Date: 08/16/09 03:47 am Title: Struggles
awww i hope her father doesnt die...that was a great chapter i cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 07/20/09 01:01 am Title: Struggles
Poor Mara...so much tragedy in her life. Please let Bill rescue her from her misery! Till the next update!
Author's Response: i know!! i'm so cruel. =[rn
Date: 06/28/09 05:17 am Title: Bad News
oh, ummm for my reponse under this, "that" as in the "WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME" thing i told you in the comment before that...LOL not the meet-and-greet pregnant thing w/ Tom.... haha
Author's Response: hahaha yeah i assumed u were talking about the other thing. and here's a collective YAY to everything you just said: YAYYYYY!!! xDD lol i'll admit though that saying 'i'm pregnant...and it's your fault' to somebody would break the ice, but since i'm not sure it would be the correct way to break the ice i'd never do it. lol. but whatever floats ur boat!!
Date: 06/28/09 05:15 am Title: Bad News
*sob* AWWWHHH!!! Poor Mara!!!! And Bill didn't seem mad...YAY!!! I'm so glad!! I can never understand why people get instantly mad when somebody confesses about a revenge plan that they couldn't go through with, cause its not as if they actually DID it! I can TOTALY relate to this much more then if Bill was instantly like, "OMG YOU BETRAYED ME" and so on. But that pregnant thing is still making me laugh...Yes, i definitely must do that sometime in the future. HAHA who knows, maybe at a meet-and-greet ill do it to Tom! LOL probably not, but that'd be HILARIOUS to see what he'd act like!! Oh, and yes, i did actually do that x] And im NEVER doing it again...But it was sorta funny to see peoples faces. To make it even worse, my ex-boyfriend was there as well, and he was staring at me with an open mouth....LOL, i pretty much died. Oh, and YAYYYY!!!! Chase and her are back to being friends!! OR on the road to recovery!! HEHEHEH:D Thanks for the update!!! As you probably know, every fiber in my being is craving more, and the longing is making me go slightly insane, so...PUHHHLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE MOAAARRR!
Date: 06/28/09 12:38 am Title: Bad News
i liked it although the whole story with marcus sounds a little fishy he prolly caused the accident..lol jk...i hope bill forgives her really though
Author's Response: lol i know right? we'll have to see about that. aww well just wait and see. i'll try not to make the wait as long :D
Date: 06/27/09 10:58 pm Title: Bad News
Aww, it's okay. This isn't melodrama, it's a moment of explosive emotions. Far different from melodrama which is continuous moments of explosive emotions to the point it gets annoying.
Author's Response: haha yeah i guess you're right. i'm just hesitant over any type of explosive emotion since i'm a totally emotionless person. lol jk.
Date: 06/27/09 09:46 pm Title: Bad News
:((( Hurry up and update!!!
Author's Response: i'll do my best =]
Date: 06/27/09 09:32 pm Title: Bad News
O:
I love the update.
absoultely speechless.
Pleeeeeeeeease more soon? :3
I'll give you a virtual cookie (cause unfortunately i can't give it to you in person)......? :D
Author's Response: of course there will be more! and indeed i will take the virtual cookie. can it be chocolate chip??
Date: 06/27/09 06:23 pm Title: Bad News
I wonder what Bill is gonna say, and what's gonna happen with Mara now...
Author's Response: dun dun dun!! lol
Date: 06/27/09 05:35 am Title: Secrets=Trouble
OMG..........What??? xDDD
I was expecting this huge scream off and and and...........what???
lol Is she really?
Or was it just the rush of the moment?
Amazing update!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease more soon! :3
Author's Response: xDDD i actually kind of fought with myself over the end of this chapter. i was like: should i? maybe not...but maybe i should! lol. well u'll find out next chapter which i'll hopefully finish today!! =]
Date: 06/23/09 09:37 am Title: Secrets=Trouble
BWAHAHAHAHAAAAH! I just read this for the 19th time, and i still think its hilarious! OMG its now my goal to do that!! ...But ive already gone up to a random guy at my school and yelled, "WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME?? WE HAD SOMETHING TOGETHER? i had YOUR CHILD!!" Ive regretted it ever since, i swear....god, me and him STILL arent on speaking terms! aahhh, welll, now that i've shown you a bit of my dark and troublesome past [HAHAHHAHHHH QUOTEQUOTE!] you MUST update! Seriously! *whimpers* im going CRAZY!!! reading over and over, giggling at random times, already thinking of new ways to get huiliated...etc! HEEHEHEHEHEE so funny, so, so funny!
Author's Response: hahaha u actually did that? girl, u have some guts! lol. btw, i've been having the worst day and u just cheered me up. thanks AGAIN x] i'll write as fast as i can for you ;D
Date: 06/20/09 02:18 am Title: Secrets=Trouble
wow yea i really wasnt expecting that at all but i love the twist and i wonder how she is going to fix that...hey they didnt have sex though did they...or maybe shes thinking about tom when she says that...lol who knows
Author's Response: xDD haha yep it's all a mystery at the moment =]
Date: 06/17/09 11:38 pm Title: Secrets=Trouble
woah.
that was SO unexpected!!
ahh!!
hurry :]
Author's Response: =DDD u made me a happy camper. i will!
Date: 06/17/09 04:42 pm Title: Secrets=Trouble
:O :O WHAATT??????? MOre please!!!
Author's Response: i'll write as soon as i can!! =]
Date: 06/16/09 11:44 pm Title: Secrets=Trouble
OMG ROFL!!!!!!!LMFAO LOLOLOLOL ROFLROFLROFLROFRLFORLFOROFL THATS SOOOO FUCKING FUNNY!!! FUNNIEST THING EVER!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!! omg. I WANT MOAARRRR PLEEEEEEASSSSEEEE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREEEE PLEEEAAASSEEEEE!!!! *holds up picture of Bill pouting right after a shower* For him??? PLEASE???
Author's Response: lmfaoooo did you notice how ur reviews go through a transformation? first u loved the idea of revenge, but now u hate it. but that's what i wanted to happen so it's all good x] lolll let me just tell u ur awesome for reviewing so much. do NOT stop. xDD i'll do the best i can!
Date: 06/16/09 11:31 pm Title: Uselful Secret?
*sob* i dun like revenge anymore!!! its so--so-----SUSPENSEFUL!! *dies* noo, dont let Mara ruin him... *choked, strangled cry* PUUHLEAAAAAAAAASSSEEE!!!!
Date: 06/16/09 10:53 pm Title: One After the Other
omg...Well, youve definitely shown how fame changes people *sob* LOL i LOVE LOVE LOVE it!! And a tiny bit of hate towards Tom, but other then that, im just a big, fuzzy love machine HEHE
Date: 06/16/09 10:41 pm Title: Nothing 'Driver' About it. You're Just Screwed.
EEEEEEP ROFL!!! ROFLROFLROFLROFL!!!! RUN MARA RUN!!!!!!! I guess she's not the only one getting revenge LOL
Date: 06/16/09 10:28 pm Title: That's What You Get
HO HO HOOO!!!! REVENGE IS ON ITS WAY!!! IM SO PHSYCED! HUZZAH FOR REVENGEE!!!
Date: 06/16/09 10:17 pm Title: Chance Encounter
hehehehe TURN WHEELS TURN!!!