Date: 12/15/08 04:01 pm Title: When Push Comes To Shove
wowowow don't stop! I don't want you to end your chapters!
Give me more!
Date: 12/15/08 02:08 pm Title: Blatant Dismissal
poor tomi...why does adreas have to be so mean?!?!well i hope bill and tom get together soon...tom is so lonely and needs some company!!well any ways ...keep up the good work!!!!
Date: 12/15/08 10:49 am Title: Shining Tears
no more? NO MORE?? :o *gasp* moooorrreeeee!! :D:D:D
Author's Response: lol. New chapter posted and awaiting validation!
Date: 12/15/08 09:52 am Title: Shining Tears
new reader here!! O_O
I fucking love this. It's so... damn... fucking... AMAZIING!!!
you gotta update soon cuz' I can't wait for more! :*
Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you very much. I'm working on the new chapter right now actually. So it'll be up at some point today when the admins find time to validate it after I post. Glad to know you enjoy it so much!! Thanks again!
Date: 12/14/08 11:27 pm Title: Prologue
sounds good. so wen will billa come and save him? omg, hid dadi is a jerk. he should go and die. y is jorg always the bad guy?
Date: 12/14/08 09:51 pm Title: Shining Tears
what do you mean EW?
i love this chapter! tom is progressing. :)
Date: 12/14/08 06:56 pm Title: Frantic
Baaad parents. Pooooor Tomi!
Date: 12/14/08 06:10 pm Title: Shining Tears
more more MORE!!!
Date: 12/14/08 05:44 pm Title: Shining Tears
When I first started to read this story I felt little troubled with your way of writing. But after a while I started to like it. Because I think it makes the story more outstanding. I also like that you don’t rush things. I easily get annoyed when people do that -_-
Anyway I have decided to follow all of you’re stories from now on. So you better update fast!
btw, this is one of my longest reviews ever-_-" (SO YOU BETTER FEEL HONOURED xD lol.) But seriously I don’t usually review because my English is no good.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! Can I ask you what troubled you about my writing style though? I'm curious.
Date: 12/14/08 04:46 pm Title: Shining Tears
Hey girl what did i say in my last review?? Quit doubting yourself and go with the flow... Your doing awesome and i cant wait to read another chapter! Now turn that doubt into confidence and start writing! I believe in you...*Cheesy line i know, but its true*
~Amberli
Date: 12/14/08 04:08 pm Title: Shining Tears
keep it comin! sniff* poor tom=(
Date: 12/14/08 02:39 pm Title: Shining Tears
It's so good story. It really is something... different? Yeah, definitely, its different, and that's why I love it so much!
Hope see an update soon! :)
Date: 12/14/08 02:13 pm Title: Shining Tears
I don't think I can tell you exactly why I like this story. I truly don't know what keeps me reading, but I just can't stop.
If you'd like a beta reader (I don't know if you have one or not) you should e-mail me your next chapter (melissa.a.rhea@gmail.com) and I'll look it over for you. Also, I'd like to change your formatting a little bit, because I noticed it was a little bit hard to read the paragraphs as you have them.
I hope you're able to update soon :)
Author's Response: I have a friend that looks my chapters over for me. I don't really like strangers fiddling with my stories. Nothing personal or anything. But you do seem to be the only one that finds my arrangement confusing...Or the only one thats said anything about it I should say...
Date: 12/14/08 02:08 pm Title: Shining Tears
I awwed so many times in this chapter... then i almost cried!!! It was freaking amazing! I love you and i nearly died looking at your new banner add! WOW its intense!! Love it and keep up the good work. XD
Author's Response: Thank you doll! Sorry about almost putting you in tears. lol.
Date: 12/14/08 12:42 pm Title: Shining Tears
BREEEEEAKTHROUUUUGH!!!!
YAYAYAYAY!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! AHHH! I'm spazzing out!!!
And I hope Jorg dies in a fire! DIAF!!!!
Date: 12/14/08 12:07 pm Title: Shining Tears
i really love the slow (and because of that, soo real) development between the boys
Date: 12/14/08 11:23 am Title: Shining Tears
It's a good transition chapter, hopefully the good stuff will start up soon ^_~
Poor Gustav, hopefully something good will happen to him.
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. And if you are talking in any way about smut...There probably won't be a lot of it. I always get embarrassed when I write smut scenes...lol.rn
Date: 12/14/08 11:21 am Title: Shining Tears
Shut up, I love this chapter! At least Tom is opening up somewhat.
You should save his first words for the last chapter of the story, that's what I feel.