Date: 06/23/09 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Holy Sucking..
Can they fuck in French, please? :) OMG.
Author's Response: lol. hahahahaha. i'll try and make that happen ^^ xD thanks for reviewing ^^
Date: 06/23/09 11:39 am Title: Chapter 2: Holy Sucking..
HOLY shit! *droooooooooooooooooooooooooool*
Yeah, I'm swimming in the drool-pool right now. :D
Hetz next ta me, is tryna get out but she isn't good swimmer, and she's drooling almost as bad as i....
But that was the hottest of the hot!
Haz: The next one is the last? Well... Shit. Sure hope u'll put it up soon... Oh. FINAL SMUT? *eyebrow-wiggle* I'll be waiting.
BTW: I'm NOT a bad swimmer...
Kisses!
Author's Response: hehehehehehe. i love tha ti made you guys drool that much xD
and swim my little droolers swim!!!! xD
and i'm so glad that you thought it was hot ^^
and Haz, yea, the next one SHOULD be the last if I don't come up with any more ideas for the fic xD
mhm mhm mhm! there's supposed to be final smut!!!! like somewhere in the next chapter xD
Date: 06/23/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2: Holy Sucking..
I loved it :D I hope you continue soon!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: lol. i shall i shall! no more 6 month hiatuses -.- xD ,p> and i'm glad you loved it ^^
Date: 06/23/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 2: Holy Sucking..
SHELLY. I LOVES YOUUU. And I'd TOTALLY call you to yell at you about how awesome this was, but...my mom took my phone. And therefore, I don't have your number.
And your mom hates me anyways.
Um, you also used day instead of gay, but hey. That's okay!
Can you come tomorrow? Cause that'd be AWESOME!
AND YOU BETTER NOT TAKE ANOTHER FUCKING SIX MONTHS. I WILL GET YOUR ADDRESS FROM SOMEONE AND I WILL FIND YOU.
:D
Author's Response: LMFAO. I know you love me -.- and nein, no yelling! i just woke up and i'm headache-ish xD and both of our mums hate us -.- but that's besides the point. thanks for thinking this is awesome, i fixed day/gay xD and don't even think about stalking me xD the new chappie will be here like soon. and i'll ask mum if she'll let me out of the dungeon, i mean house tomorrow xD
Date: 06/23/09 09:42 am Title: Chapter 2: Holy Sucking..
omg omg omg omg SO HOT O__________O *drools*
Author's Response: hahahaha *hands you a napkin so you can wipe up your drool* Yay. I am so HAPPY that you think it's hot ^^
Date: 06/22/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *dances*
Author's Response: hehe. i'm glad i could make you weeeeee and dance xD and ahhhhh the new chappie is up now! xD lols
Date: 06/07/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
This was hot!
And lol, this line was so funny, "No one could resist Bill’s kisses. Not even the holy."
You should definitely add another part.
Author's Response: awwww. thanks for the review
and i totally love that line too xD ^^
and i FINALLY got the next past up last night (damn me for not being able to write smut for like 5-6 months) so you can go read it ^^
Date: 05/30/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
This was... AWSOME!!! Kinda funny, but oh, hevenly ;D yeah, totally hevenly ;D
Author's Response: lol. awwww, thanks for calling it AWESOME and not just awesome xD and heavenly of course ^^ xD ah, good news! the newest chapter is finally up! xD
Date: 05/30/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
*nice*
the father from your school should feel special xD lol
Author's Response: lol. hahahaha. he better! xD and omg! the new chapter is up ^^ xD
Date: 05/17/09 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
*sings* I fucked a boy, and I liked it...
Awesome story, hun!
Author's Response: lol. hahahaha. nice song ^^ xD
and thanks for calling it awesome ^^ oh yea, next chappie is up ^^
Date: 05/17/09 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Ahh boo I love you. I just reread this and it was ahmazing. *smirks* He knows how to make them go hoo hoo! lol.
Author's Response: lol. awww i love you too and thanks for thinking that this is ahmazing. oh yea, new chapter up!!!!! ^^
Date: 05/05/09 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Another chapter! Now that's a good news!!!
No problem, I can definitely help you with the French. I'll send you my email address ;-)
Author's Response: Awww. thanks. Eventhough my thanks is uber late xD
Date: 05/04/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Oh my gooood! That was so so naughty! I loved this SFM!
this is a One-shot, I presume, so you should mark the story as completed.
I am French and I noticed the French parts were a bit off.
I've corrected them for you, if you're interested (italics are your version, bold is mine).
