Date: 04/02/11 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it and what a nice brother Tom was. :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks! Tom's a great brother. I could use a brother like that. xD
Date: 07/19/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This make a lot more sense when I'm not exhaused.
Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad. Thanks for reading it again. :D
Date: 05/26/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I do like this! Very hot!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 12/10/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. It gets confusing between who's actually doing something and what Bill is fantasizing about. You might want to add a few words here and there to clear that up. But it’s delicious.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I understand what you're saying about the confusion, but it's actually meant to be that way. This is all Bill's pov, so we know what Bill sees, or thinks he sees. But we also know from the narrative that Tom never leaves his chair because that's where he is when he comes. I do appreciate that you said that, though. Thanks again :)
Date: 12/10/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
this was so so good.
I told you I read your stuff :)
write me a bill/tom/bushido for christmas haha.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked it. :)
I'm really blushing and feeling kinda silly, because I don't recognize your name. Did we talk on LJ and you have a different name? I'm sorry, I'll probably "Duh" hard when you tell me.
bill/tom/bushido.... damn, I want that for christmas, myself! lol
Date: 12/08/08 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1
That was hot !:)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/08/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow!! That's freakin' HOT :o :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 12/07/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
As much as I didn't want to enjoy it, I did. Though I cringed so god damn much!
I don't want to admit that it was hot, but it was, in a sick twisted het kind of way.
Tom made me smile in this, though I wish he had more of a part in in.
Still, it was proper fucking good.
Author's Response: How funny and jaded are we that we think het is sick and twisted? I wonder if it's only in this fandom or in others, as well. That made me laugh, though.
Thank you for reading it, even if it made you nervous. I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/07/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I hope I can take that as a good whoa. xD
Your Panik fics definitely provided the distraction I needed while I worked this out in my head. So I thank you for that, and thank you for this. :)
Good Whoa.. VERY good whoa..
*blushes* (small voice) you're welcome...
Author's Response: Sweet :D
*sets out more cookies and eggnog for your muse*
Date: 12/07/08 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
*fans self* Sheeeesh. That was...wooo. I loved the ending the most, although the sex was good too, haha. xD
Author's Response: You know what makes me just grin until my face hurts? The fact that all these girls on my favorite author list are reading this and loving it. Thank you so very much. :D
Date: 12/07/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
whoa... re-reads...
Whoa....
Author's Response: I hope I can take that as a good whoa. xD
Your Panik fics definitely provided the distraction I needed while I worked this out in my head. So I thank you for that, and thank you for this. :)
Date: 12/07/08 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Why is it always like that? It starts out as one thing in your head and as soon as you start writing, your fingers seem to go in another direction. Very weird. Anyway, this was very different and definitly hot. I think you should make a little sequal of the following morning ;)
Author's Response: I often talk to my husband about these boys just being willful; even in fic you can't tell them what to do.
Sequel? I don't know, but it seems there must be a story behind this episode. We'll see ;D
Thank you so much. I hope you know that your opinion means a lot to me. :)
Date: 12/07/08 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa--that was so good. I've kinda wondered why no one ever writes anything with Dunja or Nathalie--this was amazing. I love how Bill is imagining it's all Tom. Loved the whole thing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really love your work and it makes me really happy that you enjoyed this. :D
Date: 12/07/08 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I certainly recognise when characters live their own lives despite what you originally planned them to do, and I'm a little surprised that you wrote a 'het', but you pulled it off brilliantly.
Author's Response: I was a little surprised too, and I really waffled about doing it, but I'm glad I did. Thank you! :D
Date: 12/07/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh yes, I like it. The part in the beginning with Bill being turn on and Tom seeing it was incredibly erotic. I normally don't like het at all, but somehow, I didn't really think of this as het. ^.^ The part I'm a little confused by is were the twins... together, before this happened or was this just a one time thing? Sorry, my brain's not functioning properly today, I guess. Love this, anyway. :)
Author's Response: Hm...as to your question, I don't know. I think from Bill's reaction to the girls in the room, this was something new.
I'm really glad you liked it, het and all. It makes me giggle a little that so many girls don't think of this as het even though it was Nathalie fingering Bill and Dunja sucking him off. The twins are just so prominent, I guess.
Thank you so much, girl. I hope you know how much your opinion means to me. :D
Date: 12/07/08 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
It was even better than I thought it would be.
I like how you incorporate small details into the fic that a fan would know. If you were reading this and didn't really know about TH, it wouldn't matter, but you just slip small little bits in - I'm not even sure you realize you do it - that a fan would nod at and go "hah, that's just like the twins" or "I remember when Bill wore that!" Kinda makes the fic more interactive, which is good for us ADHD kids. Gotta stay focused :P
The twins' reactions to seeing Dunja and Nathalie kissing [especially Bill's!] were fantastic.
You captured the awkwardness of the twincest really well, too, but without taking away from the absolute eroticism of the fic.
And you also managed to make Tom the protective older brother without it being stereotypical or overbearing. I can appreciate subtlety.
I can't believe I read pseudo-het and liked it. O__O
Author's Response: I did say I was nervous about posting het, but as you said, it is more like pseudo-het. There's not nearly as much of the girls as I intended, but that's okay.
I'm happy you notice those details! I do it on purpose, yes, because I want the fan to feel that way, like really this could have happened because yeah, they really did look like that then. I guess it worked :p
Thank you so much for reading this. I'm so glad you liked it, it really means a lot to me that you do. :)
Date: 12/07/08 02:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh Holy Hell YES OO
You know what this would do to me!
Fucking useless panties…
Okay, so I am beyond pleased with this, it was amazing. Femmeslash is always welcome and somehow that feels even naughtier to read since we read boy on boy practically every day xD
And that you made it twincest…I love you, simple as that!
I’m trying to write some coherent thoughts here, but it’s really hard!
I think my favorite character in this was your Tom. He was sort of dangerous all through the fic, breathing on Bill’s neck, eyes darkening at Bill being hard, staring in the elevator…and watching...omi the watching! Oh, and I love it when his eyes are black ,)
Is it intentional that the story is posted as not finished? Two-shot or chaptered?
So, basically…I love you
I love the story, too of course, so, so much.
But I still love you more
Author's Response: Oh my girl! I couldn't wait for you to come read this! I really hoped you would like it, and I'm so glad you do. Well, I didn't write the twins with either of the other guys and make you cry, so it must be good, huh? lol
This wasn't as femmeslashy as I intended. There was to be much more Dunja/Nathalie, but it turned out not to be about them so I let it go. Odd how the twins take over, isn't it?
Tom was kinda hot...and when he was coming in the chair...now that we've seen him without his hat and his hair down...so much easier to see.
No, it's not chaptered or twoshot, I just goofed. Fixed now, though, thanks.
Thank you so much for this, Luce. You are always so supportive and good to me. Thank you for making me smile.
Love you so!
Date: 12/07/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so hot it's ridiculous. *wipes brow* This fandom could use more of you. ;)
Author's Response: Every time I try to respond, my words are just full of *flail* lol
I can't tell you how happy I am that you liked it. Your review really means a lot to me, and I thank you so very much. :)
Date: 12/07/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Dude, this was so freaking good. I usually cringe at het, but this was like...good. Amazing, great. Not a synonym for those words I can think of at the moment. Kudos, though, kudos.
Author's Response: I generally cringe at het too, but this wouldn't leave me alone.
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: 12/07/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so great! when Tom says "and for me" I just about squealed! Great fic.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! Thank you :)