Date: 12/31/08 11:40 am Title: 32. Scream
Awww I love this ending
Date: 12/31/08 11:35 am Title: 32. Scream
awwwww that was so cute yeah their shoulds be a sequel
Date: 12/31/08 03:48 am Title: 32. Scream
The End??? NOOOO NOO!!!! I want more!!
I love your story so don't end it!!
Date: 12/31/08 03:15 am Title: 32. Scream
AWWWWWWWWWW
Date: 12/31/08 02:47 am Title: 10. Forever
So no offence, but this all sounds seventh grade to me.
Date: 12/31/08 02:40 am Title: 10. Forever
The fact that they took the same car is going to come up and be a problem with Bills dad later isnt it.
Date: 12/31/08 12:23 am Title: 32. Scream
Awwwww XD perfect.
Sequel.??Hmm YESSSSS OMGOSHHHH YES DO IT WHEN GRAY IS OLDER =D
Date: 12/30/08 11:38 pm Title: 32. Scream
CUUUUUUUUUTE!... Um.. Ifeel like it needs a squel It needs one -nods-
Date: 12/30/08 11:19 pm Title: 32. Scream
Yes I think there should be a sequel...That was a cute ending...
Date: 12/30/08 11:14 pm Title: 31. Scars
i liked the chapter, the only part i would change would be at the beginning. You said that Bill used the bathroom and ate, it kinda sounds like he's a dog and not a person. It was great other then that!
Date: 12/30/08 11:11 pm Title: 32. Scream
aw! i like that name grey. im sad to see this be finshed but it ended very sweet.
Date: 12/30/08 10:42 pm Title: 31. Scars
Hey, is there gonna be a sequal?
Author's Response: that depends on what the readers say, but there is a squel in the works though.
Date: 12/30/08 10:16 pm Title: 31. Scars
wowzers baby time whoope
Date: 12/30/08 08:49 pm Title: 31. Scars
omg hurry and update...
Date: 12/30/08 07:58 pm Title: 31. Scars
yes here comes baby
Date: 12/30/08 06:40 pm Title: 31. Scars
OMG....Its baby time...
Date: 12/30/08 05:25 pm Title: 1. About A Girl
omg the baby is coming!!!!!!
Date: 12/30/08 04:50 pm Title: 31. Scars
YAY!!! BABY TIMEEEE!!!! =)
now you have to hurry and update!! i wanna see this baby, i hope everything goes alrightt