Date: 11/11/09 06:07 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
Yes, I would like for you to continue...please!
Date: 06/19/09 07:11 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
aww this is cute :]
i hope it does continue
Date: 04/07/09 10:24 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
Yes! idoidoidoidoidoido!!!
Date: 03/09/09 09:56 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
I do really want this to continue. I think it would be very interesting to read about Tom's journey from taking Bill for granted and assuming he'll always stay with him to realizing that Bill won't be there if he's not treasured. I really do want to read more.
Date: 01/05/09 03:43 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
i want this to continue!!! keep up the good work! =)
Date: 12/27/08 03:48 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
yes.
this chapter was kinda sad and I'm crying 'cause this is like the 8th angsty story I've read tonight and it's 3:47am so meh no clue why I'm rambling. but good story. ^-^.
Date: 12/16/08 10:08 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
i love it..... update!
Date: 12/09/08 12:51 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
I really liked this... the mood of the story was great. I'd like to see more of it, I think there are thing to explore yet.
Whatever you decide, thanks for a fun read!
Date: 12/06/08 08:02 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
please do!
Actually, I'm not that sure. It ended really well, but it does have potential for an extension so ... yeah I'm not sure.
Either way, I'll make sure to read if you do extend this story. --random --BTW I love your 'Summer Break' story --end of random--
Great work on this one ;)
Date: 12/06/08 02:54 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
ME ME ME!!!! i want it to continue!!! plz continue. it's like a cliffhanger almost. and i REALLY want it to continue
Date: 12/06/08 02:15 pm Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
please continue this. PLEASE!!! It's amazing. I love it and can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: 12/06/08 09:15 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
Oh my God...you have to continue this! This almost made me cry! You are soo good at capturing the emotions! Please continue!!!
Date: 12/06/08 04:48 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
I think it has potential and I really like the concept. I don't really see where you could go with it to continue, but if you do, I would strongly suggest a beta, just to smooth some things out. Like this: "When he saw Tom’s face on the TV he became a bit more interested in what was on the TV. However, when he found out that it was another story on Tom’s numerous one night stands, he angrily turned off the TV." You used TV three times in two sentences, and it kind of interrupts the flow of the story, you know?
Date: 12/06/08 03:52 am Title: Is This How We Say Goodbye?
yep, want more!