Date: 03/22/14 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
Gah this story was too short. I would have loved to read more because I loved how you wrote Georg!
I'm really really happy that it was a happy ending.. But I'm also really disappointed.
Sorry to say this, but I had really hoped that it would not end with them having sex. I think it would have been better with maybe just some kissing, because if they want to be together they will have plenty of time for sex later. I don't think that it's necessary to have sex just because they both care for each other.
I mean, she has just been raped and it hasn't been that long. And she just saw Mark again and sure, everything turned out great and she is happy and free but she was raped and traumatized and that is not something you get over just like that. I find it very unrealistic that she would even think about sex so soon.
Sorry, but I have to say this. I really liked the story, but I wished there were more chapters to it, because I really want to continue reading. It's a great story and I really loved everything about it, except for the ending.
(But then again, everyone reacts to things differently and there may be some rape victims that would have reacted like this but I just don't find it realistic. But that's just my opinion.)
I hope you continue writing, because you are very talented :)
Apart from that I just have to say: I LOVE GEORG OMGOMGOMGOMG HE IS SO HOT AND AWESOME OMG GEEORG
Date: 03/22/14 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 14: Namesake
Well Mark got his ass kicked and he almost died so I guess I'm happy about that hehe though he would have deserved to be castrated.
I hope you had the best birthday ever with loads of presents and cake and chocolate :D
Date: 03/22/14 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 13: New and Old
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG O____O
Georg better kick his ass. And then castrate him slowly and painfully. And then break all his fingers. And then hit him with a frying pan just like Rapunzel would!
Date: 03/22/14 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 10: Speak Softly and Carry a Big Stick
You have no idea how happy I was when she was listening to Killerpilze xD They are so awesome and I love them soo muuch
Date: 03/22/14 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1: First Contact
I just finished my milbona banana yogurt with chocolate flakes. I think it's my favourite thing to eat for breakfast in the whole world. Well, except for my annual birthday chocolate pudding breakfast ofcourse!
Okej, now I'm done trying to be funny.
So far I like this story. A lot. I really love reading about Georg and I like your writing as well.
And this is actually the first review I have ever posted on this site, so I'm a bit nervous haha. I'm going to continue reading and will probably leave a few reviews along the way.
(Oh, and I'm from sweden and I absolutely love that your'e using the metric system because I won't get confused haha)
Date: 02/02/12 02:32 am Title: Chapter 15: About Time
awwww that was a wonderful story!!! *siiiigh* i just love romance!!!!!
Date: 08/29/11 09:26 am Title: Chapter 15: About Time
:D , ;_; Lovely story!
Date: 08/29/11 09:24 am Title: Chapter 14: Namesake
I know this is late, but Happy birthday! :D Lol, and Also I love the story tis awesome sauce! ;]
Date: 08/26/11 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: Food for Thought Requires a Mind With Teeth
Oh my gosh! I love That movie! :D Its so funny and cute! :] and I wouldn't mind being alone with him in a closet for 10 minutes. ;] XD
Date: 08/26/11 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 6: Observations
Lol -cracks wip- You did a good job writing faster with reviews, Now read this and make more stories XD [Lol Just kidding, thought that might be funny to say. ]
Date: 08/26/11 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: No One Else
:] I love this story, its a little fast but its a good fast...Idk how to say it but. Keep this up. :D
Date: 04/06/10 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 2: Hmm...
I literally laughed through this whole chapter, it was hilarious. loved it
Date: 09/07/09 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
Love ur story, especially the end awww (=
Date: 02/09/09 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
I've read this story 60 something times! I love it with a passion!!
Author's Response: OMG!rnWhen I read this the first words out of my mouth were "Why??"rnLOL I can't believe it. Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much you can't even imagine how much that means to me. *tears up*rn:)
Date: 01/13/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
CUTE!!!
sorry i missed your birthday... have a great year!
thanks for writing the story, i really enjoyed it.
Date: 01/12/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
Aww. This is a nice and touching ending. ;D I personally would have loved to see some mind game with herself. =/ I just thought she'd get worried, then remind herself who she's with, and be reassured, and probably look for strength in her partner as well [and though he's the opposite sex], or have to think about it. Him...XD I can see just going with the flow. But it's awesome otherwise (only real critique I've given you yet huh?). You did great with her moods/thoughts/feelings, it just 'felt' slightly rushed [and only slightly] on this last one. XD But then again, that could just be me. xP
ORRR you could have done on interesting afterthought before the 'forever' and worrying as a random idea....meh. XD
But basically? It was terrific. A great ending nonetheless, overall.
Date: 01/10/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: First Contact
I loved your story so much... I liked the fact that it was Georg the main character! Everything that she was feeling seem so realistic. Very nicely written, I loved it!!!
Date: 01/09/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
Yay! Happy Ending! I loved it! =]
Date: 01/09/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
Ahhhh they deserve it! Her for going through the rape and him for Sticking with her even when she was broken!
Date: 01/09/09 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 15: About Time
i love it!