Date: 12/26/08 06:37 pm Title: 27. I Write Sins Not Tragdies
oooooooooooooooo shit well atleast bill can be in peace now but why did he chase jorg?
Date: 12/26/08 06:26 pm Title: 27. I Write Sins Not Tragdies
Ahh!! D:
This reminds me of the "all these things i hate" video by Bullet For My Valentine 100%.. lol ^_^
Date: 12/26/08 02:14 am Title: 26. Dear Maria, Count Me In
i hate the word "Boner" lol. XP
and you begged and pleaded for me to read it, so rawr. I thought I would be nice and read it as a christmas present. lol
and I see you read Part 10 to Say it aint so =3
Author's Response: of course i did, when he finds out fer sure that he's pregger i'll stop.
Date: 12/26/08 12:13 am Title: 26. Dear Maria, Count Me In
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/25/08 11:47 pm Title: 26. Dear Maria, Count Me In
lolz=]..plz update soon, lolz=]
hurry
merry christmas i luvz u=]
hurry thx=]
Date: 12/25/08 11:19 pm Title: 1. About A Girl
how cute! =] love it now more please
Date: 12/25/08 09:53 pm Title: 26. Dear Maria, Count Me In
Nice...
Date: 12/25/08 03:19 pm Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
Yesh! Tomi came around!
Date: 12/25/08 01:13 pm Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
finally tomi came around
Date: 12/25/08 04:08 am Title: 1. About A Girl
Now, for an actual review. lol
You shouldn't make the characters so blunt. lol like during the pre-sex scenes, they need to act on instinct, not by asking questions. lol
and add more DETAIL!! XD
it jumps from i like to i love, explain how it happens, and get inside the characters head a little more. :D It makes it easier for the reader.
okay, Tomi, i love you to death so don't be mad at me XD
and there you go, i read your story. XD
Merry Christmas.
Author's Response: Umm though you would NEVER read a Billpreg.
Date: 12/25/08 04:04 am Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
Merry fucking Christmas.
D:< I read it.
lol
Date: 12/25/08 02:51 am Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
d:)
Date: 12/24/08 06:59 pm Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
Good boy Tom, thank God Bill won't have to do it alone.
Date: 12/24/08 05:25 pm Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
yay Tom came around =D
lets hope the baby is good
Date: 12/24/08 05:10 pm Title: 25. Scream Aim Fire
more more more much more
Date: 12/24/08 03:56 am Title: 24. Lovely
TOM IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!! SO DEAD!!!!!!!!!!! DEAD DEAD!!!
And I love your story so give me more please :)
Date: 12/24/08 01:12 am Title: 24. Lovely
ughh. so im panning on killing tom? good? :)
awesome job! very well written and every chapter it gets more suspenseful which makes me want more :P
Date: 12/23/08 10:29 pm Title: 24. Lovely
=O I am appaled at Thomas.
*smacks his head* tisk tisk. Hes gonna get it. And how come hes not helping Bill with Bills father! =O Very upset.
Cant wait for moree, see what Bill does =D
Date: 12/23/08 10:03 pm Title: 24. Lovely
Tomi is being a major bitch. He should know Bill wouldn't do anything like that to him