Date: 12/06/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 4
alright that one wasnt even fair, i didnt even see the end of this one coming, it just snuck up.lol. i loved this chapter... cant wait to read more!!
Date: 12/05/08 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
i hope they dont wreck!
DX
XD
updateee soon!~
:)
Date: 12/05/08 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4
update sooon please!!
i love it!!!!
more more!!!
Date: 12/04/08 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
YAY Tom and Bill are goin somewhere!!! Wonder where!
Date: 12/04/08 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
TOM, JUST ACCEPT IT, GOTDAMNIT!!!
Date: 12/04/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Whoa, u flipped da script LOL! When I saw the banner, I was like 'Bill's the saint and Tom's the sinner.' And now I get that you meant to show how Tom was a bum and Bill was a high-class gangsta! Kudos for pulling a fast one on me LOL!
Date: 12/04/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
*wants to cry* NOT TOM!!!! Seriously...I want to cry.
Date: 12/04/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
keep it comin!
Date: 12/04/08 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
*accent* I VANNA knKnknknnooooowwww!!! *dies*
Date: 12/03/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is going to turn into a really good story!! i cant wait to read more!!!!
Date: 12/03/08 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Look ıf he doesn't give a handout and do something good then he wants something back isn't he so what is it? got it?
Date: 12/02/08 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
ah and the plot is coming together ...
keep it comin!
Date: 12/02/08 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill seems so nice.
And I think tom might be over analyzing everything a bit.
Great Update! :3
More soon?
Date: 12/02/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Crappppp....
this is GOOD!
I want more.
and soon.
Im pushy and WILL use force if nessicary.
so.
Please?.
Date: 12/02/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 3
If Bill don't offer a handout so what does he want sex, free muscles, man power?
Author's Response: Huh?rnI don't understand what your talking about.rnWhat does sex, free muscles and man power have to do with handouts?rnAnd more importantly what does sex, free muscles and man power have to do with Bill in this story?rnI'm really confused by your comment =[
Date: 12/02/08 07:10 am Title: Chapter 3
The story has potential, but you really need a beta.
Date: 11/30/08 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ha aw cute. xD
Poor tom.
Bill is mean-ish.
Great update!
more soon?
Date: 11/30/08 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2
:o Holy shit, who'd have guessed Bill was the sinner... Well well well, I wanan see how it goes, if Bill helps Tom out or not ;)
Date: 11/29/08 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
So tom is the innocent one and bill is the sinner...