Date: 04/30/23 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 08/27/14 07:07 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this story, but I wish you had left the translations for the German parts, I don`t know the German language all that well, only English right now.
Date: 09/26/12 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
was pleasing to read :)
Date: 12/21/11 07:05 am Title: Chapter 4
THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD STORY!
I AM SAD THAT IT IS OVER!
Date: 06/10/09 10:07 am Title: Chapter 4
awwww yay tho i wanna kno what happened to the guy lolz
Author's Response: Haha! I SO never thought about that when I wrote it. Hmm. . . .Well, after Tom hit him and took off with Bill, Geo hunted him down and killed him. The body is buried in your backyard XD
Date: 06/09/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
Beautiful. I love how Bill was so shy and nervous, and didn't jump in, guns blazing. It makes it more believable, that way.
I'm loving this!
Author's Response: *Hides* So embarassing that you read this
Date: 06/09/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so odd, like finding an out of print book in a musty old store! I mean, this is an EARLY fanfic for you. I'm so happy to see it!
Author's Response: It's SO old it's crazy. Like, December it went up. Wow. I figured since I've got block for Fightin' And Trouble, I'd reformat the story. God, it's so terrible XD
Date: 03/03/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! syn u write beautifuly! I love it how fluid it is! really! n it was just so cute, also Tom's translation just so funny!
Author's Response: Aww thanks hun!
Date: 02/16/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
xD Loved it :D I can't do the gangsta thingy either xP Thanks for the dictionary ;)
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: You are very welcome XD
Date: 12/17/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
lol. Just tell me what you want translated from proper english into ghetto slang and I'll see what I can do.
Date: 12/13/08 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
lol. Tom isn't really all that...Ghetto personality wise in real life. But you portrayed ghetto well enough. But since it is YOUR story you can make Tom as ghetto as you want. lol.
Author's Response: I noticed he wasn't really all that ghetto whatching videos of them and stuff, I just thought it would be fun to make him a little moreso. However, I had absolutely nothing to go off of while trying to write it. Any suggestions or anything would be VERY helpful on my other story, Lost. It involves more ghettoness than I know what to do with XD
Date: 12/13/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes it pays to have friends who think they're ghetto. Hehe.
Author's Response: I don't have any friends who are ghetto (or want to be). My translator used to teach ghetto kids, but thats about it. Did I portray Tom right? Was he all ghetto enough or too ...normal?
Date: 12/04/08 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I understand ghetto slang...lol. No need for a dictionary for me.
Author's Response: You're lucky! I may call on you if my translator goes missing *grins*
Date: 12/03/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
sorry for the second review, but I forgot to add a few things.
maybe you could make a sequel? that'd be really cool. but cut down the chapters a little, haha. XDD <3 like, a sort of series? it'd be so fun :) :) :) I'd love it to bits. I love ghetto Tom.
and yeah, I totally understood what I wrote. I live in the ghetto-est place ever. in the projects, man. das mah hood, G.
sorry for spamming up the review box, haha. I just had to add it. :P
Author's Response: No, I don't think I'll be making a sequel. However, since you asked so nicely and since you love ghetto Tom so much, I've decided to write a seperate little 12 fic series. Just for you XDrnrnAnd yes, with cut down chapters *grins*
Date: 12/03/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aiight G, lemme give you da 411. dis shizz is tight, n i aint gunna diss nothin bout it, cause its so hood. damn straight. Tom be mah pimp, n Billa is like his little hoochie chick. Bill be bangin. so trip, G. so, so trip.
aiight G, I gotta fly, hit me up on a review.
XDDDDDDDDDDD
just kidding. I totally loved it, dude. haha, it was seriously long and I would've suggested perhaps cutting it up into a few chapters (2 chappies isn't bad), but other than that it was gutt. :)
Author's Response: Aha! I totally had to get my friend to translate that. (Random side note from my translator: El says: WHOOT! My peeps!). You know, if you actually understood everything you said. . . wow. I am totally impressed. *grins*rnrnI did consider cutting it down, but the one I had checking it over said it was fine the way it was. I'm glad you liked it though.
Date: 12/03/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1
FUKK THAT WAS HAWT!!!!!
I would space the big clumped paragraphs out a bit more, but other than that it was genious!! Really sexy!!
Author's Response: *Grins* I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for the advice.
Date: 12/03/08 02:34 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.....i only know some ghetto....i still wonder watt fo' shizzle meant.....OH WELL!!!!!! this was good. d:)
Author's Response: Apparently, fo' shizzle means yes, or for sure . . . It's waay over my head, so I hope it makes sense to you *grins*