Date: 02/19/08 03:25 pm Title: 04 - Good enough
tía, me has perdido ¿qué? Sorry, but I'm not ready for start to write. XD Así que te escribiré en español que es lo que más fácil se me da.
Te digo que me perdiste o yo me perdí, en todo caso, pero en que momento "consumed their love for the first time ever" T_T auxilio, pensé que Billa no decía nada. Sería interesante que me desenredaras un poco XD Sigo leyendo, si, eso.
Ammm See you XD
Date: 01/06/08 06:58 pm Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
amazing!!! more please
Date: 01/05/08 09:39 am Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
Aaawww... *cries like a waterfall*
That was so BEAUTIFUL...*_*
I really love it.. Tom is so sweet in that
letter.
Please continue soon. ^_^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, hun! <3
Date: 01/05/08 12:10 am Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
I LOVE this!! I LOVE YOU!!! This story is SO heartbreaking!! *0*
Update soon please!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much, honey. Hope I'll can update soon. I'm so so sorry it's taking that long *cries*
Date: 01/04/08 02:19 pm Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
aww
*drowns in my own tears*
BEAUTIFUL!
i neeed more NOW!
Author's Response: T.T Sorry that's taking me that long. But I need to put my ideas in order, so, would you mind if you have to wait a little bit more? *puppyeyes*
Date: 01/04/08 01:28 pm Title: 04 - Good enough
i dont get it cos in the last chapter they only apologised and now it seems like they have already admitted their love for each other!!:S??
Author's Response: No.. There's so much more, don't worry. It isn't finished yet! They can't only admit it! There's gonna be some trouble! D: Remember who's topping in here. Tomè! XD And, what do Tom (or well, he tells he do)? D: Just wait and see <3
Date: 01/04/08 01:27 pm Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
Aw poor Tom and Bill, this was sad, I like the way you included the letter from Tom to Bill, it was sweet.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. It was an idea from Silvia XD Anyways, I loved to write it <3 Thanks for reading hun, hope you'll wait 'til I'll post the next chapter (it's taking me so fucking long *cries*).
Date: 01/04/08 01:03 pm Title: 08 - A letter of feelings
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *-*
Author's Response: XDD
Date: 01/04/08 07:55 am Title: 07 - Where's the limit now?
Aww that's said T_T Will there be more?
Author's Response: Of course, there will, honey. <3
Date: 12/24/07 11:58 am Title: 07 - Where's the limit now?
I LOVE this!!! *dances*
Buen trabajo niña!!! Me gusta todo lo escribes!! XD Update soon please!!!
Author's Response: XD Ojalá T.T Thank you hun. I have to get some ideas *o* I'm out of it XD (And now I'm angry ¬¬ My sister, don't ask for. U.U
Date: 12/23/07 05:18 pm Title: 01 - Constant fights
oOo it's really good!! but silvia, i don't know if english is your first language or not, but there are still quite a lot of mistakes throughout the story, so maybe someone a bit better at english should look though it ^_^ sorry if that sounded a bit harsh, but it's just a bit of constructive criticism
Author's Response: Well, no Silvia's first lenguage it's italian, but now that we both have a beta, I asked her to beta my fic, so it's doesn't a problem anymore. Don't worry, I'm glad that you criticiced it ^_^ Thanks for reading, honey, hope you still read it *-*
Date: 12/23/07 11:55 am Title: 06 - Broken promises
I bet I am loool
Author's Response: <3
Date: 12/23/07 11:40 am Title: 07 - Where's the limit now?
I love it too! xD hell, we'll be cruel with Bill in the next chapter, do you agree?! *huge grin*
Author's Response: I'm always agree with you, schwester *grin*
Date: 12/23/07 11:36 am Title: 06 - Broken promises
Ohoh, you're my slave U.U xDDD
Author's Response: LOL You're my Godness! XD
Date: 12/23/07 11:32 am Title: 07 - Where's the limit now?
GUUUSTAAAAAAVVV!!!! I've always said he's a damage!! (xD) If he only didn't came... ooooh uff, now Bill's sad again ;[ I hope Tom will come and fix things.. let's see!
Author's Response: Yeah XD He's always in the middle. =.='' Anyway, the question is: How they'll going to fix it again? XD I'm devilish and I love it *giggles madly*
Date: 12/23/07 11:29 am Title: 06 - Broken promises
How come I didn't review this?! O.O *slapps herself* bwaa it's funny to see all people dying in anticipation and curiosity xDDD
Author's Response: Yeah, I missed your comments, hun XD Anyway, I don't blame you. And hell, yeah! I love when people wants to know more about the story =D Thank you hun for your corrections. You always safe my ass XD
Date: 12/11/07 11:36 am Title: 06 - Broken promises
Aww seems like Bill's at breaking point, I wander what's going to happen next? Update soon, this is really good :)
Author's Response: Yeah <3 And next chapter it's up. Sorry if that took that much, hun. Hope you like it =D
Date: 12/07/07 12:10 pm Title: 05 - Hide it, why?
Yeah, I think Bill is a bit overreacting, why don't let people know? It's.. a normal thing I believe.. but yes, he's the hysterical diva, so he has to behave like this lol poor Tom who has to stand him! I'm dead corious about how it will go on! Love ya, schwesta (L)
Author's Response: Yeah, but I think that Bill don't want that everybody could know that kind of things, though. XD Yeah, poor Tomi. The next it's on your hands now, schwester *-*
Date: 11/30/07 04:26 pm Title: 04 - Good enough
he was so thrilled to stay in the room with the same number of the one where he and Tom consumed their love for the first time ever, he still remembered every moment of that special night.
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Sorry, english is not my first language and maybe I understood this wrong but they had consumed they love?I mean....what?I thought Tom didn't even know Bill is in love with him.....how had they consumed their love?
Author's Response: I mean, not that kind of consumation, though. They could consume it in a brother's love way. Like tell to each other all about them that the other one don't know and stuff. Spend time with each other and be together it's a good way to consume the brotherly love though. I'm sorry if you understood in a wrong way and don't be sorry. English isn't my first lenguage too. So, don't apologize yourself for that. Thanks for your comment. Hope you keep reading me. Love ya.
Date: 11/30/07 04:01 pm Title: 04 - Good enough
Veeeeeery well done meine Schwester! Long lovely chapter, i loved it! Cuddling like you do xD in the next one, action like i do! promise? yeah, promise. love ya. keep going. i'll always support you. YOU STUPID PEOPLE, REVIEW U.U
Author's Response: Thanks hun, and I want to kill you -.-' there's a part of the fic that isn't well, though. Bill and Tom isn't together at the moment... Anyway, thanks for your support. You safe my ass XD You're the bossy beta-reader. And don't worry about the reviews, it's good enough for me. Ich liebe dich, schwester!