Date: 12/15/08 08:18 pm Title: Allowed Excitement
*fangirl squeal* YAY Bill got a kiss! That was a great chappie! I loved it!
Author's Response: Yay, kisses are awesome. :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 12/15/08 08:06 pm Title: Turbulence
This fluff is gonna give me a sugar rush! I love it so much! *Hyper babbling*
Author's Response: Who doesn't love sweet fluff?
Date: 12/15/08 07:57 pm Title: Not Too Excited
Awww, Tom is getting Bill's heart all riled up LOL!
Author's Response: Mm, I have a feeling he would posses that quality lol
Date: 12/15/08 07:47 pm Title: Only Imperfection.
That was great! Bill is perfection in my eyes LOL! He will find his one true love one day.
Author's Response: He is perfect. :) and i completely agree, he'll find him.
Date: 12/15/08 07:22 pm Title: Love Story
Loved it. Absolutely loved. This story really is perfection.
Can't thank you enough now for making my day so much better than what it was.
Author's Response: Awww, glad I could help :) Thank you.
Date: 12/15/08 06:06 pm Title: Love Story
This was so corny... but in a good way that I melted... I really liked it, the way they made each other perfect. Loveley, lovely.
Author's Response: Lol, I can't help it, I love happy endings. They make me feel good. lol
Date: 12/15/08 03:12 pm Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
*coughtearscough* ..You know, I knew from the very beginning that I would love this story, especially when I first read the summary and damn, you blew the rest of my somewhat sane, which it's no longer, mind with it. And I certainly didn't mean to start weeping when I read the last line of this chapter. But the way how Bill literately begged Tom to stay just made my heart shed tears, or at least that's how it felt like! The rest was, like the title of this fic says; perfection. *sniff* ;_; I don't mean to sound like a slash crazed banshee (that I am) by saying this, but you HAVE TO, just have to make a sequel! This story is just too good and so well written to be left like this, amazing as it is, I'm dying to read more of it! .. Oh gawd I can't help but to feel somewhat empty inside. :'{ Though I'm so, SO glad that this fic had a happy ending, because knowing me, I'm such a sucker for them. Girl, know this; ILU4ETERNITY. And damn, just thinking about this fic ending here brings anew tears in to my eyes.. both happy and sad.
Author's Response: Oh, you know you're reviews blow my mind everytime, but this one wow. Thank you so much for you're support the entire time. I swear I wrote some chapters just for you! Don't worry I still have an epilogue to write, and then, well guess what? I am writing a sequel so don't worry. :):) There will be more.
Date: 12/15/08 02:27 pm Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
AWE... this was soo sweet :D
Author's Response: sweet as sugar. :) lol
Date: 12/15/08 01:47 pm Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
This chapter was gorgeous, and that line was the perfect thing to end this with. You're such an amazing writer, this story was beautiful and you should be proud of it! :) When I read stories like this, I find some writers rush Bill and Tom's relationship too quickly, and maybe it's good sometimes but not always. Then you have the others who make us wait forEVER for them to get together and by that time we're bored with the story. And when they finally do get together, it's the very end of the story and it wasn't written well and you think "Well that was a waste of time"
But with this, you've gotten it just right, making us wait but feeding us those sweet little moments and keeping the best till last, and when you get there it's done really well and you're not left thinking otherwise. So maybe they only did it once, it doesn't matter, it was a great end to this and it made me feel really happy that they got back together and got to show each other just what they meant to each other. Nice! ;)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I am proud of this story, and it's because of reviews like yours that make me proud. So thank you very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. and I agree with everything you said, I didn't want to rush their relationship but I didn't want to dely it either, so I went somewhere in the middle lol. I didn't want every chapter to be smut, that's what one shots are for, this was the entire beginning of their relationship and I'm glad people appretiated that. Thank you so much for reading, I'll have an epilogue up soon. :) And then I'm planning a sequel!rn
Date: 12/15/08 01:00 pm Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
Wow, I allmost started to cry when Tom said he was gonna hurt Bill by leaving! And I'm serious! And now I have no good idea for how to describe how good this story was! It would just be something like; This is a damn good story. And that's just boring! But yeah, I think you know what I want to say
Author's Response: Yes, I think I know what you're trying to say and that means a lot to me! :) I didn't think it was going to turn out very well, but I'm glad it did! :) I'm planning on doing a sequel, just to continue their relationship. There's still an epilogue to come.
Date: 12/15/08 09:01 am Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
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Perfect!
I was crying like an idiot at the beginning, and then I was like "Awww!" and then...then...
...Awwww! XD
But... the end, already?! ç_ç
Author's Response: The end of this part. Yes. But I'm pretty sure I have a sequel in the making! I just wanted this part of the story to be about the beginning of their relationship. You know? Don't fret, there will be more.
Date: 12/15/08 06:26 am Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
Awwwwwe. The ending is so sweet. I thought Tom actually was going to really leave for a sec. Scared the crap outta me. Makeup sex is always the best kind. :) *drool*
Author's Response: lol aw, no he wouldn't leave! :)
Date: 12/15/08 05:34 am Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
is it approaching to its end?
Author's Response: Yes, I'm pretty sure, but i'm also sure I have a sequel up my sleeves.
Date: 12/15/08 02:32 am Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
this is not good, it is absolutely PERFECT!!!!!!!! i love the last line!!!! and there was so much detail, that it was so much fun to read.
Author's Response: lol oh god the first part of you're review scared me for a second. :):) I tried to be detailed, I'm glad you liked it! Thank youuu.
Date: 12/15/08 02:18 am Title: Someone To Show You Perfection
i've been eagerly awaiting every chapter--this one is by far the best yet!
oh mein gott...just, beautiful. i adored the last line.
Author's Response: awww glad you liked it! Thank you for reading. :)
Date: 12/14/08 04:42 pm Title: Healed Then Broken
Oh no bill! Ahhh!
Author's Response: Don't panic! :)
Date: 12/14/08 03:48 pm Title: Healed Then Broken
.. I hope things get better...
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12/14/08 11:49 am Title: Healed Then Broken
AGH! That fucking Austin! I swear, I would've killed him if this story was real!
Author's Response: you and me both. It's funny the only Austin I acuatlly know is really nice. oh well, lol.
Date: 12/14/08 07:39 am Title: Healed Then Broken
OH SNAP!!!1 O____O!(insert eerily silence here) ....just woah. I really feel like kicking some good ol' Austin ass right now. What the hell is his problem anyway? Okay, okay, Bill's hawt as hell and damn I'd seriously die for him, but to do something like that? Bitch please! >:| I've never really had a reaction like this during reading a fanfic, and goddamn am I pissed! Oh, how I wish that Tomiboi wouldn't do anything stupid, and that sex-on-legs Bill would hurry! D: ...And I'm still so gonna crack that bitches ass in half. But anyway, luw, you did amazing job with this chapter (like you always do) and I can't, just can't wait for the next update! :]
Author's Response: Once again your review blew me away lol. I'm pretty sure we all want to kill Austin, the feeling is mutual. Bill's heart might need mending right now, but I think Tom's got a big enough heart to let him back in. There will be one more chapter, than an epilouge. I think, that's the plan anyways. Thanks again for all your love :) I'm glad this story means something to you. xox
Date: 12/14/08 05:56 am Title: Healed Then Broken
Oh thank goodnesss. I knew he didn't do it. He lives Billa so much and he kept insisting it wasn't him and I believed him from the first time he said it. I hope he's not too upset with Billa.
Author's Response: Yes it's true, Tom wouldn't lie. But i put myself in the situation and if I was Tom, i would be very upset with Bill.