Date: 09/23/12 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is so unfair to say that at the end of a fic!!!!!! If they're not done, then the fic's not done, in my opinion. Other than that, amazing job. One grammatical error I noticed was that you didn't put periods at the end of the last sentence in a paragraph. Other than that, the grammar was excellent, and the spelling even better.
Date: 02/26/10 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
SO good!!!! Very hot, sexy, and detailed.
Date: 12/29/07 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
the first person narrative threw me for a second, but this fic is still hot. Great job.
Author's Response: Thankyou very much :)
Date: 11/28/07 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so hot ... My God i need to calm down!! You made a really great job!!!!
Author's Response: im so glad it was liked :)
Date: 11/27/07 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Unbelievable hot!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much for reviewing :)
Date: 10/31/07 08:08 am Title: Chapter 1
*takes a cold shower* Eeey!! (;
Author's Response: glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/09/07 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was. amazing.
Author's Response: I might possibly be working on a sequel ;)
Date: 10/09/07 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was. amazing.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)