Date: 01/18/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
My favorite lines:
"He also refused to call thee man ‘Brother Tom’. It made what he was about to do seem morally wrong." For some reason, that line made me laugh. Not in a bad way. It just sounded like something that my friend Tara would say... waggling her eyebrows suggestively the entire time. :)
"“Besides, you’re not a man of God for another month.” That one was just funny. Bill is such a cute little smartass. Even though he's older than me. XD
"Forgive me Father, for I have sinner. I have fucked a boy named Bill in your confession booth. And I think I liked it." The "and I think I liked it" were the perfect final words. You know how you read a chapter, and the final words just make you go, "Wow,"? That was it.
Absolutely perfect, my friend! I hope that you do add another chapter. If you do, I'll be here. Reading it. (duh lol) XD
Author's Response: Lol. bwahahahahaah. I'm glad you like my work as much as I like yours lol. I'm working on a new chapter now, I just have so many other updates (plus I'm at home which means I'm not able to update as quickly as I used to) I am trying to get it updated SOMETIME this week. xDD and I love that you chose my favorite lines to review about xDD And ja, Bill is a smartass, but it's cool, he's a cute/slutty smartass. xDD
Date: 01/18/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Oh my, It's hard to resist Bill ;)
“Oh God. Fuck me harder Tom.” He panted. “Fuck me so hard that you forget God’s name and the only think you can remember is mine."
Bad boy!
Loving it! I hope the second chapter will be ready soon! :)
xx
Author's Response: lol. It really is hard to resist that boy, but Tom is trying. and I am TRYING so effing hard to continue this story. SluttyBill is so hard for me to write when I'm not in a smut mood xDD. And oh gawd, I love that you loved that line xDD And Bill is a fucking trip xD
Date: 01/18/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
That was epic. That had me, literally, rolling on the floor laughing. Which isn't that hard, since my computer is on the floor and I have no chair, but I don't think I've ever actually fallen over and laughed, whilst rolling on said floor. If you can think of something for a ch2, PLEASE post it!
Author's Response: BWAHAHAH. Thanks for calling this epic. ^_^ I'm glad I could have you rolling on the floor laughing. xD I definitely had fun writing it (and shoving in all the obnoxious puns I could think of xDD) I'm STILL working on the next chapter, but I've lost my smutty muse, and I can't write anything decent (pwp smut like) for the life of me. I'm going INSANE trying to think of ways to make Bill all smutty and sexy xDD
Date: 12/30/08 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
OKAY GOD DAMIT I READ IT AGAIN AND GOT ALLEXCITED ALL OVER AGAIN!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER! IF YOU DO THAN THAN *thinks* I WILL SEND BILL TO YOUR HOUSE NAKED!? OK GOOD YAY! PLEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE :D
Author's Response: lol, okay, okay i FINALLY have a new chapter for you lol. it took me forever because i really couldn't get myself in the mood to write for this story.
but now i'm back and it's better than ever (I hope) ^^
Date: 12/28/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
another one please....that was so good (Y)!
Author's Response: lol. i'm working on the next chapter...its taking FOREVER >.< lol. thanks for the review ^_^
Date: 12/27/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
you are the best a smut i must say. the things that i love, you have written. now, you have to continue with more kinky shit, and i will be forever yours lol.
this is like the 4th review ive given you in one day.
youre addictive Gorgeous.
Author's Response: lol. TEHEHEHEH....I'm glad that you think I'm so good at smut xDD I'm glad that you loved it. I was trying SUPER hard to make this as super-sexy-fucktastic as possible xDDD I will most definitely continue, i wanna update ALL of my stories in one day O.O scary, i know. xDDD and thanks for all the reviews...you make me feel loved and thanks for calling me addictive and gorgeous...^_^
Date: 12/26/08 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
C'MON! YOUR KILLING ME HERE tehe (: checked everyday since i first read it for an update WAHOO! IM WAAY TO PERVERTED, 0_-. 0__________o
So anyway, yeah UPDATE WOOO!
Author's Response: lol. sorry about that. I had to update some of my main stories first and then start/finish my Christmas fic, On Santa's Lap..., which btw, if you LOVED this story, you should definitely check it out. rnrnAnyways, TODAY is the day I have assigned for writing the next chapter of Holy Fucking, so you should be getting a yummy new update soon.
Date: 12/22/08 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Heilig scheisse that was amazing! If Tom was trying to be a preist, I'd wanna break him too. *giggle snort* Lordy lordy. CONTINUE!
