Date: 11/02/11 08:20 pm Title: Tom
Rumours are the worst way to gain information.
Date: 11/02/11 07:44 pm Title: Prologue
Wow such a heart breaking opening chapter i do not understand child abuse. It is ever so brutal.
Date: 12/27/09 03:04 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww!! You need to write some more please!! I want to know more!! Q__Q
Author's Response: There is a sequel. lol
Date: 11/19/09 03:37 pm Title: The approaching darkness
OH you're right...Poor Tomi!!! It's the only thing I can say. So sad
Date: 11/19/09 03:24 pm Title: Tom
I'm SO excited...your story is really great. I want to see them become friends, Bill help Tom.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 07/14/09 12:15 pm Title: Prologue
or would see him as the lower life form that he knew he was. – awh, lovely start!
He didn’t really remember when the last time he had spoken to someone was…He couldn’t even remember the last time he had felt something other then the endless numbness that had surrounded his entire being… - *eye roll* overly pathetic!
To him it was hell, his own personal hell. But no one knew. No one could ever know the things he went through on the other side of that door. And no one ever would… - hum? What could it be?
“Where in the hell have you been you worthless shit?!” – lol
that the blood that now filled his mouth wouldn’t make contact with the pristine white carpets. – Clean living room, pristine white carpets? Hum? Who’s doing all the cleaning?
He didn’t bother looking in the mirror. It would only show him someone he hated almost as much as his father. – lol awesome
He opened the bottom drawer in the vanity and pulled the same blood stained washcloth that he had been using for ages before turning the cold water tap on. – ewwww time to wash it.
And then, chocolate eyes met chocolate eyes…They were glassy, dazed and empty. – nice!
both old and knew – lol both old and new
It wouldn’t do any good to speak out now after so many years of not uttering a word to anyone. Not even the teachers suspected child abuse… - um…you can say child abuse whenever you want and the police will investigate it, it’s never too late.
Author's Response: Uhm...Is this a compliment to my writing or an insult cause I honestly can't tell. And as for the child abuse thing...I was abused when I was a kid, I told my teacher about it and she didn't believe me. No one believed me. And besides. Its just a story. But yeah. I really can't tell if this Review is an insult or not.
Date: 06/28/09 08:46 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
OMG AWESOME!!HES TALKING AGAIN!!! YESSSS!
Date: 06/28/09 08:12 pm Title: Blatant Dismissal
*glares at Andreas and retrieves pitchfork*
Date: 06/28/09 07:59 pm Title: Freedom In Death
AWWH! Good job Bill!!! *throws roses* COME SAVE ME NOW!!
Date: 06/28/09 07:51 pm Title: Frantic
YAYYY!!! *throws pitchfork down waterfall* GOOD JOB BILL!!!! Yessssss *jumps up and down*
Date: 06/28/09 07:45 pm Title: The approaching darkness
OMG *gasp* BILL, save Tom or DIE!!! *grabs pitchfork and snuggles with it*
Date: 06/28/09 07:41 pm Title: Tom
EEEK!!! this is SOOOO awesome like WICKED AWESOME!!!!! I ADORE THIS!!! i LOVE this!!!!!!! Its TOTALLY TOTALLY TOTALLLYYYYY DELICIOUS! And this is your first slash?!?!
Date: 06/28/09 07:30 pm Title: Prologue
*throws pitchfork away* HOLY SHIT, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! WOW, you made everything completely believable and realistic, and HOPELESS!!! *grins toothily* i LOVE it when its hopeless!! :D
Date: 06/28/09 08:54 am Title: Prologue
WOW LOL i havent even read it yet, but your banner is AWESOME!!!! it COMPLETELY freaked me out, so i ADORE it!!
Date: 06/24/09 02:55 am Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
okay, i've already read this story, and i came back to read it again, and once again, this part makes my tummy full of cute little butterflies.
Date: 05/25/09 10:59 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
amazing..so sad but amazing
Date: 04/08/09 04:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my goodness! That ending was quite unexpected and, wow, what is going on with Tom's mom, I wonder.
Date: 04/08/09 12:43 pm Title: Confusion
Oh God! I'm hanging on edge right now, but I have to go to class. Dammit, photography. Anyway! So I lied about finishing this last night, I had too much work! Whatever, that means more reviews for you because I have to take more breaks. :P This story gets better and better as it goes on. I love it to pieces!