Date: 12/19/08 11:55 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
I liked how Gustav went and got Tom's stuff, I don't know why, I just did. And how Bill was there after Tom had that nightmare and calmed him down. It was really sweet. I don't like how he keeps thinking about going back though. I have the feeling Bill will tie him up before he lets him go back there.
Date: 12/19/08 11:34 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
i will take tom and hide him under my bed from his psycho dad! and shoot his dad. that would be fun whahahahahahahah.
p.s i loved this chapter!
Date: 12/19/08 10:39 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
d8)....yea. i need sleep too. i am leaving at 8am 2moro 4 a football game and not gettin bak till 4am the next day. O_O LOVE THIS!!!!LOVE U!!!!LOVE TH!!!!
Date: 12/19/08 10:24 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
I just read all of the chapters of this story now, I'm in love. This story is such a mix of all kinds of emotions, but you manage to portray them in a pretty realstic way, and I love how you have Bill and Tom's relationship progressing, in a way that is very believeable but I am very glad things are starting between them, I'm a complete sucker for Tom/Bill lovin. My favourite thing about this story, is Tom's character. Usually people portray Tom as the strong, more masculine one and I love to see the roles switched from time to time, where Bill is the one that Tom needs. Overall, I love this story, I really do, and I can't wait for the next chapters to see what happens. Great job. :)
Date: 12/19/08 09:52 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
AWWWW!
Date: 12/19/08 08:43 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
"He needed calm…Bill was calm."
God that line killed me! It was so simple yet romantic. Much love for this chapter and how you ended it on a hopeful yet apprehensive note.
Date: 12/19/08 08:32 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
I love th way you write! it's like Im standing next to tom or whoever watching everything live....it just makes me wanna hug tom! keep it comin!
Date: 12/19/08 06:51 pm Title: Can't Take It
*teehee* And we love your rapid updates ;)
Damn. An axe? That's fucked up. I really hope he doesn't have to go back there. That would suck...big time. And I wonder what Bill is calling Gusti about...?
Moar soon!
Date: 12/19/08 11:16 am Title: Can't Take It
I've read the whole story in the last 2 days; congratulations, fantastic stuff!
I don't find it too OOC by the way; I've read stories that are way further out of character, and they wouldn't even consider it.
The way you describe the abuse and the state Tom is in feels just so realistic. Oh and the axe scene reminded me of Stephen King's Shining! Horrible! Poor Tomi...
Have you actually written 14 chapters within 10 days?! That must be a new record or something...
Don't be afraid of ending it if you see it fit. It actually feels like if you have figured out everything until the end.
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks very much. Appreciate the insight. Yeah...When I get really into a new story I can write up to two chapters a day. When I write a story I'll usually have the ending planned out within the first few chapters...And if its possible for a sequel the first chapter will end up planned out as well. I'll probably be ending it within the next 3 chapters though. Thanks for the review doll!
Date: 12/19/08 12:09 am Title: Can't Take It
OMG YES. I lovee this storrryyy
Date: 12/18/08 11:14 pm Title: Can't Take It
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!
This was good but *pulls you from hiding* Don't scare us like that! You know I seizured!!!
haha. I am so excited for the next chapter!!!!! More soon!
Date: 12/18/08 09:26 pm Title: Can't Take It
RAH! I need more, dammit!
I can't believe he actually went after him with an axe! Well, I mean, I CAN, but you know.
Date: 12/18/08 08:31 pm Title: Can't Take It
Whats bill gunna tell gustav to do??
This is an ah-maze-ing story.(:
Date: 12/18/08 08:20 pm Title: Can't Take It
I'm ok actually and I haven't gone to get my knives or machine guns yet. I usually reserve those for fishie (jk, jk). I liked this chap b/c it was stressful but it ended well-ish for Tom and although it has a cliffhanger it's not TOO bad, particularly w/ you updating record.
Date: 12/18/08 08:11 pm Title: Confusion
I liked this chapter. I wish he hadn't over thought Bill pulling his hand away though.
Date: 12/18/08 06:12 pm Title: Heavy Rain, Light Hearts
OMGOMGOMG! HE SPEAKS!
Date: 12/18/08 05:19 pm Title: Can't Take It
I flippin' loved this chapter! I was really freaking out when I read about the axe. And then the whole scuffle...
*faints from anxiety overload*
Date: 12/18/08 05:03 pm Title: Can't Take It
OMG!!!! wat does billa want gusti to do? is they gonna find some way to frame jorg?! is he gonna have him kill him?! gaaaah!!!! i hate cliffies!!!! can't wait for next chappie!!!! d:)LOVE!!!d:)
Date: 12/18/08 04:57 pm Title: Can't Take It
EEH! Another cliffe!! But I suppose I can handle them considering you update fabulously :) The whole axe thing scared the living hell out of me!!! Ooh poor tomi... I can't wait to read more, I'm seriously loving this.