Date: 12/17/08 07:17 am Title: 14. Shameless
:D more more more more
-sends you cookies in the post-
update?
Author's Response: Cookies, cookies, cookies. I like cookies. :)
Date: 12/17/08 12:57 am Title: 14. Shameless
OMG 0_0
Why dose it fells like Bill gone regret this?
Give me more
Date: 12/17/08 12:31 am Title: 14. Shameless
u will regret it billa.....
Date: 12/16/08 10:45 pm Title: 14. Shameless
Wow now you got me wondering whats gonna happen next...
Date: 12/16/08 10:11 pm Title: 14. Shameless
MORE ..... -runs around -
Date: 12/16/08 09:29 pm Title: 14. Shameless
NICE. This has serious potential.
Author's Response: thank you. :)
Date: 12/16/08 04:06 pm Title: 13. Hit The Floor
If Tom hurts Bill his dead!!!
Yor story is very good and I want more :)
Date: 12/16/08 11:31 am Title: 13. Hit The Floor
WOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! but seriously tomi, u dont just go and have sex w/ someone that u just found out has been raped!!! is he retarded or something?!?!?!?!....d:)LOVE!!
Date: 12/16/08 11:29 am Title: 12. Gossip
tomi is all too calm for just finding out his boifriend is being raped by his dadi....
Date: 12/15/08 03:46 pm Title: 12. Gossip
Awww Tom is such a sweet heart.
Date: 12/15/08 11:53 am Title: 12. Gossip
wow cant believe he just blurted out wow add the next chappie bitte
Date: 12/15/08 11:27 am Title: 12. Gossip
i'm going to a very mean critic rigth now
your story has so much potential to be realli gud but its really cliche, un-beta-ed and your chpater names have nothing to do with the content of the chapter...i also feel that things were really rushed in this relationship and that there is no suspense in this sotry at all...if you work on it,this stiry could be excellent but rigth now i give it 4/10
Date: 12/15/08 07:57 am Title: 12. Gossip
it kind of got there too quickly... bill just randomly bursts into tears...
but good chappie, cant wait for the next
Date: 12/15/08 05:20 am Title: 1. About A Girl
AAAAAA, love it
Date: 12/15/08 01:18 am Title: 12. Gossip
Awww Tom so sweet Yay for Tom *give him a new cap =D*
Im glad Bill told him
cant wait for more! =D its amazing
Date: 12/15/08 12:10 am Title: 12. Gossip
okey no Bill's dad is dead!!!!!!!!!
I kill him!!!
calm down Felicia........ ok im calm agin :) KILLLLLLLL HHHHHIIIIIIMMMMMMM
Oki I love you story so give me more NOW!
Date: 12/14/08 11:52 pm Title: 12. Gossip
Can something extreamly violent like happen??
all in all really good! :D cant wait.
Date: 12/14/08 12:31 am Title: 11. Fight Like This
its really happy, and nice :D
but things change right?
Date: 12/14/08 12:19 am Title: 11. Fight Like This
Noooooo! Twilight SO should've been the answer!!