Date: 12/02/08 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
could never be undone (haunting!); had been taken straight out of its metaphysical meaning and thrown into reality kicking and screaming (this line is awesome!); He tried tipping it upside down, maybe the answers would fall out then, that didn’t work. (funny!); The more Bill moaned, the more Tom wanted him (set me over the edge! ohhh); aahhh it was sweet. I liked it a lot simple and totally lemon!
Date: 12/01/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG! I loved it sooo much! It was amazing!
Date: 11/30/08 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1
:) so hot, the last line is so sweet. The bit with the gay mag was funny and there's a good bit of angst in it :)
Date: 11/30/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
awww it was sweet i loved it the gay mag. was funny and how Tom just kinda went up 2 Bill and straddled him kinda i loved it
Date: 11/29/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked the progression but it was a little less clear near the middle after they sobered up. still good job.
Date: 11/29/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so hot! 0.o
And the last line was so cute!
Date: 11/29/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy friggen goodie-baskets! That was so Hawt I think I'm gunna' need some ice cubes and some really cole water to stick my head in.
Author's Response: NYA :3 fank yoo!!