Date: 12/17/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
w o w ..
And I'm gonna leave it with that now *Speachless !*
...
*SQUEAL !*
Author's Response: XD I have a feeling you might like the next chapter then THistLiebe XD I hope you like it
Date: 12/17/08 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
Its like Gustav and Tom have switched places. Tom is the confident one now.
Author's Response: That will change again I am thinking. Like Car Crash I never intended for the story to go so far. It was just meant to be a simple and short story... but no, the Plot Bunnies had their say and now I have to work out how to pick up the pieces *sighs* If the Bunnies didn't work so well for me I'd fire them.
Date: 12/17/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
...But not the less this chapter was amazing as always, ansd Iam glad I made a banner for it. You deserve it. You are so so so talented, more that I will ever be, the way you make the characters lift off the screen and into the movie theatre in my brain, is absoultly breathtaking! I can't wait until the next chapter, so PLEASE don't make me wait long!!! *begs and pokes you* A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!
Author's Response: O_O I am so on cloud nine right now! *Blushes madly* You honour me with your words :D Thank you more_than_dreams! And I still love your banner! I want to do a banner for my next story because I found an awesome picture that would work so well! But I want for you to do one for me too because you made such a great banner for this story... I am torn -_- What should I do?
Date: 12/17/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 08 - Give and Take
"Hmmmmm *pokes the chapter*"
THAT IS SO MEAN!
shame on you :O
*gives you a shameful look while wiggling my finger for some odd reason :D*
Author's Response: But but but... I do it because I love you guys! XD Please do not hate me! I updated with awesomeness, it did take forever though... but we wont go into that *innocent look*rn
Date: 12/16/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
CHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!
Go on, go on, go on, go on!!!! OMK, I love this, this was your best chapter yet!!!!! OMK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God, I love how sweet and caring Gustav acts towards Tom. You did that perfectly!!!
Author's Response: *Blushes* Thank ye MagicGirl379 I hope you like the next chapter as much. I'm agonising over it right now XD
Date: 12/16/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
:D I really like this story - I hope you keep updating! I want to know what's up with Tom! ^_^
Author's Response: Soon shadowlove... soon lol
Date: 12/15/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
AHHHHHH! *dies* I've been waiting a moment like this fo SOOO long and I've tried to be patient, but you drew it out and a little peck on the cheek from Tom made me squeal like a 12 year old at a Jonas Brothers concert!
Author's Response: Jonas Brothers? Never heard of them but I know what a squealing eleven year old sounds like (my niece), so I'm gonna take it as a good thing XD I hope you read and enjoy the rest of the story Mercutia!
Date: 12/15/08 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
Wow, I thought it was really sweet ! Sometimes it just doesn't make sense, that "Oh, I was held captive and (maybe) raped a few days ago, but I want you to fuck meee nooow !" thingy some people write.
But you explained exactly WHY Tom was feeling like being so close to Gustav, and how he was strong. So it wasn't weird at all ! Just .. Natural ^^
And, very sweet ! There's still left some confusion, and that is good. That way, it doesn't get so cheesy as i described before x)
Conclusion: You're still an awesome writer, and I loved this chapter ! :D < 3
(Oh, and I'm not being a pain in the ass, am I ?)
Author's Response: I know what you mean. One of my pet hates is when people write really unbelievable scenarios, it just turns me right off a story, so I try my hardest to write as realistic as possible. You all seem to think I am doing a good job of it so I'm happy. And you aren't a pain in the ass! I love your reviews! I know I'm greedy but the more reviews I get the more inspired (guilt tripped XD) I am to write. I'm surprised I've written so much, I expected to write my little two parter for Car Crash and leave it at that. But you guys fuel me to keep writing! So I do XD
Date: 12/15/08 09:32 am Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
I love it! It was totally unexpected for Tom to come in and make Gustav all melty instead of the other way around -- but I love to be surprised. It was very sweet and real *^^*
Author's Response: :P Thanks himisoko! I'm glad I could surprise you :)
Date: 12/15/08 07:56 am Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
u'r kiddin'!? it's perfect&great just the way it is right now, like this! so u just focus on the chapterz 2 come, wit' sum more meaningful, enticin' action... fantastic story, very realistic wit all the detailz u thoroughly include! luvin' it! u truly hav a knack 2 depict multi-faceted/angled characterz & situations, indepth, minute&appealin'! u make sure 2 keep at it, though u got quite the flow&prolific dfinitely is a central feature for dis fic. respect 4 dat&4 da top notch overall quality! Honestly, as far as I'm concernd, not a particular fan of the pairing g/t, howeva I'll admit I'm hookd&intrigued by dis! fabulous, 4 real! dare I b hopeful& xpect sum tension relief, sumthang 2 happen wit these 2 magnetically drawn yummies, cause da chemistry, as u describe it all, is gettin' 2 much 2 bear! u wouldn't want your faithful, highly appreciatin' readerz 2 malfunction waitin' 4 it, would u?!
