Date: 12/05/16 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
I really hope you update this soon. I realise it has been 7 years but I'm interested to see where this goes and to find out about Tom's past.
Date: 12/04/16 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
Another perfect chapter.
Date: 12/04/16 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
I'm enjoying this a lot more than I originally thought I would.
I would like to make a few points, however.
You use "defiantly" when you mean "definitely". A lot of people make that mistake so it's no big deal, just thought you would like to know :)
Also, you said "Tom has been friends with us for over five years knowing that". It confused me for a second, until I realised you meant Gustav.
Apart from that, and needing more punctuation, this fic is perfect :D
Date: 12/04/16 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 02 - Breakfast
Intriguing.
This chapter gave me an omelette craving.
Date: 09/29/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
ok, i have a question:
WHEN ARE WE GONNA FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO TOM?????????? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!
other than that, great job and hope to see more asap!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/31/09 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 01 - Intro
OMG I read this and I was all OMG TOM and then all AWWWWWW GUSTI and I wanna know what happens!!
Date: 05/19/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
Really great story...update soon please??
Date: 03/14/09 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
This fanfiction is amazing! I totally love it! Please update as soon as you can, becuase I really want to see how it will end! You're a fantastic writer, go on with this! Love, Cassandra.
Date: 02/22/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
I'mma sucker for tom/gustav pairing and your story is one of 'em that had me hooked. please please update this story. *oretty pleaseeeeeeeee*
Date: 02/18/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter 01 - Intro
You would do that ? OMG, I'm so honored ! :D That would be wonderful ! So then I'll have to get my ass in gear, and write something ^^ But this week I'm very busy, school's being a bitch -.-' but I'll try to get something down soon ! Any idea what would be a good idea to begin with ? since I'm all new and stuff ..
And I guess you're right, you're never a bad writer if you try to get better. (Wish your niece good luck :D)
Author's Response: YAY! You have a great attitude :D Hmmmmm where should you start.... start with what you like. A simple one shot of your favorite pairing would be a good beginning. (I'm looking forward to reading it!) :)
Date: 02/11/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter 01 - Intro
Well, now I've just read some of the chapters again. And I was reminded of how amazing this story is ! It's just .. so beautiful. I really want to write something on my own and post it here, but I don't know if I dare .. In fear of being butchered, I haven't done it yet x) My writing kinda sucks .. And English is not my first language either . I'm Norwegian x) Did I tell you that ?
Geez, I'm so trailing off here .. I was talking about this story, right .. It must be so boring to hear about the story of my life, or something x) Well, your story is amazing, and I love it ! I relly wish I was able to write as good as you *envies*
Good luck with the next chapters !
love xx
Author's Response: You know you've made it when someone re-reads your stuff :) Thanks THistLiebe. As for writing sucking there is no such thing... well there is but there is a distinct difference. There is bad writing of people who don't try to get better (these people need to be shot) and the bad writing of a budding author. My niece just started writing and she is terrible but she is constantly getting better because she is always trying and always asking for advice. She'll be better than me soon and she is only ten :P
You're Norwegian? SWEET! *Pokes you* Ooooooo I've never touched a Norwegian person before YAY!!!
As for not speaking/writing English that well: if you want to you can write something and send it to me. I'll fix up the English and you can post it. You might be the next Majestrix and not know it!
Date: 01/12/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
awwwwwwww *^^* super sweet chapter -- Tomi using the oldest trick in the book, that sly dog! I wonder if real-life Gustav can play the guitar?
Author's Response: Tom would never go so low as to use tricks! He saw an opportunity and went for it XD rnrnI'm a little cautious about making Tom so forward after what has happened in his past but it makes sense in my head. He is confused and doesn't know it, he just thinks he is acting on his real emotions. Don't get me wrong his feelings are real he is just acting on them before he realises they really are real. I hope that makes sense or what I have planned for the next chapter will seem rushed -_-
Date: 01/12/09 09:30 am Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
Aargh ! This morning, I read this, and I had FC and everything .. PLUSS I had a good idea of what to say, and then things are being a bitch and it doesn't work ! :O
Oh, well .. Wonnnnderful fluff ! I've still got a warm and fuzzy feeling inside < 3 Was a perfect way to start the day !
Author's Response: Awww I'm glad I made your day ... over a month ago -_- *Sighs* I hate when my inspiration doesn't obey me. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/12/09 06:49 am Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
*giggles like a little girl*
Author's Response: XD You're welcome XD
Date: 01/12/09 02:17 am Title: Chapter 09 - Guitarist
Awww
Author's Response: :)
Date: 01/11/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
I Really like this story and your a great writer, but why are you not updating? ;)
Author's Response: That is a long and complicated story that wont be divulged. On a more important note I am back and updating again. :) Thanks for the kudos points too XD I LOVE it when people say I am a great writer. A dirty lie (The title of 'great writer' is more deserved to writers like Majestrix not me. At most I am 'good') but I love it none the less XD
Date: 12/23/08 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
:D:D:D that was great!!!:D
i want more! :D:D:D
Author's Response: You always want more ustavsGirl17 XD I just updated. Hope you like it. I am back now even though I cant update as often as I once did :(
Date: 12/18/08 06:41 am Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
u're very welcome! u can b certain I fully meant everythang I wrote&yet again, wit dis new chapter, u've proven u utterly deservd it! My compliments once more! Respect! touchin' chapter, an elaborate 'hint' of romance, but soooo sweet&darlin', u make da story complex & genuine! oh, yeah, naughty mind for G, just as it ought 2 be, given how xquisite T is, wit dat hot, kynky flash of what's 2 come... good, good, good thangz, bootylicious!!!
Author's Response: XD Thanks shadow but I had to ditch the kink for the romance. Don't worry there will be much smut. I like smut as much as the next guy :)
Date: 12/17/08 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
Gah! what happened to the mystery? And what's with all this UST? I hope you know you're just an extra evil tease ;P
Author's Response: *Sighs* You are right. That is why I edited chapter eight. No more lust. Like I said I was trying to rush it instead of letting the characters play it out. I learned from this which is what it is all about :) Well that and writing for you guys ;)
Date: 12/17/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
i really like it!!
Author's Response: YAY! *Gustav cookies for angelshadows* For such a simplistic yet ego boosting review XD