Date: 12/21/08 02:43 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
OMG UPDATE SOON!
Date: 12/21/08 02:41 pm Title: Nightmares and Safety
I LOVE MAKING PEOPLE GIGGLE!!!!
I love this soooooooooooooooooo much. You are a really talented writer. Your story draws me in and I forget about everything else in the world. I love it. =D
Date: 12/21/08 02:34 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
DON'T KILL TOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Go on?
Date: 12/21/08 02:30 pm Title: Can't Take It
I was reading this last night and I nearly ripped my brothers throat out when he said we had to go to Starbucks. I LOVE lattes but I love this story more. Thank you soooooo much for writing it, it always pulls me in.
Date: 12/21/08 02:30 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
AH! I wanna kick jorg ass! tom dont deserve a father like that! argh! keep it comin! annd you did good on the smut part,you kind left me hanging there...
Date: 12/21/08 02:16 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
I think you set up the beginning perfectly for the situation they are in. And I knew toms dad would be back. You've given me shivers. It says a lot that his dad did that in front of others. And it doesn't say anything good. Poor Tom. :(
Date: 12/21/08 01:16 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....TOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM....CHEESEEEE....lol....dude this is so cool. at first when they kissed i thought i'd be the same old sappy ending but the way you started the chapter was nice. it shows the care bill takes with tom...just...dont let anything worse happen to tommmmmmm....*sniffle*
Date: 12/21/08 12:25 pm Title: Back Into Darkness
You're overthinking the smut. Just calm down. I hope Jorg doesn't hurt Tom too much. Bill will come to the rescue. I hope. Is this going to end well Or is it going to leave me sad or annoyed?
Date: 12/21/08 11:42 am Title: Back Into Darkness
You shouldn't be so hard on yourself about the smut, lol it's an aquired taste to write it, and actually write it well, I used to feel awkward about it. Yours was really good, and well written even if it was short, it did it's job, portraying that Bill just needed to show Tom how to feel good, so great job :) Oh, about the rest of the chapter, the ending, I'm very upset lol I don't want Tom to get hurt. All in all another great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 12/21/08 11:30 am Title: Back Into Darkness
B...bu.....bu.........BUT.
Happy ending?
Omg. *cry*
Poor Tomi. ;_;
I love the way you write though, it's so realistic and cute and awesome. :D
And if I must, wait I shall! :D
Date: 12/21/08 11:12 am Title: Back Into Darkness
hollyy shyyytt!
he just had to ruin it! and god its so suspenseful! im going to die till the next chapter :)
p.s i REALLY REALLY indescribably love it.
Date: 12/21/08 10:57 am Title: Back Into Darkness
OMG!!! THE SMUT.....IS UMBEARBRE!!!
*foams at mouth* SMUUUUUTTTTT!!!!
I totally approve of the smutness and it's AWESOME!
Must.........have......more!!! *Dane Cook impression of werewolf*
Date: 12/21/08 09:15 am Title: Back Into Darkness
Ahhh! No!!!
You're killing me here! I'm seriously not gonna forgive you until resolve this anxiety-laced chapter! ;)
Oh, and the smut was done very well. You gave just enough detail to make it steamy, but still kept some things to the imagination.
Date: 12/21/08 08:37 am Title: Back Into Darkness
WHAT? NOOOO, you can't end it there! Too much suspense!
And the smut wasn't bad at all. It shouldn't be too graphic when its full of emotions like that. So you did a good job!
Date: 12/21/08 07:19 am Title: Back Into Darkness
MOOOOOORE!!
Please!
Date: 12/21/08 06:00 am Title: Why?
I want the next chap, please! (A)
Date: 12/21/08 01:28 am Title: Why?
Very cute story.
A Bit sad.
But cute.
Date: 12/21/08 12:02 am Title: Why?
Smut? I love smut ;) I would definately like to see how that would play out in this relationship. Once again another awesome chapter, can't wait to read more.
Date: 12/20/08 11:37 pm Title: Why?
OMG THE FLUFF BEGINS!!!!!!
AHHHHHHH!!!! YAYAYAYAY!!!
SMUUUUUUUT! YAY!
Date: 12/20/08 08:33 pm Title: Prologue
this is amazing!! i started reading this earlier today + fell in love and read the whole thing lol. you're an amazing writer and it would be awesome if you updated soon, m'dear =)