Author's Response: O_o my GOD! This review is awesome! XD Thanks for all the cred and I'm ecstatic you like the fic so much! You made me want to write the next chapter all the more shadow so thank you heaps! As for the tension relief *rubs hands together and cracks knuckles* It is just around the corner, along with an interesting little surprise.
Date: 12/15/08 07:37 am Title: Chapter 07 - Self Control
*Bounces up and down*
AHHH!!!
YES!!
Okay, I saw that you changed the name and fixed the banner, so it matches.
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=bf5h0y&s=4
I loved this chapter and *dies* it was dedicated to me!!!
*sqirms* You know how to make a depressed girl happy!!!!
*hugs you like her life depended on it!!
Author's Response: OMG! I was so sad when I had to change the title and realised my banner wouldn't fit anymore :( But now it DOES!!! *Hugs more_than_dreams* Thank you! I love it even more now XD I really hope you like the next chappie, I just finished the first draft and should post it tonight.
Date: 12/11/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
I've seriously become one of your regulars. I'm really loving Gusti's home-dogs. Plus they pretty all gay...well sort of but anyway their freakin awesome. I was cracking up when Bill said that he would rape Gustav right there on the court. Lol. PLEASE KEEP ON UPDATING FOR THE LOVE OF TOM/GUSTAV LOVERS.
P.s. Please and Thank you!!~ :]
Author's Response: Who wouldn't rape Gustav on the court when he was looking hawt like that? XD And I'll update for you because of the please and thank you! I love manners XD
Date: 12/11/08 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
#37!!! C'mon, we're close! I want another chappie! Pwetty pwease?? *bats eyelashes and gazes hungrily at screen*
Author's Response: *sniggers* For you Mercutia I'll update without the whole 40 :)
Date: 12/11/08 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
GAAAAAHHHH! This better get enough reviews because this story is pure gold! Continuous Gusti love is very important to me! I would like to take the time to reiterate how much i love the way this is progressing! There were only a few times when there were mix up with names but the story on a whole is very interesting and hot! Please continue soon!
Author's Response: -_- I'm sorry for the name mix ups I don't mean to I swear! I re-read the chapters heaps I just over look the problems :( I should pull my finger out and get a beta.
Date: 12/11/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
I love this story! I wan't to know what happend too Tom (even thought I have some ideas)and are Bill and Tom twins in this?
anyways update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah I think it is rather obvious what happened to Tom, it just hasn't been said out loud yet :( Poor Tom. And no the twins aren't related in this. They are just people that met each other through Gustav. Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/11/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
This story is amazing I love it so much I love Gustav and Tom pairings so much and there really arn't that many out there so this is so good to read.
Author's Response: Thank My Tokio Romance this story is for them and they inspired me to keep writing it :)
Date: 12/11/08 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
I will review for ever if I have too
*dies over muscle bound gustav*
Author's Response: :P Muscle bound Gustav's for all! So long as I get the original! XD Thank you SOOOOOO much for the banner too! *LOVES!*
Date: 12/11/08 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
continue!!
Author's Response: XD Okay!
Date: 12/11/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
OMK OMK OMK, don't stop here!!!!! Go on!!! I love this, you're an awesome writer!!!
Author's Response: :) I like writing for you Magicirl379! You are the awesomes!!
Date: 12/11/08 11:59 am Title: Chapter 06 - Basketball and Sexuality
" Bill as you can obviously see is gayer than a Broadway musical." HAHA, that one cracked me up xD
Jesus Christ, FOURTY Reviews ? oO
Oh well, I say I count as ten . No wait, 17 ! :D
There, I'm happy ^^,
Haha, I must have eaten something weird today, acting like .. I don't know oO
Oh, yeah; loved the chapter ! :D You're so awesome < 3 And just because of that, I also think you deserve a little break ^^,
Till next time ! :D
Author's Response: I took a while to work out what the gayest thing I could think of was and I settled on Broadway (Sorry Broadway! I love your work!) Thanks for the break THistLeibe! Muchly appreciated :)