Date: 12/16/08 09:17 pm Title: Shining Tears
beg to differ this chapter was fine. And progress was made right?
Date: 12/16/08 09:14 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
Awwww
Date: 12/16/08 09:05 pm Title: Intimidation and Abandonment
That school's full of jerks. Bill handels things well though. Poor Tomi.
Date: 12/16/08 08:58 pm Title: Blatant Dismissal
Andi's annoying and Tom's parents are still stupid.
Date: 12/16/08 08:52 pm Title: We're here for you...
Aww! Bill's so sweet! Tom's dad's awful though. How could his mom have just left him?
Date: 12/16/08 08:34 pm Title: Freedom In Death
I like how friendly Bill is to Gustav. It's really nice. Wish Tom hadn't lied, what did he have to lose?
Date: 12/16/08 08:28 pm Title: Frantic
Yay to Bill for telling off Tom's parents! It'll probably cost Tom later though. And yay to the doctor. But it'll be hard seeing as Tom doesn't talk.
Date: 12/16/08 08:23 pm Title: The approaching darkness
How is it ppl think Tom's getting in fights when no one else is showing up totally beaten like him? It's obviously not THAT small of a town or alarm bells would be sounding. They already should be. Him not talking combinded w/ all his bruises? Stupid people.
Date: 12/16/08 08:18 pm Title: Tom
Gay = not good huh? hope bill doens't get hurt.
Date: 12/16/08 08:14 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
O_O
*dry humps your leg*
Danke ;)
Date: 12/16/08 08:07 pm Title: Prologue
Wow, I'm just reading this for the first time and I'm already hooked. You're a great writer (and I'm picky) and this is a great hook!
Date: 12/16/08 05:40 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
yay! keep it comin!
Date: 12/16/08 03:14 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
aaaaaaaaaaaaw fluff^^ yeah we are really impatient (!!) Specially me (a) so UPDATE NOW OR IM GOING TO BUZZ VAMPIRE BILL AND DEMON TOM ON YOU “,,ó lolxD
Date: 12/16/08 02:21 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
Awwww YAY!! Could someone please catch his father hurting him and take him away! Would I be impatient if I asked for more? LOL. :D
Date: 12/16/08 02:21 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I LUVS IT!!!!!! amazing. tomi needs to tell someone and andi and jacob can go die. y are all the bad guys names beginning w/ j?
Date: 12/16/08 02:12 pm Title: I'm His Voice...
GAAAAAHH! u cannot end a chappie like that!!!!!!! d:)LOVE!!!!d:)
Date: 12/16/08 02:07 pm Title: Shining Tears
oh my goodness!!!!!!finally somethings happening with bill and tom!!!!!!!!omg please keep going!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/16/08 01:36 pm Title: Intimidation and Abandonment
awww...i want to know why toms mom did that!i hope shes in the story at some point...it'd be really interesting to see how tom would react to her, well anyways...i wish tom and bill would hurry up with thier relationship.poor tomi needs someone...keep up the great work.your a really good writer so dont put yourself down.
Date: 12/16/08 01:23 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
OMGOMGOGMGOMGOMG!!!
You KNOW how much I loved this!!!!
IT'S SO AMAZING!!!! *flails*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
You're so GOOD and an AMAZING writer! WHY DON'T YOU BELIEVE ME WHEN I TELL YOU THAT?!?! LOOK AT THIS GENIUS WORK OF ART!!!!! You are CRAZY!! hehe.
omg.
Date: 12/16/08 12:38 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
I love this chapter! The best of all!
So beautiful, so pure, so ... God!
Anyway, yeah, I love it how you write!
So.. I wanna know what happens now.
Please-please gimme the next chapter soon!
Cause I love iiiittt!!! x33