Date: 12/09/08 11:32 pm Title: Prologue
It's not bad, don't run away we only want to give cookies!! Very good description in the bathroom scene, as well as the leaves at the beginning. Good job, keep posting and I'll keep reviewing. ^_^
Date: 12/09/08 11:28 pm Title: Tom
YAY! This is amazing! I love it!
You MUST continue! My sladar is going CRAZY!!
yaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!
Date: 12/09/08 07:30 pm Title: Prologue
OMG this was sooo not bad farr from it =D
I cant wait till the next chapter!! Yor really amazing writer!
Date: 12/09/08 05:54 pm Title: Prologue
Well I love some good old Tom Abuse, but the idea of chasing u with a pitchfork sounds so fun!*arguing with my self*
But totaly loved it, waiting for more! No, not waiting, expecting!
Ohh, better start too run, cuz here I am, look out of u'er window, I'm the crazy maniac with the pitchfork and a crazy grin!
Date: 12/09/08 03:58 pm Title: Prologue
Awww hun! seriously, get some confidence in yourself that was amazing and I really really cant wait for the next chapters!!! I really really do love it so far :D
Date: 12/09/08 02:08 pm Title: Prologue
hey i love this story already
so keep writing!!!!
Date: 12/09/08 02:04 pm Title: Prologue
You LIE! THIS IS AMAZING NICCI!!
I LOVE IT!!!!
I can't wait for BILLA to come in..I has my squeaky noises ready!!!!!
xD
Date: 12/09/08 01:58 pm Title: Prologue
Oh poor Tom. Seriously, bless his heart. *snuggles him to death* Please continue, you must until poor Tom is saved. :(