Salut, je m'appelle Bill et moi voulons vraiment vous goûter.”
Hi, my name is Bill and I really want to taste you.
Salut, je m'appelle Bill et j'ai vraiment envie de vous goûter.
“Bill, je crois que vous pourriez troubler deux ou trois vos mots.”
Bill, I think you might be confusing a couple of your words.
Bill, je pense que vous confondez quelques mots.
“Je ne pense pas ainsi Tom. J'étais sérieux quand j'ai dit que j'ai voulu vous goûter. Je veux monter dans mes genoux pour vous et vous sucer de jusqu'à ce que vous entriez dans ma bouche.”
I don't think so Tom. I was serious when I said that I wanted to taste you. I want to get on my knees for you and suck you off until you come in my mouth.
Non, je ne crois pas, Tom. J'étais sérieux quand je disais avoir envie de vous goûter. Je veux me mettre à genoux pour vous et vous sucer jusqu'à ce que vous jouissiez dans ma bouche.
“Puis-je vous goûter maintenant?”
Can I taste you now?
Quite correct but a bit old fashionned.
Est-ce que je peux vous goûter maintenant? would be better.
“Pardonnez-moi le Père, car j'ai péché. J'ai baisé 'un Frère Tom' dans votre cabine de confession.”
Forgive me Father, for I have sinned. I have fucked a 'Brother Tom' in your confession booth.
Pardonnez-moi mon Père, car j'ai péché. J'ai baisé avec un 'Frère Tom' dans votre confessionnal
“Pardonnez-moi mon Père, car j'ai le pécheur. J'ai baisé un garçon appelé Bill dans votre cabine de confession. Et je crois que je l'ai aimé.”
Forgive me Father, for I have sinner. I have fucked a boy named Bill in your confession booth. And I think I liked it.
I suppose 'I have sinner' is a typo for 'sinned'. Unfortunately the translater didn't see that.
Pardonnez-moi mon Père, car j'ai péché. J'ai baisé un garçon appelé Bill dans votre confessionnal. Et je crois que j'ai aimé ça.
I hope it helped!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review AND for the help with the French hun. French is my, third language, and not one of my best, might I add, so I'll definitely fix the errors.
Also, there's a second chapter coming up, SO, it's not done yet xD I'm just taking forever to write it, and oh yea, before I forget, would you mind helping me with the French in the second chapter? I'm pretty sure that I've fudged up the French there too, so it would be awesome if you could help ^_^
Date: 04/30/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
ohkay
first i have to know how old 'brother tom' and bill are?
then...OMG that was hot!
the father is fairly retarded im sorry!!!lol
but bout the 2nd chapter you should so do it.....
it would make the story a WHOLE LOT BETTER!!! TEE HEE
i feel perverted!!
Author's Response: Ah, Brother Tom is 22, and Bill is 18 ^_^,
and Yea, Father Michael is retarded xD he's based on the Father from my high school xD hahaha.
And yay for second and maybe third chapters.
Date: 04/29/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Wow... YOU SHOULD ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!!
Daaamn, that was soooooo freaking hot!
Please add another chapter... unless your lying and stuff??
Author's Response: Awwww. There should be another chappie coming soon (as well as a third if I have my way xD)
Thanks for saying that It was sooo freaking hot ^_^
Date: 04/06/09 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Hellaawesome =D
*And I think I liked it.* Oh how we love SluttyBill...
Author's Response: Hahaha. I'm glad that you love SluttyBill as much as I do ^_^ And yea, he msot definitely liked it xD
Date: 03/28/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
Totally hot. Is there another chapter coming?
Author's Response: *nod nod* there is most definitely another chapter coming up ^_^
Date: 03/27/09 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
And say hello to my religon kink going off.
So uhm two parter?
Author's Response: hahaha. gotta love it when your religion kink goes off eh? xD and ja, there's definitely going to be more ^_^
Date: 03/23/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
yessssssssssss!!
another one :E:E
please please!
take that Priest thing out of Tom!
Author's Response: lol. i'm glad you liked it enough to review and such, and there is definitely another one...like it's up now! xD
Date: 03/19/09 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1: Heilig Ficking
*jaw drops to the ground* dear god, i am begging you, two shot PLEASE! I mean just.. .. i think my favorite thing in the world is the thought of Bill and Tom sinning in a confession booth.... and now i want more *pleads*
Author's Response: hahahaha *picks jaw off of ground* you don't have to beg me, I'm writing more! actually, it's gonna be a three-chaptered thingy because tom and bill are such horndogs -.- BUT the next chapter is already up!!!!