Date: 01/02/09 04:17 am Title: Freedom In Death
One more very minor error:
"When he haD seen that flash in Tom’s eyes in the park earlier"
Author's Response: ....Stop it....I don't CARE.
Date: 01/02/09 03:41 am Title: Tom
Just a few more minor errors
"A cap covered his head and he was clotheD in overly baggy gear, hiding what Bill thought to be a slender frame not unlike his own."
"He slung his bag around and pulled OUT a piece of paper that held his class schedule and locker number on it and studied it closely as he walked the halls, trying to find the right locker…"
Author's Response: I know what my mistakes are trust me. I'm just to lazy to correct them and they are so minor that I don't really care. If all you are gonna do is point out the little stuff that I already know about...Then please don't review...I appreciate the effort and all but...Yeah.
Date: 01/02/09 03:28 am Title: Prologue
wow I can tell this is going to be great. Just a few minor grammar errors I noticed:
"His new wife either didn’t notice OR didn’t care…"
"He pushed the bathroom door shut with his foot before Grabbing at the counter top..."
"He opened the bottom drawer in the vanity and pulled the same blood stained washcloth that he had been using for ageS before turning the cold water tap on"
Date: 12/31/08 10:44 am Title: Epilogue
...I don't like Jorg...well I never did but now I definitely don't like him but I really like this story and now I'm off to read the sequel. ^-^.
Date: 12/31/08 06:55 am Title: Prologue
why would I chase you with a pitchfork? that was awesome and Tom's dad is a right ass.
Date: 12/27/08 07:15 pm Title: Epilogue
is they gonna find his momi in the sequel?????? i bet they are, cos i read the summary....
Date: 12/27/08 07:08 pm Title: No Words Needed
fluff attack!!!!
Date: 12/27/08 06:42 pm Title: Honey and Chocolate
review raped...nice
d:) LIVE TOMI!!!
Date: 12/27/08 06:34 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
GAAAAAAH!!!!!!111 *strangles jorg over and over then chops into pieces*
Date: 12/26/08 10:19 pm Title: Epilogue
oh no!!! i wanted his mom to come in but i didnt want her to take tomi away!!!!
Date: 12/24/08 11:46 pm Title: Epilogue
NO! That bitch! It's not fair! Tom should definately not have to go live with her *grumbles about what a cruel society we live in*
This story was freakin phenomenal all the way through. And I'm glad the banner worked well for the entire story *Grins*
Date: 12/24/08 08:34 pm Title: Epilogue
AWWWWWWW!!! THAT WAS CUTE!!!!
OMGOMGOMGOGMG I LOOOVE!!!!!The sequel is amazing as well!!!!
Date: 12/24/08 04:17 am Title: Epilogue
I love that end, though it's so sad.
I loved whole that story! It's one of my fave-favorite stories! Thank you for writing it! Thank you so-so much! I loved that! x33!
Date: 12/24/08 12:03 am Title: Epilogue
I loved this story...so much...I can't wait for the sequel!!!
Date: 12/23/08 10:55 pm Title: Epilogue
If she's just been one town over how come she never came to see Tom?! She's not much of a mother. Well, we'll see how the sequel works out.
Date: 12/23/08 10:52 pm Title: No Words Needed
Such a cute ending! I was hoping for an apology from Andi though.
Date: 12/23/08 10:45 pm Title: Honey and Chocolate
Good Jorg's gonna probably go to jail and Tom's going to be ok!
Date: 12/23/08 09:56 pm Title: Epilogue
*cries* Darn it I knew this was going to happen
Date: 12/23/08 06:38 pm Title: Epilogue
WOW ... >..<
cant wait for the sequal...