZ PLZ!!! Give me more now!
Author's Response: Lol... i have homework to do for tomorrow... but i'll try and write some at school and rewrite it at home.
Date: 02/08/09 03:37 am Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
i really love this chapter! but can i PLEASE know whats going on with tom and his brothers??? please, its killing me here!!! :P
Author's Response: Yeah... I'm glad you love it. I know. Everyone wants to know. I'm sorry. I'm trying really hard to do homework and update but it's hard/
Date: 02/08/09 02:08 am Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
ohmigod i was so happy when i saw you updated you made me happy! o.o ohmigod Toms a whore? i was NOT expecting that at all, nice twist but poor Billa! how the hell is he gonna take the news? and then Toms gonna have to explain everything...this cant be good, i dont want them to break apart! and dont worry about us waiting for the next chappie, we waited for this one patiently so we will wait again! yay and thanx for updating *hug*
Author's Response: I'm glad you're happy. Yeah... he's a whore. I bet no one was. Lol... well you;ll figure that out soon. You must the only one who waited patiently for this... cause everyone else is all like: "I'm dying!!!" lol. *hug back* I'll try and post soon
Date: 02/08/09 01:07 am Title: Eavesdropping Isn't Good
=O okay. my diagnoses:
i think that because they are all half brothers with the same dad, and since they talked about him being a bad person a while ago, i think that he either makes them whore themselves out, or he makes them let him do "things" with them. or at least he did. he probably used to do it to all of them, until tom said that he would do anything if he left the others alone. that would also explain why he pays them "salory" like they said he gave them to be able to eat and live.
sorry! long review.
Author's Response: It's a good diagnoses. I don't mind long reviews. I actually like it when people have a lot of things to say.