Author's Response: lol....i'll continue so long as you keep helping me with all this freaky-deakyness xDDDD
Date: 12/12/08 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
TWO-SHOT!!!!!!!! :)))
Author's Response: Heilig Scheisse....i didn't realize that i never responsed....AND DONT WORRY...it'll have another chappie soon, I've been dealing with stuffles now that I'm home from college. HOPEFULLY I will be able to update my stories in one swoop ^_^
Date: 12/12/08 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
OH WHOW YAY! WHOOOOOO YAY SO EXCITED NOW ^^
Author's Response: lol....I'm super happy that you're excited, and I promise there will be an update soon. I was just going through a scheisse-load of things at home >.<
Date: 12/10/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
TWO SHOT, TWO SHOT MAKE IT A TWO SHOT I VOTE TWO SHOT!
Author's Response: lol...well my dear, you're definitely getting your vote's worth ^_^ I started chapter two this morning...i'm hoping to finish it sometime soon ^_^
Date: 12/10/08 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Yes indeed this needs another chapter.(^_^) I'm loving the confession booth.
Author's Response: lol....well dearie...i'm working on the next installment, like now. no seriously, like now-now xDDD. and thanks for loving the confession booth part ^_^
Date: 12/10/08 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
wow!!! O_O u should write another one!!! i love this!!! keep writing
Author's Response: lol...thanks for wowing to my story ^_^ and i definitely am writing another chapter ^_^
Date: 12/10/08 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Sorry, I couldn't review before, darling!
I read it yesterday though. xD
Anyway... It was SOOO Sexyyy! Sexy-Hexy! xD
I was so horny after reading that. *laugh*
AND, Shell, I NEED this story to be LONG! Very long! I love naughty stories so much. I have crush on them! XD
So, make it long and naughty! My perverted mind wants more.
Bitte! (a)
Good! Now go and write for meh! :D
Author's Response: lol..its okay about the late review lol. i'm just happy that I got it eventually ^_^....im glad you thought it was sexy ^_^ and woah, horny? O.O WOW xDD don't worry, I'll write more. I'm trying to decide if it'll be a two shot or perhaps more than that. Lol. And yea, naughty stories are awesome ^_^ Lol. I'll write for you guys as soon as i wake up from my nap xDD
Date: 12/09/08 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
u actually wrote this? i thought u was joking! oh well....i'm not saying it's bad! i really think u should add another chapter.
Author's Response: xDDDD yea, i said i was gonna write it lol. i wouldnt joke about something as funny as this xDDD and thanks for not saying it was bad. i'm definitely gonna add another chapter soon though. ^_^
Date: 12/09/08 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
THAT WAS SO EFFIN GREAT!!! The way Bill greeted Tom in French was just jaw-dropping! And that whole 'screwing in the confession booth part': HAAWWWTT!!!
And I would love to see this as a two-shot! Something so good should have a follow-up LOL!
Author's Response: lol. awwwwwwwww thank you for thinking that this was great ^_^. The French was definitely one of my fav. parts lol. and yea, the end. woah. yea, it was hilarious ^_^rnrnI promise, as soon as i update my other fics i'm gonna add a new chappie for this ^_^
Date: 12/09/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
make it a two shot make it a two shot make it a two shot! pleaseeeeee!
:)
Author's Response: lol. i will, i am! I promise ^_^ i'm just trying to update the rest of my stories b4 i work on this. i wanna give you more 'holy fucking' asap ^_^
Date: 12/09/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
“You’re gonna put them inside my ass, Brother Tom, and I’m pretty certain that you’re gonna like it as much as I do."
That's the one that got me. Wow.
Author's Response: LMFAO. hahahahahahahahahahaha omg...i love that you love that xDD and yea, Bill is INSANE, mostly cuz he's me, but yea xDDD i laughed A LOT when i saw your review ^_^
Date: 12/09/08 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
this was so hott!
I loved it when bill said I want to taste you in french, the first time. :D
it was a challenge though, imagining tom as a priest loll!
Author's Response: lol....thanks for thinking this was hott ^_^ and yea, the french was awesome..it took me FOREVER to translate it though, cuz i wanted to translate it myself and my french is um...only decent xDD
Date: 12/09/08 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Well well. If a preist looked like Tom I would be eye-fucking him too. Omg wow. Fucking in a confessional. Sexxi!!!!! More!
Author's Response: xDDDD i would have eye-fucked him too...hell i'm eyefucking him in my head right nao xDDDD i'm glad that you liked it though ^_^ there will definitely be mroe